[Pokemon] Which Page of the Pokedex Today?

This is a long comment that I don't know if there is a chance that the author will see it and reply to it. But I can't read Bawangwen - not leaving a single comment would be too unkind. PM fanfics with more than a hundred chapters are very rare! It's even rarer that the original characters don't have too many OOC characters. So after much thought, I wrote a long review. But I think it should be more like a review than a long review... To be honest, I felt happy (at the beginning) and frustrated (at the end) while reading this article. I really like the way the heroine and Daigo get along at the beginning. At the beginning, I even had the feeling that Daigo and the heroine were old acquaintances who played well together. Even when he found out that the heroine had cheated and "robbed" his Mega Metagross, Shi Dawu, he was not angry. He just smiled bitterly and lamented that the heroine was still a heroine. Then after the heroine left with her mouth full of words, he asked the heroine to move to the Weather Research Institute with his mega stone. I feel that even if Daigo knows that the heroine dare not not return it, and just wants to tease him, being able to temporarily "entrust" something as important as the mega stone - and his trump card mega stone - in the hands of the heroine is a sign of trust (although this is largely based on his confidence in his own strength, and he is convinced that no one dares to cheat him and not return the gift). Although it is mentioned later that the reason why Daigo was not in a hurry to get the Mega Stone back was because he wanted to see if Metagross would change without the power provided by the Mega Stone, with the intention of finding out the connection between Mega Evolution and Mega Elves, but if he really wanted to prove this point, he could have kept the Mega Stone in German, and there was no need to directly ask the heroine to ask for this option. This illusion that "Dago and the heroine have a good relationship" lasts until the plot of Umi Purple. When I saw that Daigo asked to go with the heroine and the author gave a certain description of why Daigo made this decision, I realized that I had gone astray. In fact, there are some clues about this matter before. If Daigo really plays well with the heroine, then in the scene where the heroine is taken to Meteor Falls alone by Manju, when Ruby hands over the things in person and tells Daigo that he and Ibuki-senpai are separated, something is wrong, and the one with Ibuki-senpai is about to fight. The person is very strong, and the seniors managed to cope with it with the help of terrain and strategies. He also learned from his subordinates that when the heroine was confronting the people of the Marine Corps before leaving the ruins, Daigo's first action should be to take Ruby straight to the Meteor Falls to save people. Even if it ends up being a misunderstanding or a false alarm, at least you can witness the safety of the other party with your own eyes. Therefore, it can be seen that the heroine and Daigo are really just old classmates in the literal sense. Even if Sirona exchanges a favor for Daiwu to protect the heroine in Fangyuan, it will not be able to influence whether Daiwu takes action. To tell you the truth, I was completely confused when I first saw the plot of Hai Zi Jin, I tell you. After all, I have never played the original version of red and blue. The memory is still stuck in the third generation (NDS Red, Blue, Emerald), so my first reaction was: what is that stuff? Is there such a company in the game? I'm not impressed. Then I saw Daigo smiling and giving "advice" to the heroine, and I suddenly felt a chill. Is this the gentle, amiable and very trustworthy Mr. Fangyuan that I remember? I know that the Pokémon world is not as clean and uplifting as I thought, and there will be more or less dark sides, even if TV tries its best to downplay this. But there is nothing about the Daigo as a "leader" that the author describes that makes me feel inconsistent. I even suddenly had the feeling that "this is the cold-blooded side of Daigo who is the actual leader of the alliance and doesn't usually show it to outsiders." Daiwu is strong, both in terms of strength and mind. As a person in a high position, he must know a lot of shady secrets, but he will not tell them easily, nor will he let others easily access these shady secrets, especially when these shady secrets involve alliance secrets or German. As the leader of Fangyuan, his first consideration is how to protect Fangyuan, and he mostly looks at problems from the perspective of the overall situation. Even if his attitude is not obvious, in fact, his actions are often based on his own judgment. He is calm and thoughtful, and has prepared targeted plans in advance. Full of confidence and power, he watched the other party step into the trap he had set in advance, and then general. He watched with cold eyes as the heroine went into battle despite being ill because of the Kyogre incident. She was looking up information, busy and exhausted, but still did not explain his plan in advance. ——Because he felt it was unnecessary. There is no need to tell the heroine in advance who will affect his plan or even deny his plan. Daigo even knows that his plan conflicts with the heroine's plan. If the heroine succeeds, his will definitely fail. If he succeeds, the heroine's will definitely fail first, because his plan is based on the failure of the heroine's plan, which is equivalent to a precondition. But he still believes in himself more than the heroine's plan. The difference in views between Dai Wu and the heroine is also reflected in their treatment of Xiaoyao. Daigo believes that without experiencing pain and adversity, one cannot grow to the maximum extent. And this kind of growth is very necessary for Xiaoyao. But he is not that kind of cold-blooded senior. He prepared everything, and even weakened Kyogre in