
[Prince of Tennis] Love at First Sight or Love That Grows Over Time
[网王]一见钟情or日久生情
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
16Favorites
8.0Score
1.1kClicks per chapter
6Comments
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Love at first sight and love that lasts for a long time, I feel that it is a sudden moment that I can't extricate myself. Most
They all think it is because of Long Ya's character, but I still want to believe that at least there is such a person who will make Long Ya stop, well, I hope it is he
Shocking side ——Comment on "Love at first sight or love over time" Sorry, this article review has been postponed to the end of the year. I was a little surprised when I opened the document. Echizen Ryuya is a very popular figure, but there are still few articles about him. In this article, the author's views on Long Ya are quite accurate. Long Ya is like a gust of wind, which doesn't seem to stay for anyone for a long time. He yearns for freedom, but is a little unruly, full of yuppie spirit, elegant and playful, a very charming man. In the article, Long Ya not only acted bravely and helped, but also put aside the previous grudges and was willing to believe and help a girl again. These descriptions are more in line with Long Ya's own approach. If it were placed in ancient China, Long Ya would probably be a dashing knight. Compared with many articles where the characters are characterless and paper-like, this article is pretty good at shaping the characters. But on the contrary, the author may still be lacking in expressive ability, resulting in some descriptions being slightly superficial. For example, in the article, Ryuya said, "I, Echizen Ryuya, am also an unscrupulous gangster." Such a sentence is slightly younger and does not fit with Ryuya's character. But don't be too picky. Compared with Long Ya, the setting of the heroine is slightly problematic. For example, in the perspective of the heroine, the author mentioned that she had character problems in her early years and liked petty theft. This is probably because she hopes to create a more three-dimensional character, so that her character is both good and bad without being false. However, the author's description is a little lacking, causing the heroine's character to be a bit confusing. For example, at the beginning, she said she likes petty theft, which is actually a bad habit that builds courage. However, the heroine is shown to be a fragile and somewhat cowardly little girl in the later chapters. There is no influence at all due to childhood and bad habits. This resulted in the description of petty theft at the beginning of the article not having a corresponding effect. Let's talk about the plot. When I read about the deception of Long Ya in the early years, my eyes lit up. This kind of reversal in the plot can easily arouse readers' interest, and it also shows to a certain extent that the author's plot does not fall into clichés. Although there is the commonly used setting of "heroes saving beauty" in the back, there is no description of being out of style and causing aesthetic fatigue. Including the choice to return the stolen money in the second early episode, it is also a very novel and helpful plot in character development, which is very popular. Correspondingly, on the emotional line, there are some shortcomings due to space constraints and difficulty. If a series of early behaviors can be explained by "love at first sight", then the emergence of Long Ya's feelings is actually a bit inexplicable. When I read "The heart beat suddenly involuntarily." I scrolled forward. In addition to helping to play the boyfriend, taking away the photo would arouse the inner fluctuations of the character. But the former is out of help, and the latter, "because you know that the other person is attracted to you, and you are also attracted to the other person" obviously doesn't make sense. Not to mention the sentence later in the article, "She will be a good wife, if some bad behavior is eliminated..." Although Long Ya is a strong thinker, it is still a bit far-fetched to suddenly think of such a thing. All "gratuitous ××" in the article must only make the protagonist gratuitous, but the reader must understand what is going on, otherwise the reader will not be able to get into the drama, and the entire reading experience will be worse. But I have been thinking, if I were also a young girl in my youth, and met such a person at a sudden glance on the street, would my heart suddenly be moved? Life is in a hurry. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope you'll continue to work hard.
Personally, I prefer BE (pessimism), How many people can't bear the word "wait"? Waiting is a helpless choice and a painful suffering. The road of waiting is a hard, long and winding road, an endless road. Waiting is sometimes a kind of beauty, sometimes it is a kind of cruel hypocrisy. What is waiting for? It is the most fervent hope and the most sincere wish. Just like a person, no matter what different paths you take, you will always give an explanation to the world when you mature. How many people are worth waiting for, how many people can wait, maybe no one knows, maybe you will choose to give up, if the person you are waiting for is worth waiting for, then of course you should wait. This kind of waiting sets off a source of courage and strength. It is a kind of waiting without regrets. There will be a feeling of happiness and joy in the heart. True love has no regrets. If someone is not worth waiting for, maybe that kind of waiting will have no results at all, so there is no need to wait. Why bother waiting and wasting your life, which may cost you a heavy price. Isn't it worth it? Isn't it stupid? Why bother to be so persistent? Why bother yourself? It is better to wake up earlier. If you miss the flowers, you will reap the rain. Cherish life and cherish yourself. Waiting for results is considered a blessing, but I am afraid that some waitings are far away, and maybe you have been waiting all your life with no results. However, don't be sad, an unknown longing, even if there is no appointment, this is also a kind of happiness and joy. Some waiting may have results, some waiting may make people feel regretful, it may be empty joy, it may be sad for a lifetime, it may make a person crazy, and maybe all that is experienced along the way is a lonely long journey and scars all over the body. In order to wait for someone, a person may lose everything and even pay a lifetime price and life. In fact, some losses are doomed, and some fates will never come to fruition. Zaoji and Long Ya...
I don't want this ending, but I prefer BE, not for any other reason, just because Long Ya is a person who will not stay in one place, and will not stay for love. In other words, Long Ya is dedicated to living alone. So the ending may be that this is the last love story, the heroine may find the love of her life in the future, Long Ya is just a beautiful memory, and the heroine may be a different passerby in Long Ya's memories.
Squatting at the bottom of the pit and staring at youπ_π