The Villain's Redemption

If I had written it according to the original version, this book would definitely be among the top 3 of my favorite works on cultivating immortals. Of course, the new version also has some very amazing places, but the overall smoothness The completeness and character creation are not as good as the old version. For example, Tao Ze and Xie Huaifeng are not completely established in the new version, but they are very complete in the old version. The chapters of "Master's View of the Canghai" are also missing, which is also a pity, including the emotional line between Chang Qing and Master in the first few dozen chapters, and the later flashbacks and Wu Ling's feelings. I think the old version handles it better, but it does not mean that the new version is not good, because even Even after the overhaul, the level of writing is still far superior to the same kind. The flaws are not concealed, just like other Erha. Subjectively speaking, I like it very much, but objectively speaking, the level is actually average. There are also the most popular pretty boys in the immortal way, Liu Yao, who is often recommended by some people. The villain is too beautiful. When I was young, the writing in this book is not as good as this one. It is a type that is readable but not amazing, but Yue There are really many places in the articles written by God that make me feel amazing. As long as you can feel something like aura, you will find that there is a huge difference between having it and not having it. Most people are just insensitive. It's not that I'm deliberately trying to criticize you. Although everyone has their own preference for reading articles, from the perspective of objective writing level, Luna's writing ability is far superior to most BL authors I've read. This is also a niche circle, and it is really not easy to write well, but writing well may not be popular, because the public taste does not represent it. But as someone who has written articles before and won many awards, I still have a good judgment of myself. I think at least my own evaluation. I feel that based on the author's writing skills, basically no matter what genre he writes, he is amazing. The level is really better than

Alas, I will regret it for the rest of my life. I really want to know what will happen if the original direction goes...

There are also some treatments by the author that I really think are particularly good. The first is the monk's prophecy. It seems that the original version really didn't have it. It's a very fateful part. The other thing is the handling of the ending. After the truth came out, many people in the public did not acknowledge the contribution of the three people. Some people even privately worshiped Wu Ling and regarded Wu Ling as a benefactor. Wu Ling fell off the altar not because of evildoing, but because of romantic rumors; the Taoists apologized to Meng Changqing, not because he was innocent and suffered so much and suffered so much humiliation, but because Li Daoxuan and Xuanwu stood behind him. This treatment is so good, I don't know how much better than those blunt whitewashings, because it is very real and has a clear grasp of people's hearts. This is also a point that distinguishes it from other writings. I can understand many other writings. It is due to the audience's preference or the longing for a happy ending in the Chinese people's bones. However, I feel that it is too much like a fairy tale, so I am skeptical. Lu Xianchao. The article emphasizes the rotten fruit, and combines it with the secret enjoyment he had with the evil cultivators in Tianmu Mountain, and his memories on the street of the first time he came to Xuanwu with his fellow disciples. When he thinks about it now, Wu Xidao is no longer here, and so are his brothers. My guess about this character is actually that he went crazy when he grew old. What supported him later was revenge. After the revenge, he was still alive, not because there was anything else he wanted to do while alive, but because there was no reason to die for the time being. Ah, really... Lu Xianchao is a person who I didn't like at all when I started watching it and felt like a bastard. After watching it, I felt extremely heartbroken. Not to mention Meng Changqing, I kept crying... I think the author's portrayal of the character Meng Changqing is really, really good. He is afraid of doing something wrong and hopes that everyone in the world will praise him, not out of vanity, but because he needs this. A person who would be in unbearable pain if things did not develop as expected, was betrayed and wronged. It seemed that the identity of Meng Guanzhi's son who had escaped was taken back as the reincarnation of Meng Guanzhi. His childhood friend committed suicide in front of him, his sword was broken and his hand wasted, and his dream of becoming famous in the world was also shattered. He is really a very three-dimensional character. In the beginning, I was not particularly fond of his setting. I only regarded him as the "protagonist", but later on I became completely immersed in his growth line (I joked with my good friend that it is not actually a growth line, but should be called a misfortune line). The plot between him and Wu Ling not only showed Wu Ling, a complex, mysterious, unpredictable and somewhat dramatic character, but also made Meng Changqing stand up. There is a section in which Meng Changqing keeps looking at Wu Ling in the boat, which impressed me very much. Meng Changqing, a cautious person, also has such eyes. The moment I read that, I suddenly knew that Meng Changqing also needed to grasp something. He also liked things that truly belonged to him. Oh, speaking of these two people, I still remember when Meng killed Wu, he repeatedly asked Wu why he looked at him like that. My mother is very kind, especially when Wu Linggang has a heart. Finally, let's talk about Xie Yao. When Xie Yao said the prayer, he said that the best is like water. That part was amazing too, I loved it. Clean when you come, clean when you leave. This life is just a big dream, filled with love, hate, resentment, and laughter and weeping. So is it true for other people.

