Listening Closely (School Days)

After reading it, I wanted to write down my readers' thoughts, and suddenly realized that this was the author's early work. The author was probably still a student when he wrote this article, and his writing style is a bit immature. Judging from the setting of the short story, as a reader, I feel that the author wants to express too much, the plot is too sparse and cumbersome, and it feels like a running account. Moreover, the number of words assigned to each scene is roughly the same, there is no focus, and the priority is not clear. It can be seen that there is a lot to express, but this writing method always feels that it is not suitable for short stories and is more suitable for long narratives. The ending was also very abrupt, probably because there was no foreshadowing for the second female lead's relationship, and there was no trace to be found. The sudden confession confused me. Judging from the previous plot, they have been cautious and secretly in love with each other for many years. They are afraid of losing each other so they dare not reveal even a little bit of their feelings. Why did you suddenly confess your love without caring about it? Aren't you afraid that the friendship of more than ten years will be lost? ? Ah, that's a bit unreasonable. Finally, I wish you better and better

? The development of the short story was really unexpected