[Ashes of Love] Moonlight Rippling, Golden Waves

I have known Mary Sue for about a few years. Due to my reading preference, I have only briefly read the beginning of "Iris" and "Angel" and have not written any serious reviews. It just so happens that the setting of "Psychic/Heartbeat" struck me, so let me briefly talk about my impressions of it. In the first chapter, the identity of Xiaoyang is clarified at the beginning - a young girl who serves noble ladies' lesbians. Through the suspense of the interrogation and the police's reaction to hearing Jiana's name, and the subsequent anecdotes, the image of "Lolita" is created, which is both pure and mean, and can act for self-interest (building female self-awareness through sex). Society's cruelty and oppression of women are vividly reflected in Jiana herself, her mother died of poverty and illness, her sister constantly sells her body to climb up the ladder, and the female guests seek happiness from children in a twisted way. The writing is smooth and has a strong sense of déjà vu, and the characters and social situations are vividly and vividly depicted. At the end, the story of the new character "Christine" and her soul friend is introduced. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development of this article and can't wait to continue reading. Chapter 2: Paris Opera House and ballet dancer. As Jana's sincere friend Meg (a bystander), she heard the story of the alternating appearance of her good friend Christine's "angel" and Jana's "holy spirit". It ends with the "boy in the cage" told by my mother. The author is telling us in a subtle way (spoiler alert) that the boy in the cage is our hero, a mysterious person who teaches C and the heroine to learn music. The concept is very clever, but is the description of Meg (the bystander object) not precise enough, resulting in laggy switching of perspectives and too much information? Except for the story between C and Jana, we can see Meg's "not bright smile, stiff cough" from the moment they met - "interested in listening to the story, nodding indifferently" - "you should have expected that Jana doesn't care about Meg's mother's defense"... With Meg as the observation perspective, an omniscient second person "you" suddenly appeared? The heroine's story frightened C, and Meg found a reason to warn Jiana with a sullen face - the heroine changed the story, Meg felt guilty and grateful, C looked pale - the expression of the latter (there is no former, I guess the former refers to C in the previous paragraph) changed from cautious and dull to pious and doting - Meg was in a relaxed mood? Meg has been scrutinizing and even hostile to the heroine. Facing a person that her own mother was wary of, seeing the piety and doting shown by the heroine Jiana? Will she relax? Maybe it can be mentioned a little bit that Meg (I'm guessing) realized Jiana's secret and relaxed towards her. (Writing this for now, I'm sleepy)

I saw you wrote an article about a gender-transformed phantom, but it's Takarazuka Barrel, what's the direction? The name of this article has also been changed to Psychic Code, which is indeed more appropriate than the rapid heartbeat. It feels like you suddenly opened a lot of articles, and the sugar-coated lines seem to be very complicated.

Wish you a safe journey~ It feels like Xiao Ai has been in the crematorium and can't get out 23333

Suddenly I realized that I didn't leave a comment after reading it... Sorry Asu Little Lamb actually communicated with Little C's father (I should have thought of it earlier, but somehow I still feel it's amazing www Jealous and arrogant bucket www

... Although it is normal for the Phantom to have a poisonous tongue and hairy hair... Is Little Lamb planning to leave Phantom and go it alone in his career? Even sheep will bite when they are in a hurry www

Thank you to the author for your hard work. If the phantom is like this, one day the little lamb will run away with his sister. Let's see if you cry. (But what will happen if Jiana knows that the phantom is not a ghost... And the beginning of this chapter is a bit abrupt. Was it posted wrong?

It's the 29th soon. Mrs. Qaq won't cheat, right? 1551

The psychic setting is delicious, but the bucket is really, really scary. I wish Christine a happy ever after, although it is a bit strange that the Viscount's brother would agree to this marriage.

It would be nice if there was some reversal. Carlotta's original support base is still solid. Watching this kind of interaction between the male and female protagonists, although it is delicious, there is always a sense of disgust in trying to coerce and take advantage of women. So what is the difference between E and other patrons? Of course, the heroine is originally the little sheep Jiana, and it is normal to use her own advantages, so I just want people to hate Eric a little. There is a contrast between E and Jiana, who suffer from love but cannot control their own desires and let themselves go. I can hardly imagine them being together. It would be nice if Jiana could show more of her shrewdness.

I'm a little confused and can't understand Jiana's motives. I feel like she is the type of sick woman who lacks emotions and kills people. Although it is very touching, I always feel that she has a kind of malice in it, such as inviting Christine? Maybe my own thinking is too bad