In Jiangnan, peach blossoms were pink and willow catkins white. That was how he and she first met.
He lay drunk between heaven and earth, looking askance at all the affairs of the world.
He led his little gray donkey and swung his wooden wine gourd, never once acting like a proper gentleman.
"Girl, sweeping up willow catkins is such a waste of a beautiful scene."
Those were the first words he said to her.
Pear blossoms pale white, willows deep green; when the catkins fly, blossoms fill the city.
He understood that fame, fortune, and gain could never ultimately outweigh fate. He had always thought he knew what he wanted, but in the end, he discovered that even he could feel regret.
"Better to smile, return to the mortal world, and lie drunk between heaven and earth."
Those were the last words he said to her.
Peach blossoms pink, willow catkins white, shining in the sun and drifting with the wind.
They first met beyond the flowers, but it was only like a dream.
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First of all, I really need to say sorry to Xi Xin. I have been too busy recently. I didn't finish my work until yesterday. I quickly read Xi Xin's article and wrote a comment today. Xi Xin just spared Pengu for once because he is so pitiful and miserable... In fact, Penguu likes to read this kind of short ancient romance novels the most. Overall, the article is good, because Penguu can feel every picture Xi Xin wants to paint, especially the use of some words and phrases. Xi Xin looks very professional. Are you studying Chinese? Moreover, it is not difficult to see that Xi Xin is meticulous about his writing, and it feels like the character dialogues were written with careful consideration. However, in order to fulfill his duties as a commentator, Penguo had to find fault with others. Xixin was considerate and considerate. The first thing I want to talk about is the storyline. After reading the whole article, my first feeling is that the story is very complete and the chapters are not continuous. This is especially prominent in the later chapters, such as from Chapter 8 to Chapter 9. In fact, if you look carefully, you can still find some clues, but I think readers generally will not read it word by word like Pengu. Everyone reads the plot, which may cause the disadvantage of not knowing the reason. Secondly, there is a problem with the plot. I have a deep feeling that the development is too sudden. It feels like I am rushing to finish the manuscript before ending it in a hurry. This point is focused on the plot of the death of the general. Before, it has always been developed calmly. When the general died, it suddenly felt like I was riding a rocket. In this way, all the stories developed rapidly and then ended, which was a bit confusing. Peigu suggested that Xixin should either enrich the plot after the death of the general, or speed up the previous progress, so that the story would be more natural and less abrupt. The second point is about writing. Xi Xin's writing skills are really good, and the descriptions are very beautiful. The readers feel like they are immersed in it. Penguo has said this before, so I won't go into details here. What I want to talk about is Xi Xin's word processing. In this article, the biggest word processing problem is the personal pronoun, which is he (she). What does it mean? It means That is to say, when we say a sentence or write an article, if we have a person's name before, we can just replace it with him (her). But even if we use he (her) instead, we don't need to say he (she) every time we write about this person in the sentence... I really found that there are a lot of he (she) in Xixin's article, and I think a large part of it can be deleted... These are the suggestions from Pengu. After reading so many articles, Xi Xin's article is my favorite so far and I think it is the best one written by Pengu. So the shortcomings I have found are the above two points. It does not need to be too rigorous. After all, it is not Chinese studies. The goal is for readers to be happy and happy. If you pay too much attention to every word, it will look dull. What do Xi Xin think? Finally, I would like to apologize again. I really didn't delay my comment until so late on purpose~~~~(>_<) By Mo Ran Qian Cheng Big Spraying Mushroom
In fact, such a possibility exists, because I love you, walk the path you have walked, see the scenery you have seen, do the things you have done and want to do in your way, and finally, become the second you. Because I love you, I become the second you, understand your past mood, understand your past state of mind, understand your past state, and then, I can finally put you in my heart. . Getting over You.
I really like the scene with Xiyanhua, it's very touching, oooh~
The writing is great, can you share it with me? My Penguin: Umbrella Qi Ling'er Yao'er Si Ling