Survival

The difference between a team and a single player is that if only one member of the team wins, the whole team wins. Therefore, if there is no point in forming a team, then the heroine can play alone. The team members will not be very useful and cannot share the benefits. There is no benefit for Hu Ba's team to win. The locals don't count. Then why did Hu Ba join the team in the first place? Isn't it because the local rules can't be changed? That's why they look for dead people from the earth. This adds the living locals. Inconsistent, Then just use local people from the beginning. Life and death are none of the earth's business. One moment they say they can't break the local rules, and the next they kill the locals. The rules are what they are, and they keep changing.

Although I don't like Danmei very much, I still watched it. I love the heroine and the hero so much. My first full order

This team really relies on the heroine and Hu Ba to drag them along. The male protagonist is barely qualified, but Nanli's positioning is really redundant. The character of the loser cheerleader collides with the male protagonist. It seems that it has no other use except to draw an emotional line. However, this is the home of romance, and selling BL in romance is a minus point. If you want to write about other sexual orientations, you must be careful not to occupy too much space so as not to overwhelm the focus. Many novels just fail to grasp this point, thinking that double lines can sell well on both ends, making money on both the romance line and the beauty line. In fact, they get scolded on both sides and set themselves up. But the biggest highlight of this article is that the central line has not been deviated from the main line, and the main heroine is a happy story from beginning to end. This alone is enough to hook readers to suppress all dissatisfaction and follow it to the end. So all in all, I'm happy with the ending, and cheers for the next one!

Give me back my bastard, oooooooooooo! A man as tall as an iron tower.

I'm speechless. Except for Nangu, they're not that good.

Hu Ba! Hu Ba! How can I be such a big bastard? ! ! !

It feels like it would be better if there were no emotional lines

The large literary and emotional lines are all awkward, but there is an indescribable awkwardness to them. I always feel that it would be much better without CP (muttering)

I came from my sister, but I felt that this book was a bit disappointing. Lu Yunxi was still readable in the end, but I really hated Nan Li, even though he was quite miserable (he had nothing in the end)...

In fact, this world is really written only from the perspective of the heroine, and it is very concise and not procrastinating. From the perspective of our readers, there are still many questions, but from the heroine's perspective, she has always been very clear about her goals. So she doesn't care about the stories behind them. Therefore, the main line of the story is very concise, without being too extensive or explaining too much background or details, because the heroine does not have much to do with this world. However, I am still very interested. After reading it in one breath, the world line that was initially sorted out is that the background line is that mankind was originally a country of orcs, and was later destroyed by a group that developed technology, which is the first copy. Then there is the excessive exploration of resources due to the development of science and technology, which leads to resource depletion and environmental pollution (?). Human beings are no longer suitable for survival. On the one hand, humans began to study perpetual motion machines, hoping to achieve recycling of energy without loss to solve the dilemma of resource depletion, but failed, which is the second copy of Basha (?). On the other hand, we try to solve the problem of pollution. Pollution has caused the collapse of the ecosystem and the environment is no longer suitable for animals, plants and humans to survive. So I tried to artificially create a clean ecosystem, but due to the lack of thoughtfulness and urgency, some irresolvable mutations eventually appeared. The third copy is a reflection of this plan, and this mutation (virus, mutated organisms, etc.) Is briefly mentioned in it. This will lead to the great destruction of mankind. In the early stages of this change, the human kingdoms jointly used the latest technology to create a sky island to preserve human fire. But this technology also requires energy. So use the form at the end of the article to obtain energy as support. The good world lines have been sorted out a bit. I won't say whether they are all correct for now, but they should generally fit together. There are many things in the setting that cannot be explained. So I can't expand and write. For example, why things in games can be brought into reality. Why can the copy be restarted? This is hard to explain. The transformation of virtual and real. There are still 11 and a half months of dry season and half a month of rainy season. In the rainy season, floods wash away the vegetation, and in the dry season, water does not fall. How can we grow enough plants to supply the animals on this earth? The rainy season is too short, and the dry season is too long. It is too difficult to complete a world set like this. There is a lot of suspense at the end of the article. Nanli stayed and said he would be the city lord, but is there a way to spread this knowledge? Why can't robots control copies and spread knowledge? From the previous article, the military department does not have much knowledge left, and it is also trying to explore the relics. So is it hoped that mankind's own technology will develop enough to explore the Celestial City and discover this piece of history? If you can discover the city in the sky, you don't need this knowledge anymore, you just need history. Otherwise, all the players who come up normally have to be resurrected, who will spread the knowledge to you, and there will be no subsequent tasks for players to spread the knowledge, which means that it has not been considered at all. However, the main character of the novel is a female protagonist, so we don't have to consider those issues. The writing is very good, but not many people read it. Why. It is rare that I have written so many words, and I don't know what I want to express as I write. So it's impossible to become a writer in this life_(:з)∠)_Slip away