The Heart of a Lord Is Hard to Read

After reading this, I will write a small review. I hope the author will forgive me if something is wrong. The story line and emotional line are all complete. The background is clear and the story pattern is relatively large, not limited to the love between son and daughter. I have always felt that be is more difficult to write. On the one hand, it tests writing skills, and on the other hand, readers generally have higher requirements for be than he. Qin Ci, as the only child of the previous emperor and a woman, was the beginning of all tragedies. From the time she was born, her life was destined to be nothing more than a stepping stone for her younger brother, paving the way for him. When a new emperor takes office, the greatest threat is to senior officials, which is not conducive to the stability of the new court. The previous emperor wanted to clear obstacles for the new emperor without tarnishing his own reputation, so he resorted to such a cunning maneuver. Using Qin Ci's feelings for Li Jiu as a threat, he forced Qin Ci to make the knife. The story progresses reasonably. The only thing I don't quite understand is that the history books after Qin Ci's death commented on her as "killing decisively to eliminate the old party and break the old rules". This is obviously mostly praise. So the emperor was so lonely in this operation? Isn't Qin Ci the scapegoat? It's not just this one thing in the history books that he has memorized. Otherwise, he could have done all these bad things by himself. In terms of writing style, it would be great if the emotions could be written more delicately so that I could empathize more. Just like Qin Ci's death, it was too ordinary. Qin Ci's life was a tragedy. In politics, as a stepping stone for her younger brother, she was kind-hearted by nature. Her hands were indeed stained with the blood of innocent people, and she slaughtered all loyal people. I thought this guilt and unwillingness would torture him until he died. In terms of status, regardless of merit or demerit, the death of the king of a country should be a matter of mourning for the whole country. Even if it is not good, all the concubines in the harem should gather in the palace and cry. This is the way an emperor should die. I think this layout can be expanded upon, otherwise it would be a bit ordinary and not worthy of her status. Another example is that Li Jiu's reaction when she learned that Qin Ci was dead was "brows furrowed" and "absent". These words are a bit pale. Qin Ci was the person she loved most and the person who slaughtered her whole family. I thought the emotions here should be very complicated. It could be madness, heart-wrenching and unwilling to live, or it could be almost indifferent "it's better to die, she deserves to die". Here, we can give her an ending, which can be considered a beginning and an end. She can die together or go crazy. This ending always felt like something was missing.

It's not too much to send you a blade, right?

There is a missing word, the one in white sitting in front of the mirror

After reading this article, the only feeling I have is that it is uncomfortable╯╰. It is simply too miserable. Although this is a short article, I have to say that it is one of the most sadistic articles I have ever read. The most ruthless emperor's family, the author really shows this sentence to the extreme. I had the urge to beat Qin Xun to death, revive him, beat him to death, and revive him again countless times, so that he could also experience the feeling of death. But I still want to complain about Qin Ci, one of the protagonists of this article. Qin Ci was canonized as the crown prince at the age of ten. Although she has always been Qin Xun's pawn, has she really had no power at all in the past 13 years? The prime minister and other ministers she was forced to kill were all loyal. From the text, it can be seen that there are only a few treacherous ministers in the court. The ministers were killed mainly because of their high merits. So how powerful was Qin Xun in controlling Qin Ci, and what kind of powerful means did he use to force her to kill so many loyal ministers? Are you using Jiu'er to force you? Poison and alcohol coercion? She can obviously develop her own power and does not have to obey Qin Xun's orders. No matter how powerful a person is, she is not invulnerable in the face of many forces. But her overall performance gives me the feeling of cowardice, yes, cowardice. She does not have the courage to confront Qin Xun. If it is because of Jiu'er, I think she should not be like this, and even put her seal on the innocent person's reminder. , Let alone such an extremely cruel thing as giving your loved one a whole family! She obviously has a chance! All in all, I was heartbroken when I saw it, and I could only sigh. The above is just a personal complaint, I hope the author will not take any blame.

This, this, this, this ending is too tragic, right?