The Most Popular Person in a Horror World

I have one thing to say, each short story is well written and is constantly improving. It is really well written. The stories of the Mahjong foursome (and reserve staff) are all wonderful. The four people's moods and emotions are also well portrayed. There is obvious progress from Xivier to Qiong, and the characters created are all cute, and Gu Pan The Tower chapter and the girl's wedding night chapter with Mia are particularly wonderfully described. The Mia chapter has the feeling of a melancholic castle, and the Gu Pan chapter really shows the perverted and dark love and hate to the fullest. It is really wonderful. To be honest, each character has a distinct personality and outstanding cuteness. (I didn't mean to say they are good things) But when I saw the last part, especially the ending, I felt really speechless. The author himself admitted that the original plot was for Xia to be the male protagonist and Xiaofeng to be the second male lead. Based on the characters presented in the whole text, Feng Yan is the kind of person who is shy and cold-faced, but a loyal dog will look at you eagerly. He is a character who does not even need to say too much. He often appears as a supporting character in other novels. He is quite cute and pitiful. He does not need too many words or plots, and does not need too much ink, but it can produce very good results. But, does this persona stand out in your article? Except for the chapter or two where the article first introduces Feng Yan to take shape and watch the protagonist's love, which contains a detailed description of the relationship between them, I won't talk about the emotional drama in other places, and there are not many descriptions of single characters. Qiong's psychological portrayal is more exciting and contrasting than Feng Yan's. What about Feng Yan? Except for the length of Qiong's article, it's basically dropped. Why bother to make a pair? The character of Bishago (who scolded him for the last time) is really full of character. From the beginning, I really wanted to scold him every time I watched him. By the time I read the whole story, I did feel sorry for him and even regretted their fate. He is really not bad, but he is just a little weird, his words and many things I even think he is cute. To sum up, it's your choice whether you decide to cut the settings or change the outline. The second male lead, Xiaofeng (I even think this description is at the level of three male and four male characters), is not well-characterized. There are not as many rewritten chapters as the Mahjong Four. Judging from your conclusion, I am really speechless. If you don't like it, if you don't want it, don't write it. Really, if you don't like the cp, why should you join in? It can be done without cp or with an open ending. How about this? The summary is that the heartthrob perfume has been emotionless since the old days. Every time I smoke it, Brother Feng Yan becomes a background version of my boyfriend. In the final episode, the three of them hold hands. I'm speechless. Really, the story structure, writing and characterization are all very good. The supporting characters are obviously very well written, but why is the so-called "protagonist" you decided to be written like this? The thing that makes people speechless is really this lack of caring. You can write a hidden np, but I don't see how you can express that feeling. It's just a child or a dog pretending to cry, right? This kind of talk is both off-putting and off-putting. I like another novel of yours. In my opinion, that one is of a pretty good standard. It's pretty and novel in the unlimited genre. The emotional line is also very sweet. It's a good love story. The small world of your book is also well written, but with all due respect, the emotional line of the protagonist in this book ruins the bridge you have built with your writing and imagination and your efforts to make continuous progress. Last two points, dedicated to your great story.

Why do I feel like I'm a bit scummy? She has a boyfriend and is so close to other men?

To be honest, I really like Xia Bingying's character, she is very affectionate and devoted to Zishu. But even though I knew that he was being controlled and was a scumbag, after seeing him kill Zishu, his character was no longer worthy of Zishu in my mind. Even if Xia Bingying let Zishu kill him once, I no longer had a cold feeling towards him, and even bothered him a little bit.

... Suddenly I felt that Gong was so pitiful, Shi was treating Xia better than him (?_?)

Because my wife's new articles are updated slowly, I came to read the old article. I remembered that I had read the beginning of this article and felt that the level of being a heartthrob was a bit disappointing, so I didn't read it... As a result, the more I read, the more I read. If you ignore the excessive level of being a heartthrob, it is actually a strong person with excellent strength and dual quotient! And the plot and logic of each book are very good! And in fact, it's not as non-existent as many readers said. I think Feng's character setting and unique sincere emotions are well created! (On the other hand, Xiao Pei in the new novel always feels that his portrayal is relatively lackluster and the gap between the supporting characters cannot be widened.) After completing the old novel, I will continue to read the new novel about my wife!

Everything my wife likes is also my favorite! That's great

I still feel so bad for Xia. After reading this extra chapter, I cried again without realizing it. Sure enough, my tears were too low <( ; ? ; )?

Finished with flowers_(:з∠)_

Very nice, cool jpg. Hhhhhhhhh, I'm looking forward to the next article, I love Damu

I finally finished chasing it, it's so complete, I really like the way it was written, Shura Field is also very exciting, hehe, I love it.