The Great Heiress Dafina

This is really the first time I have seen such a responsible person. If you can't write anything, just solve the problem of V. By the way, I also attached the outline, which makes me feel really sincere.

The plot of this synopsis is very similar to the original work.

Ah? Is it broken? Looking at the synopsis, I only think that the heroine is a tool. The heroine's use is just to connect "The Red and the Black" and "The Count of Monte Cristo", right? Although she is said to be a rich man, the food industry was started by her father, and the textile industry was left behind by doctors. She only proposed an idea and did not have great achievements in business. Those so-called nobles still looked down on her. Even the revenge line basically relied on Julien and the Count, so her role was only to connect Julien and Edmond. And in the end, the Count of Monte Cristo was forced to be the male protagonist. There was no sense of CP at all, and even the context was very disconnected. Everyone has their own destiny, and the female protagonist only exists to give these people a reasonable and good ending. What about herself? I didn't feel that there was any room for love to develop between her and the Count of Monte Cristo.

Actually... The outline is also very nice and quite smooth.

The synopsis is so awesome... It's so original that it makes me crazy (?)

It's really the best scam artist I've ever seen. Although I still have regrets, I hope I can write excellent works in the future.

It's nice to have an outline, it feels like you've finished reading it?

It's rare for me to see such a good product. I feel that this outline is really smooth and exciting as you read down. And indeed, if you really want to finish it, you will have to write a lot.

I originally wanted to say that I haven't seen the male protagonist even after reading the author's plot, but after reading the synopsis, I want to say that I really like this kind of thing. When everything comes to an end if you keep moving forward, you will look back and find him, who can reach out to you.

This is my first comment, and I would like to point out some of the logical reasons that may be the pitfalls of this article: The beginning is very attractive, so I jumped in without knowing the pitfalls. For the first time, the doctor felt confused and illogical and still did not take action after learning the political reminder message given by the tutor. This kind of thing is likely to happen in reality, but in this kind of novel, every step must have a role (perhaps the author thinks that this step is for the doctor Purple Sand is responsible for foreshadowing, so I don't agree with it even more. There are more scenes of the doctor in the previous article. In this arrangement, the character should not die. It would be better to arrange for him to go to prison together with the count.) So when I read The Framing of Verdo, I was full of doubts. I felt that I didn't know what the protagonist was doing, and it was useless. The author stated that the reason why he couldn't continue writing was that he couldn't sympathize with the heroine's elegant social life. So I think it would be better to give her a dual identity. On the surface, she runs a business, and behind the scenes, she runs an industry similar to Sherlock Holmes (she is a time traveler after all). At the same time, it is easy to connect with Monte Cristo (at the same time, there are some surprises. In the original work, Monte Cristo has always had a fiancée in his heart. Although such an upright person is overwhelmed by hatred, it is impossible to love others (there is also a canary bird that is easy to control after being broken. Like the original work, it is impossible to be with a heroine of comparable ability), so there should not be a fiancée in the first place). For Julien, the heroine in the previous article has already made him understand the importance of love, and the following article should not let him easily use and trample on other people's love, so the logic of this paragraph also fails. All in all, the heroine should save Monte Cristo, who is in the throes of revenge, and correct Julien's unfair means of obtaining fame, wealth, and rights. Only in this way can the character of a time-travelling person with correct values ​​satisfy readers' needs for derivative novels of the original character BE.