[Poor] It's such a pity. I feel that Meng Guanzhi is also a willful young man who slays demons. He became famous at a young age and is carefree and unrestrained. He is a bit like a male protagonist. [A dog's head holds a rose] Thirty years ago, he faced the monster, but he may have failed to slay the monster. After his death, he was burdened with infamy. In the end, he was not cleared up, just like Meng Chang. The first time Qing killed 50, he was scolded as an evil cultivator. If the master hadn't resurrected him, Meng Changqing would probably be the second Meng Guanzhi [poor], and because of this, the young Changqing has been burdened with so many injustices since he was a child. In the 80s of Changbai for so many years, Changqing is the worst. Although the author did not write in the main text that Meng Guanzhi was avenged, at least the last chapter of the extra chapter also mentioned that Meng Guanzhi might be innocent and Changqing was not the son of an evil cultivator. Changqing has suffered so many injustices since childhood. He dreamed of killing Meng Guanzhi. He tried to save the world thirty years ago but failed. He was misunderstood by the world and even hated by his son. The last chapter is also about Changqing's "mercy". The code profile stated that Meng Guanzhi was not an evil cultivator and had solved Chang Qing's heart knot (?). Compared to 50, the treatment was countless times better. At least 50 was pitied by the world since he was a child. They all said that he was brilliant and brilliant. Then think of 50's dirty talk. Means, who knows how Meng Guanzhi was slandered thirty years ago? 50'S parents are not necessarily clean (not sure, 50 parents may be good or 50 is purely bad). I read that the author of the review has revised the article. I remember reading the original version before but abandoning it for a while. Now I have read it again and it seems that a lot of plot changes have been made. However, the attack in the original version is indeed gentler and more powerful, and the emotional line in the early stage is clearer, but it is still very beautiful. Let's look at the controversy over the relationship between 50 and Changqing. To be honest, 50's character is destined to fall in love and kill Changqing. There are indeed some points that are embarrassing to say the least. Maybe he really got the author's preference, but the original sin of all this can be attributed to 50. There is no way to criticize a cult, not to mention that what Changqing loves is the shadow of the master in 50. When 50's true identity is revealed, Changqing must no longer love him. The following article also makes it very clear that it is a misunderstanding [poor] Love the master and apprentice for many years, good quality, fairy quality

After checking in, I feel a little uncomfortable reading this article. I feel that the world does not really know the truth about those massacres back then. They are grateful to Changqing and they are only grateful to Changqing, an "evil cultivator" for saving the Taoist sect in the final battle. They do not really remember the truth of the previous massacres and the guilt of wronging the protagonist. It feels that Changqing and Lu did not really receive any compensation, even if it is everyone's apology and understanding, it seems that everyone is as if nothing happened. So I always feel very uncomfortable watching it. In addition, the last extra chapter of Meng Guanzhi also ended abruptly, and Meng Guanzhi's story was not narrated in more detail.

