Reborn: This Makes No Sense

Let's just say it's a chronology. It's not historically accurate and there are too many typos. Didn't you even check it?

The author can try to write some short stories. It can be seen that the author wants to write the article completely and satisfactorily, but the writing power is not enough. There are too many threads. The overall feeling is that there are hammers here and there, like a main road with a branch road 50 meters apart, and each branch road is only 10 meters long. There are a lot of unnecessary plots. For example, the last thing about Jiujiang being invited several times when he was in the Fu Kingdom. I have no idea why I wrote it down. I could either explain in one sentence how difficult it is for Chinese people outside, or write the whole story clearly, slap in the face, or something else. Suddenly a character appears, and then disappears. The jealous Sisi woman in the front. The classmate also came out inexplicably, thinking that there would be a follow-up, and then broke off. When he took the first job, the person who was late and took over his job was also the same. He was a passerby. Why should he specifically write down a certain number of a building in a certain street in a certain district of a certain country, a certain province, a certain city, and a certain passerby who was born in what year? I came here from Apollo. I read the comments on several other articles and they all seem to be like this. I hope the author can make more progress. I like the author's themes. This is the first time I have written such a long comment.

Very good, I enjoyed watching it, but I hope the author can add some extra chapters

It's over, congratulations!

It's over, I'm a little reluctant to let it go. I particularly like Jiujiang's somewhat fussy character, but when Ji Wen gets angry, he becomes intimidated.

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Thank you for the big red envelope, congratulations on the completion

Spread flowers, this article is finished, I really can't let it go.

Liang Sisi and Liang Jiwen must be of the same generation. Why is it that Liang Sisi's son calls Liang Jiwen their grandfather? There is a conflict in seniority.

I feel that this article was delayed because it was not recommended. I hope it can be recommended and be seen by more people. Maybe the name is not too straightforward. Generally, this kind of article is called Rebirth of a certain era. It is easier to search for books that are straightforward.