The Wandering Guide to Mountains and Seas

Congratulations on the completion! When will the next one be released?

I clicked on it and found that it was finished. Congratulations to my wife, it is finally finished.

I like Da Da, okay?

Looking forward to the second part. Will the author write a second part? I want to see a couple giving out sweets while solving crimes and abusing dogs

Dear author, can you write a side story about the heroine? Because I really want to know their story about the whole process of leading the heroine.

Damn, I still have some questions. Please answer them if you see them. 1. Will the heroine still change her bloodline every day? 2. Have you ever thought about leaving this world? Or is he unable to do it? After all, the heroine who has just acquired the bloodline of a mythical beast can see how false this world is. 3. You did not give an explanation as to why the heroine came to the world of Shenxia and why she obtained the bloodline of the divine beast.

Okay, this time it's a serious review. First of all, the writing problem is not very serious. If you write and study often, you will improve. Sometimes you feel that your study is very bad, but it is normal for others to think it is very good. You are not required to write every word and write brilliantly, and it is a good thing to add elements. Only by having a strong imagination can you hold the fan fiction, so that the text will be more interesting. In fact, it is really It's very good; secondly, the character's OOC is really obvious, like his thought palace... A high-functioning sociopath like Juan Fu can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words, or it can be said that there are not many emotional scenes, so it is not natural enough. The author can pay more attention to emotional scenes, especially in daily life, which requires your imagination, and the text will be enriched and not obtrusive. , And also focuses on the secondary characters. I feel that the description of the secondary characters in order to highlight the main characters is rather strange, such as their extreme attitudes towards people, exaggerated reactions to things, etc. However, the description of the heroine is still very detailed and plump, I am very satisfied, and the relationship between Juan Fu and Peanut is also very clearly described, that kind of gay It feels right to go with friends; the last thing is about 27, in one sentence: don't be a coward, just do it, but there are a lot of tutors, so the author will have to do a lot of preparation work. I hope it can go to a higher level and stop being unfinished. If you really have no inspiration, you can take a break. Quality is more important than efficiency. After all, I also like Tsunayoshi. I hope you can write an article soon, come on!

OOC + suspense that doesn't look like suspense = I want to send a big razor blade to the author

Actually, I want to ask a question. Even though I have followed the order, why can't I register as an author?

What should I say? I feel like this ending seems a bit bad. How can it be considered that Mo Ruyu is not dead? What should I do if he comes back? I feel that the ending is a bit weird and I don't quite understand it. Was the last paragraph said by Mo Ruyu?