
Tearing the System Apart After Being Reborn
手撕系统重生后
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 714k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Older Teacher-Student Relationships, or Stories That Feel Like Them
#A mentor like a father#absolute authority#age gap, status gap, experience gap#teaching#raising#control#shaping#responsibility#carrying on the legacy//No submissive tops or dog-like bottoms
Older Love Interests in Xianxia and Cultivation
Mostly teacher-student or senior-junior pairings, with older tops. A few have younger tops, but they're really good.
Mutual Pampering, Leaning Toward the Bottom; No KKs
Contracted authors, hurry up and update! Why is it so hard to get an A rating?!
Teacher-Student and Master-Disciple Age-Gap Stories, My Personal Stockpile
The younger one takes the initiative; the older one takes the lead. Guidance, discipline; admiration, pursuit. Respect, reason, restraint; passion, loyalty, purity. If you don't get what's so great about older partners, goodbye forever.
Teacher-Student, Older Top Collection
Putting one episode in its own section
Reborn
My personal ratings: ★5: A masterpiece ★4: Really good! ★3: Pretty good ★2: Wouldn’t read again ★1: A hard no
Mostly Older Masters and Younger Disciples
Older master-disciple romances, or any older-top story that really hits the spot for me. Includes a few BG romances. My thing is tops who seem gentle and cool but secretly go berserk: basically, the classic “he runs, he chases, then comes the groveling” setup.
Historical Danmei: Master and Disciple, Older Top
Quality older-top/younger-apprentice stories
Master and Disciple
To be sorted out. Mostly dual male protagonists, with some yuri, romance, and fan fiction.
You Transmigrate, I Transmigrate, We All Transmigrate
2
Reborn 1
Reborn
Reborn 2, Miscellaneous 3
1
Completed
(Might have bought them all, or might not have bought some)
Completed Reads
Saved after completion
Cultivation in an Ancient-Style World
A cultivation world with an ancient setting
Finished Reading - 6
006
Cultivation
On the road to immortality, with only one person by my side
Cultivation Stories
Jinjiang, cultivation, reborn
Too Lazy to Name
Stories I've read several times and can still enjoy
Completed
Already completed
Completed Books
Sweet stories
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I think this article is more about the growth and changes of Xiao Gu. Many people in the comment area feel that the master's role is very small, and think that Xiao Gu and the protagonist Lu are more suitable, but the worldviews of Xiao Gu and the protagonist Lu are completely different. From the end of the novel, the protagonist Lu just wants to use Xiao Gu to cut off his own demons. It can be seen that he does not love Xiao Gu, he is selfish. Yes, he allowed Xiao Gu to reincarnate for so many lives just so that he could cut off his inner demons and become a true god above the nine heavens. However, the master did have 100% trust and understanding of Xiao Gu. Although he did not appear as much as the protagonist Lu, his guidance and trust in Xiao Gu led to Xiao Gu finally throwing away his inner demons and ascending to the upper world. It was precisely because of the master's Support Xiao Gu to realize his escape at a critical moment. For him, the master is not only a Taoist companion but also a guiding light on the road of growth, and the protagonist Lu is a hurdle in his life. This novel has never been a novel only about love. It is more about the growth of Xiao Gu, and the protagonist Lu is just an important figure in this growth. Xiao Gu and the master Zundu is a human being of flesh and blood, but Protagonist Lu is a ruthless and desireless god. Such an outstanding person as Xu Chilin has obviously become a god because Shang Jianying is willing to stay in the lower world. Protagonist Lu is not Xu Chilin and he does not have that sincerity because he is a god and an extremely selfish god. How can such a selfish person be with Xiao Gu? I believe that no matter how long the world lasts, as long as Master Lu is a god and Xiao Gu is a human being, and as long as Master is still around, Master Lu's goal will never be achieved. The relationship between Master and Xiao Gu is not a raging fire but a long-lasting relationship. The bond between Xiao Gu and Master is something that no one can interfere with. The mutual support and mutual trust between them are irreplaceable. I hope that in the future, Xiao Gu and Master can get rid of Master Lu as soon as possible and live happily together. Wow, this is my first long review in Jinjiang for so long! Maybe your point of view is different from mine, but please respect the author and respect people who have different opinions. After all, everyone has their own preferences. Some of the principles in this article really touched me a lot. In many famous novels, gods are desireless and aloof, but in many novels, the protagonists overcome tribulations and become gods with their lovers. But if they really become gods, It is completely contradictory to believe that there will still be love after becoming a god. In this article, I found the answer. Maybe ascending to god is simply fake. They just went to another place with more abundant spiritual energy. There is still intrigue and love and sorrow here, but the people here have higher cultivation. Since they are human, how can they really abandon everything and become gods without desires and pursuits. The protagonist Lu was born as a god, so he was so cold and selfish. It was indeed not his fault, but it also destined him to be alone, pitiful and pathetic no matter how long it took.