advance to the extent that Xiaoyao could handle it. Even if Xiaoyao had to take risks when facing Kyogre, the risk was not big enough to affect his life. But the heroine's concept is obviously different from Daiwu's. She doesn't approve of Daiwu's approach. Rather than letting Xiaoyao face the danger, she feels that it is their seniors who should shoulder these responsibilities. His attitude towards Xiaoyao and Ruby is also more protective. When Daigo asked Xiaoyao to face Kyogre, and the heroine learned all of Daigo's plans from Daigo's mouth, the rational, thoughtful, and black Daigo completely appeared in my mind. As a leader, he had thought everything out in advance and made arrangements for the female protagonist who might get in the way (although the arrangement did not work because Mi Keli, a pig teammate, played the sound of his cell phone). At that time, he already had some thoughts about the heroine, but he was still able to clearly distinguish between public and private matters. This is a plot that I really appreciate the author's arrangement. It is precisely because Daigo did this that there is no OOC. As Dewen's young boss, Dawu first protects the interests of the family and the company. If the dark secrets known by others will harm their interests, Daiwu will never sit still and wait for death. For example, he accompanied the entire episode of Hai Zi Jin. But this is only limited to those things that he feels cannot be known to others. If others discover things that are insignificant but will affect the impression score, Daigo is not afraid at all. Let the impression score fall, he will still be the league champion. No matter how your impression score drops, he can still live a happy life, but on the contrary, you will be constrained. Even if you want to take action, you will be worried about Devin's current power and Daiwu, who is also the champion, and have to weigh in your heart whether it is worth offending both at the same time. He has a bright side, but also a relatively cold-blooded and selfish side. This is a very flesh-and-blood Mr. Daigo (touching) But, I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this article is that Daigo's emotional transition towards the heroine is a bit abrupt. It feels like Daigo suddenly fell in love with the heroine and wanted to pursue her. Then the part where the heroine suddenly agreed and then suddenly went back on her word within one day felt weird and incomprehensible. When I saw that part, I had the guts to shake the heroine and yell to her: No, sister, didn't you just agree to be Daigo's girlfriend? Why did you suddenly regret it? You can't be so unkind. Do you know that there is a strong suspicion of fraud? Then he was silently angry at Mr. Daigo who was angry but did not express his dissatisfaction. In the two years after the heroine returned to Sinnoh, she probably only contacted Daigo a few times. Even leaving without saying goodbye, I didn't call to apologize later. I just wrote a very official letter of apology to Dawu. Girl, even if your assistant objects to you, you can beat me quietly! ←I feel here that the feelings between the two are completely unequal! In my imagination, the big man should be able to get married as soon as he gets it. It doesn't matter if he doesn't want such an outrageous woman. It's not like I can't find another wife (no) and it's not like I can't fall in love with other women. But, I didn't see how Daigo forgave the heroine for not being angry with her later. The heroine immediately became possessive as soon as she returned to the romantic relationship. It felt like the heroine left without saying goodbye as if it had never happened. They're like this after two years? Where is the mental transition in the middle? QWQ I don't understand the brain circuits of Daiwu and the heroine. Can anyone explain it to me. My favorite part of the whole article is [Extra Chapter·Chaos War! Tournament of Champions! ], Funny and sweet, very enjoyable to watch. I was even looking forward to the post-marriage sequel between the two of them, but I didn't know that the author didn't write it until the end, so sad! Final score (bushi) Character setting: 9.5 (Dawu's image gradually got a little out of shape after he started pursuing the heroine) Combat description and psychological description: 9 (I feel it would be better if the changes in the male and female protagonist's mentality can be included) Romance line of male and female protagonist: 7 (a little better than passing grade. The reason for giving the author 7 points is that the extra chapters in Chapters 83-88 are very cp-like and can give extra points, but the main line really can only be given a 5! No, maybe not even 5 for QwQ. Is there really any emotional drama in the main plot? I have fallen into self-doubt - I only saw a lot of rival scenes and only a little love drama! And the process of establishing a relationship between these two guys is not flirtatious at all. I already want to cry.) Although I know it's impossible, I feel like there are still a few extra chapters to explain in this article. Author, are you really not going to give these two guys a candy? ! And I am very interested in the Shura scene between Daigo and the sister-controlled Sirona, very interested. I even felt that Du and Sirona, who had their sisters robbed of each other in the extra chapter, were very CP. (I silently imagined that Sirona glared at Du and asked them to pay for the repairs together, because they also contributed to the destruction. As a result, Du tilted his head and refused to look at the scene, which made him so cute)

For him, every minute and second of his life was given to Ibuki. He worked hard. He loved his master. From the initial indifference to the favor, for Bobo, every moment was happy. He did things for his dear master. He had not lived a bitter life for more than twenty years. His dear master loved him and liked him. When he died, he must be as happy as ever.

