
[Kuroko's Basketball] Ten Years of Traces, Ten Years of Longing
[黑子的篮球]十年踪迹十年心
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- Completed
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- 6k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
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- JJWXC
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I can only say that it is rare for the author to see an article by Shintaro here! However, I always feel that Shintaro's image deviates a bit from the original work.
The content and the chosen topic are pretty close. In the article, it is also mentioned that Midorima secretly prepared a gift for Kuroko, a late gift. However, the meaning of this gift and the related plot are a bit stiff and a bit abrupt in the whole text, a bit like a burden mixed in between the plots in order to respond to the theme. The structure of the article is relatively simple, mostly composed of dialogue and psychological description. It is simple and direct, making it easy to read. This is the saving grace of this article. The plot is a bit thin. Most of the plot direction is explained in the dialogue between green and black. It is more like a report and talk about life between the two, which dilutes the emotional part between green and black. The character's personality is mainly shown through psychological description and dialogue. Although it is not overly OOC, it also weakens and dilutes the character's original personality. In particular, Midorima's psychological description and his feelings for Kuroko are a bit overly sentimental, so the portrayal of Midorima deviates slightly from the original setting. The rhetorical techniques and scene descriptions in the article are still aesthetically pleasing, and there is still room for improvement in restoring the original characters and plot development. I hope the author can continue his efforts and look forward to his growth and more creations.
There are some words that are not finished yet, so just keep them in your heart. Be it bitter wine or warm flowers, let time let go of it. The description of the article is very detailed, there are no redundant words, but it is very true. The gift never given is a feeling. When I saw Midorima appear for the first time, I thought he was really a arrogant child. Today's lucky thing is to complain. Midorima in the story is so gentle, so gentle that my feelings have blossomed for ten years, but you know nothing about it. Someone told me that love must be expressed, but one can know whether it is warm or cold. If you are not a fish boiled in water, how can you know the joy of taking a bath? Maybe Midorima just drowned in the memories Kuroko gave him that he couldn't get out of. That probably couldn't be summed up by the sadness of a decade. What I care about and like most about the story is probably that when people grow up, they no longer strive for basketball. It's very true. This is a tender story, thank you for bringing it. Finally, could you tell Kuroko-kun to reply to Midorima's feelings? [Isn't today's lucky act a joke? Is it really okay to be so incomprehensible... BY: Memories of carrying soy sauce bottles July 25, 2014 13:36:14
Ten years have separated you and me. I have always liked Midorima-kun, because I always feel that Midorima's gentleness is enough to melt the whole world. He won't express his love loudly like Kise, won't comfort him clumsily like Aomine, won't love Kuroko in the simplest way like Murasakibara, and won't be as domineering as Akashi. All he has is a gentle heart, silently guarding Heizi in his own way. This method is called speechlessness. No need for the power of words, no need for blazing temperature, Midorima has always been on the road of superstition (crossed out) protection, going further and further. Whether you are gone or not, I am here. I think this should be Midorima's love. Finally, I would like to say that this is my first time to write a long review, so I apologize for not writing it well. I also really like the original poster's style~~ Especially the last part, it made me cry, didn't you? ! In fact, I have always felt that the ending of the Black Basketball Team may not be what we imagined. But that doesn't matter at all. Whether they are passionate and inspirational boy comics or animations that have been turned into various stories by us, they have all survived and truly existed in our hearts.
After ten years of separation, you and I have already gone our separate ways. Wenwen is well written! Really awesome! Midorima-kun has liked Xiao Heizi for ten years, waited for ten years, and tolerated it for ten years... When we met again ten years later, he still couldn't express his feelings. QWQ The love that started when he was a boy has been accumulated and precipitated. How many sunrises and dusk must we wait for in ten years, how many springs, summers, autumns and winters must we see... Ten years is really a long time for a person. The first few people have been separated long ago, but this loving mood can persist for so long... QWQ If you like someone, you really don't need to reciprocate. Maybe this can be called love_(:з∠)_I have waited for so long and still have no regrets... This feeling does not need to be heard by anyone. As long as you can know your own feelings, understand your persistence, and be happy to have met the other person, then it is already complete. Although the gift is late, the feeling will still last, right? When the flowers bloom and fall, when the sky turns dark and white... It is really beautiful. After ten years of separation, you and I have already gone our separate ways. When we meet today, I still love you. This feeling never gets old. ================== Every time I comment, I will be incoherent QWQ, please forgive me! _(:з∠)_ The article is very beautiful, thank you Loulousang for writing this articleww
It was really sad to see Kuroko say that he won't play basketball for a long time. And Midorima's secret love for more than ten years turned out to be just a secret love in the end. This article brought too many tears QWQ.