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I want to write a long review after reading the entire article, but the logic of my words is quite confusing and it is all based on personal understanding, so read with caution. I like Lu Chongguang very much. Whether the author intends it or not, I am very grateful that someone can create a character like Lu. And I have no interest in the official match, the official match can be taken away www My impression of Lu is a bit strange, and some people may think that I have separated his past and present lives. In my eyes, he is not a completely cold-hearted and indifferent person from beginning to end. Although the Taoist heart of a cultivator cannot be generalized to that of ordinary people who are complicated and complicated, has he really never wavered from beginning to end? I don't think so. He was born in a royal family, born with intelligence and weak family ties. He is a proud man who can become a being above all mortals by following an ordinary path. When his character was undecided, he was impressed by the appearance of an immortal and embarked on the path of cultivating immortals. At that time, he really only wanted to become a superior person who could control higher power. But after meeting Xu Chilin, he received advice and gained growth, from just doing it for himself to doing it for the righteousness of the world. You can say that if he wants to wear the crown, he must bear its weight, and even the righteousness of the world is just a springboard for his path to immortality. But who stipulates that efforts cannot be rewarded? Immortal cultivators are already the masters of heaven. As long as they can't grab it or can't bear it, there is no reason to give up opportunities to others. It was indeed cruel for him to destroy a spiritual vein, but in a deadly situation, only a sharp knife could relieve the pain, and if it wasn't him, it would be Gu or someone else who would give the order. As a cultivator who pays attention to cause and effect, he has not shied away from his responsibility. Tens of thousands of human lives will naturally become his cause and allow him to eat the fruit. Some people are indeed born ruthless, but is Lu really so? To put it worse, he is an emotional coward, not ruthless. If the love lingers endlessly, he will regard it as inferior and put self-improvement first. Needless to say, family ties among the royal family were weak. After embarking on the path of cultivating immortality, he never had a healthy intimate relationship. He envied Gu for having a master who treated Gu very well, and he was attracted to Gu and even developed feelings for him. Rejecting Bai in front of Gu is a display of his affection, and pursuing Gu is his facing up to or avoiding his affection. How can he resolutely choose an intimate relationship when he has never been truly happy because of an intimate relationship? He is so determined in cultivating immortality and is so hesitant in love. It is no wonder that Gu scolded him for being hypocritical from the perspective of the person being pursued, but his love is not just fake. Although his love is shallow and vulnerable, it is his rare true love. Therefore, Lu particularly misses himself as Lu Suiyang. At that time, he could still let his heart take care of unknown causes and consequences for Gu. The road to immortality is long and difficult, and the youthful spirit of those years was flattened. Looking back carefully, if I hadn't been Lu Chongguang, would I have been able to feel true love? But Lu Chongguang, who is the proud son of heaven, has long been formed. He does not believe in having the best of both worlds. He only thinks that we will perish together, and he will always repeat the same mistakes. There are no ifs in this world. Whether it is Lu Zhongguang, who has only one life in this life, or Mingguang Immortal Lord, who has countless time, they are just walking in a determined and irreversible disaster, looking for a future without a future.
Lu Chongguang is the real protagonist, right? I looked for Master and Disciple Wen, and I just wanted to see them fall in love. The result, alas. . . .
After reading the whole article, I don't deny that the writing is good, but I still feel uncomfortable after all. I always think that Gu Xige forgives the master too easily. I don't know if it is my misunderstanding. I always feel that the master is not worthy of Xiao Gu's affection...
I like Mojun Gu the most in the book. This is the process of serious cultivation and mind cultivation. Those who are favored by heaven are created by current events. Those who defy heaven and change their destiny and move forward are more interesting.
Although I don't stand by Lu Gu... But Shigemitsu is really my favorite person in this book (╥╯╰╥) If I could meet such a person, I would be willing to serve him wholeheartedly. This kind of person should be born to be a king.
In the whole book, what I admire the most is the villain, the lifelong rival of the protagonist. Well, it's not the first time, but Lu Chongguang is still so admirable. Only when a person lives up to Chongguang's level can he really live his life in vain.
After reading this, I appreciate Chongguang even more. He doesn't ask for love, he just wants to get rid of his obsession. Sure enough, he has not changed from the beginning to the end. He is still the cold-hearted Lu Chongguang who only values himself.
I quite like the overall setting and direction of this article~ Although the writing style is a bit poor, the flaws do not hide the flaws... The ending of the second male lead is natural. Some comments say that he should be with the male lead. This reply is ridiculous. He has never needed love from the beginning to the end. All he wants is ability and power. Repeating it more than a hundred thousand times is just to get further. What a pity, can't it be improved in other places? Can it only be broken at the level of love? In fact, I am not very against Bai He and the second male lead who use their emotions to enter the Tao, but I do object to using others to enter the Tao through their emotions. Don't talk about seeing through the customs and still retaining love. The Tao can change and you know your own temperament.