Famous Overnight [Entertainment Industry]

When I came, the earth shattered, and when I left, there was no sound

The previous writing is quite good, but since the release of the 3rd, Qiao Yue and Shen Zitong, who had made a strong sense of presence before, have continued to go offline. Finally, the gap between Qiao Yue and the previous one feels a bit big. I feel that the author's writing power can no longer control the subsequent plot. There is a feeling of hasty ending, obviously at the end The focus should be on Qiao Yue and Lu Xi, but the author spent a lot of pen and ink to bring out the previous cannon fodder who had no sense of existence and wrote the plot of abuse again. The relationship between the two after the fusion was explained in an outline, and there was no sense of what the new Qiao Yue was like at all.

Very nice article. Good luck to the author.

There seems to have been comments on the latter issue before. I feel that the fusion of the three people should not be like this. Even if he was a little prince when he was a child, he should have changed a bit when he grew up. Moreover, there are two bugs in the article that I can't stand. One is Qiao's age, one is twenty-five and the other is twenty-eight. I think twenty-five is more reasonable. He was kidnapped as a child more than ten years ago. If he is twenty-eight, he must have gone to junior high school. It is unrealistic. The second one is that Qiao Junyi will be his cousin, and one will be his cousin... But overall it's pretty good, it's sweet, and the main characters are also cute.

Mwah! ! ! Like it very much

_(:з∠)_Have you ever told Qiao Yue that he knew Qiao Jun hung up on him... He was very concerned about it...

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What is the subscription ratio?

Dad, do you still remember me? The college entrance examination is back

It felt like the ending was rushed, and the rest of the plot progressed too quickly