I just feel that Luzi's emotional scenes are really hard to do hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, but I love the plot! I'm really happy to read the PM article with more than a hundred chapters!

In other words, without Bobo, in this world line Daigo would have no chance to flirt with Ibuki hhhh ← It's so tragic that I laughed out loud. My wife's writing is really great, but I'm not very good at writing long reviews due to my poor Chinese skills, so… I'm going to start the third week! [[[By the way, look forward to the new work ww

He has always been that stupid little bird (T^T)

This little bird is really stupid, but it feels so stupid. QAQ really likes its emotion.

As a salty fish who can't even write an 800-word essay, it took me a long time to write this review. Since I have a hard time with plot characters and the like, I'll just talk about the author (laughs) The first time I got to know Alu was when I searched for Pokemon oras keywords in JJ, and then found the illustrated book. There was no cp at first, but out of my love for the Fangyuan area (...), I still read it. Later, I didn't pay attention for a while, and it immediately became a romance tag. The male protagonist Dawu, I still remember the author explained a little about Pokemon in his words, and said that anyone who can understand it should come and hook up. So I was very happy and reached out to hook up with the author after reading the article for thousands of years. This article on the illustrated book is interspersed with some descriptions of elves, which come from pokedex. As far as I am concerned, when I play games and read illustrated books, I only look at attributes and the like, and rarely read these descriptions. The first time I saw these descriptions, I was surprised, Alu, how much you like Pokemon. If you look through all the pitfalls of Alu, you will find that the heroines of Alu have certain similarities in character. They are also different from the general heroines who grow up gradually. The heroines of Alu all have a certain degree of strength from the beginning, which is quite enjoyable to watch_(:з)∠)_ Wandering Elufa, this author, has only two articles in the beginning, and now there are a lot of holes. He has dug holes without filling them or simply has copywriting. He can do anything with his imagination. As long as there is love, he can vote for women in any unpopularity. With women voting for women, he suddenly wanted to change the male protagonist. Then he just decided to change and felt that another character is better than others. Cuter, or simply from no cp to bg, she will be sweet when she is happy, and she will be sweet and sad when she is unhappy. The heart of an elderly person like me will tremble when she sees it, for fear of eating a mouthful of glass shards. She also has obsessive-compulsive disorder, and she will feel uncomfortable for a long time if the publishing time is not regular. How should I put it, she is a bit of a yandere. Having said so much that has nothing to do with the article, here is my opinion on the illustrated article (I don't like to pat my opinion lightly) As long as I can watch Pokemon fics, I've basically scanned them, and I'll read the good ones several times. I can't find many female fics, and I've also watched some male fics. Generally, the routines of pm fics are to promote gyms and finally fight in alliances, etc., With some dramas interspersed in them. The storyline is basically the same as the plot of the game (or TV), but although the main line of the illustrated book is the plot of the game, the perspective of the protagonist is not here at all. According to the author's words - following the adventure flow, I might as well play the game by myself. La, and the description of the characters - not to mention description, after all, they are written by fans, they are all written with their own understanding of the original work. Alu can always find some subtle laughter, such as the vine tree, hahahahaha Raspberry head, are you talking about his two hairs? Hahahahaha, I didn't notice at all at first, but then I realized that they are really similar to Daigo. According to the setting, he is a calm and good young man. But after reading this article, I inexplicably had the feeling that all Daigo's are black when cut open. And the character of Manzhu is a new character introduced by Oras, the Meteor People, who is a rich man with an all-dragon team and owns a Mega Tyrannosaurus (I preferred to call him a Salamander before Guanzhong came out). The description is great. For a while, I wanted to betray my male god and let Ibuki and Manzhu gl. A Lu seems to be an experienced driver who knows how to drive a car, but... Is it difficult to handle romantic dramas? I totally read the ending of the illustrated book! No! Enough! Even adding extras isn't enough. Isn't there any sweet emotional drama? Okay, it's my fault that I asked for a romantic drama in my pocket, but you have to live up to the romance on the label (pointing) Well, anyway, come on Allu, I will always read your articles_(:з)∠)_ ——Commemorating the third anniversary of Wandering Elufa's writing (five days less)

Hey, when I saw the death of a long-haired dog in Sun and Moon, I really felt that even the second dimension was real and cruel.

Nothing was explained clearly! ! ! Dawu didn't catch his wife at all! ! ! Another extra story! ! ! Beg on your knees

Hey hey Lily Dafa is good *▽*