[Western Crossover] When I Speak, You All Die

As a reader two years later, I just want to say to the angry speeches of my friends, think about the Hulkbuster armor, the kryptonite weapon that Batman always carries in his belt, and the plan nth power of all superhero weaknesses. The greater the ability, the greater the possibility of irreversible consequences if out of control. As a mature superhero, he will definitely have a backup plan. The responsibility on them is too heavy. Even if they are close friends and comrades, there is nothing wrong with doing so. To sum up, the later part of the article is the process of humanizing the protagonist. After having seven emotions and six desires, the protagonist suddenly loses his relatives and is betrayed by his friends, which makes the protagonist deeply aware of his separation from human beings. His grievances and incomprehensions are conveyed to the readers so that they can empathize with him. This does not mean that the character arrangement is unreasonable. In fact, the biggest problem is that the emotional development of Captain America is a bit abrupt, and the sudden "confession" has an OOC absurd feeling.

To be sure, this article is actually great, but there were a lot of comments in the comment area at the beginning... The comments from emm readers were not very good. As a reader who originally likes to read comments, I can only say that if you don't touch your own surprises when reading the article, just read on. Don't read the comment area.

Um, how should I put it, the team brain will definitely prepare internal defense means. This is an inherent setting of American comics. Among them, the old bat, the leader, is too much, and the boss and other things are also in good contact. A pile of iron cans and anti-armor did not affect the friendship of the team. After all, if a person with super powers takes protecting the earth as their own responsibility, they must consider the risks of losing control. In other words, this strategy has more advantages than disadvantages. But!!! This thing can really solve a lot of problems if you can tell it in advance (thump the ground). People with good brains can't open their mouths to speak. Are you angry? Control freaks like Tie Heba really open their mouths and have a new and beautiful life!! And if the defense methods are well informed, if one day the villain masters this method, everyone will know where and whose thunder is. Don't gourd baby to save grandpa. The Tower of Babel is a real lesson in blood and tears. Please remember it better. I'm worried to death.

Steve: It feels like life has been fast forwarded

Woo woo woo woo... I want to cry when I see the difference in life span between Warren and Captain.

To be honest, the anti-XX plan (including this "cage") has practical significance (to deal with mind control and the like). But if I don't know it, this is a huge thunder.

It feels like the male protagonist has been induced to a point that I can't understand. I really can't understand why the male protagonist is so generous. No one the male protagonist knew told him, "The person you trust the most made a weapon against you, and it is wrong to restrict your freedom." Instead, they all said, "Even if we hurt you, we are just protecting ourselves, and we love you too." This issue has obviously been discussed in the comics - Iron Can made AI to defend the earth in order to deal with officials (and then the AI ​​was influenced by bad guys and turned into a powerful weapon against itself.) Then Captain America stood up and accused Iron Can, a weapon that might restrict freedom. However, this time it is clear that Captain America has really restricted the freedom of the male protagonist, so he admits it? Isn't this racial discrimination?

The writing is very smooth! Thanks to the author for this story. Since the comment section mentioned the similarity of the setting of the super heroine, I wondered whether the heroine at the end of the movie could be regarded as the same type as Warren in this article. 23333

I really can't accept this kind of betrayal and then easy forgiveness!!! No matter what excuse you use, this is betrayal!!! Why is betrayal always acceptable as long as there is a reason? I'm not saying that they should split up or anything, but at least they should come up with an attitude. The male protagonist attacks himself before he sees their attitude??? What are these!

What a disappointing article... The first part is so good, but the second part is so exciting... I feel like the author didn't control the tone of the article well. The male protagonist who was mentioned in the front as a charlatan (you wrote it yourself in the story) turned out to be very frustrating later on. "Growing up" is good. The male protagonists of many novels will grow up in the novel. The problem is that "forced growth" is very annoying. I think there is no problem with emotional mysophobia, and there is no problem with wanting others to trust me wholeheartedly. He has not hurt anyone. The author said that the protagonist is emotionally naive and needs to learn to compromise in the adult world. We all know this, but this is a novel, why can't we make him happier? The reality is already cruel, why can't you let your "shady" male protagonist continue to be "childish"? Adults can be conceited in dealing with others, but they can also be "childish" emotionally, right? There's no need to use a big mallet to smash him into a boxy adult... The protagonist at the end of this article shouldn't be considered to have grown up, but to have compromised, right?