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It's all a mess... Nothing is explained clearly... Speechless

What role does the cousin's role play? Messy

An article I recently scanned I was very excited when I first read it because the writing was very similar to my type of food. As I read it bit by bit, I discovered many problems in the writing... The most superficial point is that it is a bit of a deceptive character... The copywriting says that he is a cold fairy, but in the text I really didn't see that Lu's nature is cold. As for Zhou's character, I didn't understand her character clearly until the end. When the two of them interacted, it seemed a bit awkward and deliberate. What follows is my more subjective opinion, which may sound... Unpleasant? Apologize hereqeq I feel that the author er does not have a clear main line from the beginning to the end of the story. In my understanding, the main line is the through-frame of a story. Some people take the emotional line as the main line as a matter of course. But the emotional line in this article is indeed the one that puzzles me the most. The nine years of campus life with Lu Zhou did not give me a sense of resonance. Zhou's actions in the later period made me confused about what she was thinking, and Lu's actions in the early stage still made me confused about what she was thinking. Their relationship grew a little inexplicably, settled a little too quickly, and the weight of their memories was too easy. This is a love cookie, My personal understanding of love cookies is mutual love. But in the whole text, what I saw was really only Lu's care for Zhou, and then Zhou would try to comfort Lu when something went wrong. There is absolutely no problem in writing this in the previous article, because the description of nine years is a bit thin, but Zhou's actions are relatively understandable. It is not an empathic understanding but a logical recognition and understanding of the plot. Later on, I remember that after two people established a relationship, their relationship mode, emmm, other than being able to kiss and do anything, I really didn't see any difference from before... It's okay to say it's not sweet, but you always feel a strange awkward feeling when you eat it. Zhou's attitude towards relationships is also a bit...??? She should be a very affectionate person. According to the plot, 9 years is really a long time, but she doesn't feel like a good fit for this character. No matter how I convince myself, after seeing her attitude toward Lu Qiqi in the later period, I still feel that these two are really in love? In addition, she later thought about dating Lu and doing everything she could before the contract expired, which made me feel that this character seemed to be even more biased. You have identified someone but you don't want to be with her for the rest of your life. You haven't identified her yet but you still want to fall in love with her and have sex with her. This cannot be said to be a problem, but it is very abrupt when you put it in the context of the week. At least I can't tell from the text what she thinks and why she does this. In the end, I thought that the reason why I couldn't take on the perspective and feelings of the two people was that there was a huge difference between their student days and now. It's like watching two stories, and there is no sense of continuity. There are many stories of reunions. It is also very important to grasp the intensity in this regard. I think the author was really out of his depth in the later stages, and the changes were very abrupt and the ending was very sudden. A lot of what should be expressed is not expressed, and there is no way for readers to have real emotional resonance. They can only understand the logical relationship. In the end, Lu's parents, who were not explained in the plot, are also a point... The above is my humble opinion. If it offends me, I apologize in advance. Please work hard, author, to control the characters and establish a clear main line. How to smoothly connect and end are all issues that you need to pay attention to at the moment. Wish you better and better.

Second brush, it's really nice

Sweet you hammer. . . .

Really sweet article! □□

Sweet article? It makes me very depressed! It's so depressing! My first negative score. I would rather the two of them separate, one sad and the other humble

Emmm, I feel like there are some logical problems. . . In addition, Zhou's portrayal is a bit weird, his attitude towards his lover is completely wrong, and their status is completely unequal. How can there be a feeling of love? It seems a little depressing

I still like Lu more.

There is no update. Why does it say that there is an update? It scares me.