How many decades are there in a human life? How many people can stick to one person for ten years? I feel very sorry for Xiao Lu here. He has been waiting for Xiao Hei for ten years. During these ten years, I believe he has been confused, painful, and even struggled, but he persisted. Such an arrogant person, yet so cautious for one person. Or maybe he always knew that there was only one special person for Xiao Hei. But for Xiao Lu, Xiao Hei is also a special existence! To Tetsuya Kuroko: You are the shadow that I have longed for for more than ten years. You are the light that I will look forward to all my life. You are my dearest lover. I am Shintaro Midorima. . I come from ten years later with you. I have a gift that I have not given you for many years. . Now she returns quietly carrying my full love. . Please tell me the answer using the most beautiful lie in the world and the lie I want to hear the most. Tell me: That piece of sincerity. . You have accepted it. I really like the ending of Dada, which sums up all the love and waiting for Xiaolu. I like Liusha's writing, which is plain yet gripping, with a touch of warmth and a touch of sadness. I hope you can work harder and write better articles (*^__^*)
Damn, it's great wwwww, I found the touch wwww and when I saw you accepted it, I was so moved by the fried chicken wwwwww
So cute beyond words. How should I put it, Green Room Bacteria has waited for him for ten years and loved him for ten years. Nowadays, even the rare meetings have become short and hasty. It is better to say that he is too undecisive and unfrank to give away the love he has hidden for ten years. He lived for another ten years, but even then he could not get closer to the heart of Heizi who was far away in the United States. He determined that this gift would never be given away in his lifetime, just like his love would never be known. Like the last letter that doesn't even have a name. Sorry, although I am very verbose, but I still have something to say. The machine is out of battery. Please allow me to send a part of it first. I can't thank you enough. Midorima-kun knows his feelings too clearly, and knows too clearly that this is hopeless love. Without this emotion, even youthful time becomes imperfect. But he still loves her, which is his deepest obsession. To be honest, he can't be considered a coward. He at least tried to send his love. This is not a belated gift, but a gift that cannot be given. Who calls him Shintaro Midorima? : And the article is really cute. When I started writing fan fiction, I was also replied with long comments like this, which was a fatal blow. Ahhh, everyone is so gentle, I'm almost crying, you bastard. I actually don't know much about green and black CP, but yours is probably the best explanation. Here obz, I will definitely continue to support www in the future. However, although I am not very good at criticizing it, the writing style is still too immature, and the deep feeling of green and black that I want to write well is actually not expressed well enough. But there's something inherently childish about the theme of late gifts. Go practice more. My writing is also very bad, so please give me some advice in the future. Ahhh, it's so troublesome. There's a character limit and I posted it three times. Above.
I read it very carefully. I have to say, it's really good to watch. As someone who has always been a mess in plot continuation, I really envy Liusha's light narrative style. Even though it is just a common thing, it will exude a unique charm in Liu Sha's writing. Liu Sha did not dig so many pitfalls for nothing, nor did the code machine call for nothing. It hurts to feel like I love you but can't say it out loud. Because Sakura has never experienced anything like this, and has never seen the plot of the original work [even one episode = =], so she can only rely on imagination, imagination, and imagination. The pain I can read between the lines is just imagining how hard it is for me. Ten years. A lot can change in ten years, and a lot will fade away as well. Xiaolu persisted in missing her for ten years, but Xiaohei had another person in her heart. It's so sad, QAQ. Liu Shasha grasps the emotions just right, and won't make people look like a resentful woman, nor will she say that she feels Xiaolu's love is as deep as the sea, just talking about it. I used to have a venomous tongue, but after reading the entire article, I found that I couldn't be venomous at all, and I really couldn't find fault with it. Thousands of words can be condensed into one sentence: It's so beautiful! Big, come on! Mwah!