
[Pokemon] Traveling with Xiao Mao
[神奇宝贝]和小茂一起旅行
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After seeing the end, I really regretted spending money to buy all the chapters?
It turned out to be a novel written in 14 years, clocked in in 22 years
To be honest, I think I should have only bought the ending chapter before deciding whether to buy them all, because I felt deeply cheated after seeing this ending... But I am still grateful to the author for coding so many words and for the fierce battle that he painstakingly thought out. After all, not every author can insist on writing a long fanfic, which requires a lot of effort and time. In the process of reading the whole article, I was not convinced that this is my favorite style, so I read it all, but because I bought the whole article at once, and I felt that it would be a waste of my money not to finish it... I'm not too surprised that there is a limit on the number of Pokémon's skills in this article. I just think it would take away a lot of fun. But such a limit is actually good for the author, because otherwise there would be a memo to remember the moves each Pokémon has used, too Having too many skills will make the battle scene confusing... Skills are more about finesse than too many. Didn't you see that in anime, Pikachu uses 100,000 volts, steel tail, and lightning flash the most? Xiaoye's Pokemon all have their own personalities, and most of them feel unpredictable, and small numbers make people feel unreliable. Such as the Emperor of Jue, such as Slowpoke... Speaking of which, why did Master Trick let Xiao Ye contact him after Slowpoke evolved? Here is another pitfall? When I first gave up on bringing the mini dragon, I thought it was nothing. After all, it was a main line that made Xiao Mao aware of Xiao Ye's mystery... And then I found out It turns out that Xiaoye is lucky enough to be able to see all kinds of rare Pokemon, such as Xiduolan and Burning Bug, but whether she can conquer them is another matter. Just like Master Zhi, he has seen so many mythical beasts, has he ever caught one? In this way, Master Zhi and Xiaoye are quite similar in some respects. Although I feel sorry for the author, I actually wanted to give up the article halfway through. The character of the heroine was one of the things that disappointed me. How can I put it, I thought it was quite novel at first, but the heroine has always been so self-pitying, unconfident, and untrustworthy, which made me feel like I hated my son for not being successful. Until the end, after I saw the reason, I still felt that this reason was nothing, maybe because the reason was not good enough. It's profound enough. The author only mentioned it briefly at the end. I couldn't deeply understand the reason why the heroine's "weak white lotus" character has remained so unchanged/"corrected". I read the readers' comments, and some people said that it felt like a snake's tail. When the author replied that it was not really over, I thought there would be a sequel, but I read the author's column and found a sequel. No. Maybe it means that because this is an open ending, the story of Xiaoye and Xiaomao is not over yet? In fact, at the end, the author still has a lot of foreshadowing and pitfalls that have not been revealed. For example, to obtain the approval of the elders, why the villagers initially thought Xiaoye was a savior but turned out to be a disaster, how to save the parents of the villagers who slapped the villagers in the face, etc. These plots are not included, and the rival boy has always wanted to catch up. Who is this person? Xiaoye grows up and talks with her powerful rivals so that her powerful rivals at least know how to treat Pokemon well, no matter how weak or powerful they are, and there is no discrimination or anything like that... So, what about the sequel that was promised to include the growth process, the slap in the face, and the unraveling of the mystery? I can only say that after seeing this ending, I have a feeling of being out of breath and choking in my heart... It's 2016, are you still here? I love and hate Xiaoye, I love and hate this fan, and I have no love or hate for the author...
It has been four years since I last posted a comment below, and I have finished reading this book again today. Although I feel that there will definitely be no second part after such a long time, I still have the slightest expectation... I wonder if the author continues to write articles, and if so, where is it? It seems that there is no use in waiting here, but maybe I will continue to wait...
[Crying] Is there any follow-up? I really cried so much that I couldn't get enough of it.
