[Cultivation] How to Become a Heartthrob

I can't remember how many years ago it was the last time I was given a negative score. This time it was really frustrating. BE can be endured, and good tragic writing is also touching. The protagonist has an IQ of -5 and is being abused throughout the whole process, while the supporting characters can tolerate being messed around all the time. But the author's narrative has no logic, the full text is unfocused, and the emotional descriptions are as if they were eaten by a dog. Author, have you graduated from middle school? Generally, junior high school essays are of a better quality than this outline essay. This terrible plot could be made up for if the writing was good, but as a result, the writing style of a primary school student is full of imagination. I kept gritting my teeth until the end. I hope Zhenren and Ling Yi can turn over at least once, right? As a result, the ending is indeed on the same level as the writing. Ling Yi dies, Zhen Zhen becomes sluggish and ascends, and everyone else is forgotten by the author... Author, please read your account yourself. Do you feel comfortable reading it?

=_=BE??? This habit is not good. Even if the data is not good, it should not be unfinished. If you feel it is not good, you can write slowly. Moreover, no one has read it now, which means no one has read it. Maybe some readers will read your previous books in the future. The most undesirable thing is unfinished writing. After all, it reflects the author's bad taste. It is more offensive to readers than poor writing or cold writing... Sigh...

Hey... Shake hands, let's work together to pass the QAQ exam!

The author's writing style is cheerful with a bit of seriousness, seriousness with a bit of seriousness, and seriousness with a bit of seriousness. . . . Okay, I'm at a loss for words.

Forgot to score, please make up one!!!

Come on, sad, support you!!! By the way, I just realized, damn, I actually read your article a long time ago...

(°ー°) Only when I saw this did I realize that I had read this article

The scene with the wrong outlook is very similar to the scene in Zhiyifanren, where Shou loves to attack very much, but Gong is a scumbag, and can't always have sex with one person, and then Shou is led astray. Although he likes to attack, he can also have sex with others, but he always attacks others. There is a scene where they are checking on each other side by side. At the most intense moment, the attacker pulls the receiver over for a tongue and kiss.

Seeing that oath... Jian Saner said that he was acting in a subtle way and I don't know why...

I am also very cute. At the end of my master-apprentice years, my moral integrity is shattered.