He Always Dies Before the Superheroes [Western Crossover]

The ending was too abrupt, right? ? ? Is it just a matter of hastily ending it like this? Didn't you explain a lot of things? ? Are you kidding me? The emotional line develops like crazy at the end, right? The proposal was so sudden that I was speechless! What are these things? That's it? There is also a plot line. The endings of the other vests have not been explained? The Sheriff's tracing of Hyde's identity? Captain and the others immediately lost touch with all this? The writing about Wanda's brother and sister was also without beginning or end, and there was no follow-up? What about the plot development after that? I was speechless. In the end, this plot line was like drinking pesticide. I just explained the main plot situation hastily and ignored everything else, right? The development of other characters is really not explained at all, and they just disappear from the plot? Is this the end? I was really happy to see the ending. I had been fattening up for a while, so I stayed up all night to finish it. It almost pissed me off. The writing was quite good at the beginning, but then we started to build unfinished buildings? Just like this, in the last chapter, what else does the author say he is satisfied with? Is that an irony? Are you sincere? How funny! Fraud? I pre-ordered this article before it was written. I liked the setting very much and was waiting for the end in years. The beginning is actually fine, but can you accept this hasty and muddled ending? Or is that your level? What kind of ending is this? ? ? What about deceiving people? ? ? Can Jinjiang refund the money? ? ? Does it count as the end if it is marked as finished? Could it be that just explaining the identity of the protagonist would be the end? Does the author have professional qualities? ? ? Do you know what an ending is? ? ? This is not a question of level, but a question of attitude. You have lost your enthusiasm for this article and have not yet completed it with a sense of responsibility! ! Really, I don't ask you to do anything to echo or sublimate the idea at the end, but can you explain everything that needs to be explained clearly? ! ! What the hell is written behind this? ! ! Maybe I am a little emotional and my words are a little harsh, but the story I have been waiting for for years should not end like this! ! ! I am very dissatisfied, very dissatisfied! ! ! I still gave this review a two-point rating because I have watched how this article ended over the past few years and the author at least did not run away halfway, but my true thoughts are not a two-point rating at all! ! I am very dissatisfied with this ending! ! ! It's not that I'm dissatisfied with the plot, but that I'm dissatisfied with the author's attitude that he didn't even think about writing the ending, and just wanted to reveal his identity quickly and get it over with! ! I really can't stand it! ! ! I'm so angry! ! ! So irresponsible! ! ! At the end of this level, can the author have some sense of responsibility? ? ? Is this really the ending? ! ! Really disappointed, disappointed, disappointed! ! ! If I had known earlier, I wouldn't have watched it! ! ! Money is spent in vain and people wait in vain. It's really better to have never seen it! ! ! So angry! ! !

It's unfinished, the setting is very good, the characters are thin, the superheroes seem to be basically just Tony and the captain, the logic is not flawed, but there are indeed some places that are confusing, it's too fast, just like a flash card, the story ends in a swish, swish, swish, and the emotional development is very awkward, like it's for love. Love and love are mostly tools. It's like an expanded version of the outline. It's a pity. The author's writing style is good, but there are some inconsistencies in the article (not many). From the comments, it should be caused by the intermittently updated article. Alas, it's a pity. It is a good story, but it is not well told.

I finished it in two days. The rest of the plot does feel like it's going downhill all the way. Many settings are not perfect, there are many loopholes, and there are many places that can be expanded upon. The first half of the article is really fascinating, but it's a pity that it's so late. After reading so many articles, this is really the first time I have contributed negative points. I hope my wife can treat every post more seriously and patiently. It doesn't matter if the progress is slower or if it gets stuck and settles, it's better than being unfinished anyway. What a shame. In short, I really hope that this wonderful setting can be written (although it is a bit exaggerated, but if you know in advance how the second half of the plot will be handled, I will definitely not order it all. It's sad. It's like you find a delicious layer cake and after a few bites, there is no filling. The back is full of flour.

The future of the Majias was not explained well. Majia and Chaoying also have strong feelings, so it ended inexplicably.

As long as there is a routine, it will not end like this. I have been looking forward to and worrying about the ending of the first few chapters, and the result is as expected, it is unfinished. In fact, the follow-up of this story is really easy to write. Hyde's true identity is discovered. After some stories, Caesar feels that his vest is an independent individual. Like himself, he is an android with his own personality. The android develops the Sunset Organization, and then experiences the pressure of public opinion and battles with alien creatures, and finally has a complete human consciousness and is with Stark (although I still prefer Captain) Alas:-( There is no future for androids.

I really appreciate it... I ordered it all, and I regret it so much. After reading it, I felt that I was deceived. The ending was completely unfinished, and the setting was not rounded out. The other vests did not have a reasonable ending. I might as well have escaped back without cp. In the end, I insisted on having the protagonist fight with Stark, which was awkward and awkward.

I really enjoyed watching it, but the ending was a bit rushed. Qaq I'm actually looking forward to the sequel. I feel like it's well written and there's still a lot that can be written and improved.

It feels a bit unfinished and the ending is a bit abrupt.

... Ah... Could this be the legendary bad ending?

Ah? Ah? Ah? Did you know it was unfinished only after you ordered everything? ? What!