Finished reading on March 20, 2024, looking forward to the second part
I know the great existence of 341 ways to cut off a cat's ears hahahahaha
When I saw it said in the comments below that it was over, I was so scared that I came in, and it turned out to be true! Of! Over! Knot! Got it! Woohoo, I'm waiting for the sequel. Then, enter the serious comments (serious face Daigo: "Are you here to tell me the good news that you are broken up in love?" Young man Dawu, you have discovered the truth! It's a pity there is no reward The miserable Maodian is already so miserable that he seeks comfort from you. Please don't poke the knife into the wound again Also, young man Dawu, why are you going to Hezhong? Should I go after girls? Should I go after girls? Or should I go after girls? Don't take advantage of this opportunity to interfere! You will be punished by God! ! ! ! And what about Brother Mao's crow's beak you mentioned - "even if you are kidnapped by someone" - this kind of thing can actually be effective? ? ! ! ! What should Brother Mao do, you bastard! ! ! Brother Mao will become depressed if he continues to work hard like this! Sister Xiaoye, who has worked hard for so long and raised her for so long, was actually abducted!!!!!! But I'm really curious whether that person is the Daigo boy or the arrogant Yusuke boy? These two people are both real rich people, so this is the struggle between the rich people and the top students!!! Just wait and see the miserable face of Brother Mao. Uh-huh! Sister Xiaoye, please don't go up and hit me with a last-minute hit, be careful to stab her to death~~~~ Then it will be a fight between rich people! ! ! Do you know how to scatter money? I want to pick it up! ! ! (Hit me! It's your moral integrity that should be picked up, and your righteous words just now!!! You're obviously just finishing up Brother Mao, right? So let's talk about Brother Mao's affectionate confession and the distribution of future housework (what the hell is this!! Where else did it come from? So what are you talking about? Brother Mao is really a good negotiator (?)! ! The location of Xiaoye's Pokémon - Brother Mao's Omu Research Institute - is dedicated to Xiaoye's sister. Brother Mao personally monitors Xiaoye. Whether you have mental or physical problems, you can go to Brother Mao, a friend of women. (Beat! How long do you want Brother Mao? Where is he? If you don't believe it, ask Brother Mao. Turn around and ask: Isn't it, Brother Mao? Young Master Mao with a black face: Electric shock monster, one hundred thousand volts! Then, then, it's the point (do you have such a thing as a point? The secret of Xiaoye's life experience is revealed! ! ! The mysterious behavior (?) Of Sister Xiaoye that appears throughout the entire text finally has a reasonable explanation! ! ! But this is just the tip of the iceberg of the many mysteries surrounding Xiaoye. We are still waiting for us to discover the truth through the layers of fog. So everyone, please stay tuned and see you next year~~~~What a ghost! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Meow, do you think that such a superficial explanation can satisfy me? (Although it unexpectedly seems quite appropriate to put it on Xiao Yemei) See you next year! ! ! ! Do you want me to say to my grandson when I die: Ahhh! Remember that meow must burn it to me after you finish writing it! I know the great existence of 143 ways to skin a cat hahaha (How great is this thing? If I don't see Sister Xiaoye and the bitter Maodian next year~~~~~Heheheheheheheheheheheheheyouknow Ahhhhhhh, I have written so much. It is full of my resentment (smiley face) Then I will shamelessly write more and turn it into a long review. In fact, I just wanted to say that Sister Nanami, you are such a good partner like a god! ! ! Whether it's persuading Sister Xiaoye or stopping Dr. Ohki (so is bitterness something that can be inherited? Dr. Ohki: I just want a midnight snack) to help Moden create a space for two people to be alone, it's really great! ! ! 365 Likes! ! ! Remember to kowtow when Maodian and Xiaoyesang get married. , 143 (
Waiting for the sequel_(: 3
Hey~~Cat GN~When will the second part be released~~I am so eager to wait. . . Did you make me rush after reading this? ! It's as deceiving as watching The Eight Thieves. . . Not a single bit of the mystery surrounding the heroine has been revealed, what a mouthful! ! ! But the writing is so wonderful~~ It makes me know a lot about this kind of subject matter! ! ! ! QAQ begs the second part to open up the pits as soon as possible