This Childhood Friend Isn't Very Cold

The word "husband" makes me very confused.

This Xiao Jin makes me want to hit her(?`ヘ??;)ゞ

Ahhhhhh! Not enough extras

I laughed instantly when I saw the name of the little princess

It was a smooth read. Unfortunately, the story was too bland and there was no climax. I had no desire to read it again. Keep working hard.

Great! Thanks for the limited fee

Nice! Thanks for the limited fee! The story is really good! Although the characters may not be fleshed out enough, the story is interesting and engaging, which is great. And I feel that there are no logical problems, and the article is under my control, which is great! Keep up the good work, duck!

Now that I've finished reading it, I'll give you a longer review. The author has great potential. The biggest advantage is that he has a good Chinese language skills. He does not have the common problems of new or novice authors such as grammatical errors, misuse of words and sentences, and confusing narrative logic. It is easier to write good articles if he has laid a good foundation. From the story point of view, the author is a newcomer. Although the narrative inevitably prefers a single straight line and chronological order, which can easily give people a sense of procrastination, watery and boring, the writing method can be improved. The highlight is that there are some interesting ideas and thoughts, which can sometimes be felt during the reading process. Interesting stories are the core of novels. Sometimes online novels are more important than writing style or story, as it determines whether the work can attract attention faster. I think the advantage of the whole book is that it is not uncomfortable to read. The disadvantage is that there are few climaxes and it is relatively dull. I have read a lot of novels, and I feel that although they are bloody and cliched, dramatic conflicts are indispensable. Either they are bad people, or they are disasters, or they are opportunities, good or bad. If you can arouse everyone's discussion, you will be successful. Then there must be an outline, a complete character set, sufficient character design, and timely recovery of foreshadowing, so that the character design is not easy to collapse, and the story is complete, and everyone has their own meaning of existence, so that people will not feel that it is made up on the fly. There is still a lot of room for improvement, and I hope to see more of your good works in the future!

Spring Festival Gala hahaha, my little girl has done something wrong and you have to do this to her!

There is a little foreshadowing here at the end, which is pretty good, with a sense of completeness and happiness. Just to spread the flowers, thank you for allowing us to meet each other. It's a nice short article. I enjoyed reading it.