I felt so emotional after reading it... The whole book is really full of ups and downs, with personal relationships and great love. In fact, I still like Meng Changqing's character design. This novel is really very similar to his growth path. From the child who ignorantly pleases others at the beginning to the monk who resolutely resists monsters in the end, it is really shocking. Well, isn't it that the most exciting thing is the contrast, I think A bit like that cowardly person who is brave (although the word cowardly is not appropriate, but my cultural level can't think of a better adjective/kneeling at the moment) Meng Changqing has been growing up, and what has changed is his experience and state of mind, but what remains unchanged is the morality and love in his heart. What makes me feel distressed is the confrontation between the Xuanwu disciples and the evil spirits during the period when Taibai Ghost City was just built. Both parties actually put pressure on Meng Changqing at the same time! [Crying] Then what the girl in red said to Meng Changqing, "Aren't you a Xuanwu disciple?" And "Go back and be your Xuanwu disciple" were really hurtful. For Meng Changqing, the original prophecy has come true. He really can't return to the place he wants to go back to most. Xuanwu is home to Meng Changqing, and the people in Xuanwu are his family. All this changed completely under 50's lies. Changqing really couldn't return to Xuanwu. Even among the Xuanwu disciples and the evil ghosts, they were not human beings. At this time, there was no place that could be called his home. The only thing that supported him to kill 50 was his pain, hatred and responsibility. Even though Changqing lost his home, love, reputation, and life in order to kill the monster, and everything about him was gone, he still insisted on doing it because of the Tao in his heart. In this book, I really felt the tragedy of fate playing tricks on people. What kind of mistakes were made by coincidence, and what things were just ordinary at the time, so don't do it at all! ! The ordinary life in the previous dozens of chapters is happier, and the knife that kills me is more and more bloody. I really hate 50, don't torture my heart anymore [burst crying] [burst crying] I almost died after staying up late to read the memory chapter. If I hadn't liked 50 when I was young, it might be okay, but a series of coincidences made me feel that it was really fate! ! But in the end, the only thing 50 gave to Changqing was a sword that could be called torture that broke my heart. It was a wrong payment sincerely. This is what makes this relationship the most uncomfortable for me, regardless of friendship or love! I'm a bit indifferent about having an ex, but this relationship is really so hurtful that I felt a little bit dead after reading it. Although I saw a lot of comments saying that the game was a little dull after the game, I really like this feeling, especially the daily relationship between Changqing and Master, which is awkward, cute, and adorable. After the early confession of being together, I was really moved by the passion of Changqing's feelings. I can hardly call the relationship between Chang Qing and Master a betrayal. Rather than saying it is a betrayal, it is better to say that it is the unchanging emotions between the two people that created the gap between the swords and the shock of dying in love. The more ups and downs of natural and man-made disasters, the more they highlight the value of true love in the world. It can even be said that because of the plot of "Memory Killing", I like the ordinary daily life in the future even more, because you will find that such a normal and happy life is really something you need to ask for, and in the previous time, you may not have been able to have such a daily life at all. You will find that ordinary things are valuable! ! Anyway, I have read the whole book, and I am very impressed! Although I was really heartbroken in the middle and I really felt like I was going to faint in the middle of the night, it was still worth it to read such an article. Not enough extras ah ah ah ah

I love this version. The author is amazingly talented. Hope to see you again.

After reading the current version, I went to look for the original version again. The original version still has more details and character highlights. I don't know why the author had to change the text (50 times before and after the changes are pretty much the same, right?)

What happened to Meng Guanzhi back then? I thought I would talk about this. In the end, Meng Guanzhi was not cleared.

In fact, I don't know what to say. I probably hope their story will continue, or maybe tell more about his father. Because of this feeling, I feel it is not enough. So I can only sigh. I used to care too much about the relationship between Shou and the villain, because Gong really loved him deeply and hurt. Later, I felt that he was being used and used as a furnace and I felt pitiful and hurt.