[Crossover] A Sherlockian

It's well written, but the sugar isn't spread enough.

It's a very interesting setting. The time traveler is coupled with hypnosis to copy memories. The writing style is a little bit stream-of-consciousness, but it expresses the feeling of insanity. Juan Fu's description is very vivid. Unfortunately, the stream-of-consciousness makes the plot a bit confusing, and the full plot can actually be separated from Sherlock Holmes.

I think of a lot of time travel or "fusion" stories. Is it difficult to accept a life memory that is not yours? It's not like the movies or stories I've seen. It's about becoming a person with two different lives. Before Jane met Antonio, at the age of 8, she had accepted the memory of her past life well. Then Antonio chose her, and then, not just two life memories, but more memories of an "old man", not a bright and brief past life, but memories of being burdened with too many "gods" in the long years. If slightly confused, collapsed, swallowed up. How difficult is it for Jane to insist on being herself.

The sweetest thing after watching it is that Sherlock asked the heroine to sleep in his room? ? ? ? You bitch author, this is not a sweet love at all, but it is indeed an unforgettable feeling.

The emotions in the whole text are very obscure (personal feeling), most of the previous chapters are hints, and the ending is very stable, but sugar! Too! Few! Overall, I have an awkward feeling when reading it. It's not that the writing is not good, but it's the kind of Yazi who is panicking and ready to press his head but is unable to do anything. He is very, unhappy (no malice) and is similar to someone who has been shouting in his heart to kiss me quickly! Dear! The atmosphere is so hot. After the kiss, you quickly get on the bed and show me off in various positions! In the end, they were holding hands, which made me feel sick to my stomach. Of course, my wife's writing style is unquestionable, but again, the ending is too sweet, and it would be much better if there was a cookie extra. Ps: When I first read it, two words came to my mind: That's it? !

After a long time, I dared to read those two ominous extras so that the knife would not hurt so much.

It's a very interesting setting. The time traveler is coupled with hypnosis to copy memories. The writing style is a little bit stream-of-consciousness, but it expresses the feeling of insanity. Juan Fu's description is very vivid. Unfortunately, the stream-of-consciousness makes the plot a bit confusing, and the full plot can actually be separated from Sherlock Holmes.

In fact, I have seen it before, and if I watch it again, I will have new feelings.

"Ah, what a crazy world." Well, I thought that was a pretty good ending, if only there was more sugar. I just like this grand background, I love it.

Although it is not sweet enough, it is indeed the best and most comfortable Shenxia fanfic I have ever read.