When the Snow Departs

"Snow Will Leave" has a very ancient name and a fantasy love story with a mythical flavor. I haven't seen a story like this in a long time. The scene where the fairies are whispering in the opening chapter looks familiar for some reason. Then the protagonist makes his first appearance while others are talking, and the foreshadowing is so stunning that one can't help but look forward to how tragic the national beauty Peony will be. Then peonies, peonies, and magnolias appeared in turn... The whole garden came together, which reminded the fish of that famous movie. Yes, those are the two words that come to your mind at this moment. Since there is no advertising fee, I won't go into details here. I would like to add one more sentence here, peony and peony are called "the two best flowers", one is the king of flowers, and the other is the flower form. They looked alike, so they laid out a bright line with their names, so that you could tell at a glance which one had a grudge with which one. The author's setting is very good. Therefore, after having two stunning heroines, there must be a male protagonist who is uniquely handsome in the world and captivates thousands of girls in the three realms and has a unique and prominent identity. He is also the cause and catalyst of all conflicts - Yun Wei. This name is elegant and elegant, which seems to be slightly inconsistent with his identity as a demon king, but it is still a refreshing combination, which makes people happy to look at it. Speaking of the appearance of the male protagonist, there is always a feeling that the aura is slightly weaker. Including all the things he did for Peony, it all felt a bit black-faced and stiff. Well, I was writing a review and flipping through the original text again and again. When I accidentally turned to this chapter, I had to complain about it. In Wulitou, Yun Wei saw peonies blooming all over Yu Danye overnight, thinking it was the peonies casting a spell, and was furious to settle the score with her. This emotion comes out of nowhere. As the king of a realm, shouldn't he be calm and steady... Mudan was the woman he saved out of curiosity and she was still sick. Is he, the majestic demon king, still afraid that she has plans for him, Yu Danye? At this point, I have to talk about the role of Shaoyao. The momentum of the opening chapter is already inferior to that of Peony, which seals the fate of her heroine. In the sky, five hundred years seems to be an inevitable disaster. Unless something happens, we will not be able to live up to this full number of years. Mudan and Shaoyao fell in love with the same person, and then Shaoyao worked hard to get the person she loved. Although the struggle between sisterhood and love was not given too much detail, it became a bright spot intentionally or unintentionally. She said, "Every time he sees me, he can never take his eyes away..." ——Actually, I was a little confused. He couldn't move his eyes away. Is it peony or peony? In the first half of the story, "he" looks like a reincarnated man with amnesia, and he looks like a scumbag no matter how you look at it. The subsequent transformation of "Yunwei" is slightly unfavorable. The author can think about it and add some psychological description. In any case, the public hopes that the person the heroine loves also loves the heroine. Here are the things that Yu still doesn't understand after reading the entire text: Since Peony already has the heart to perfect Peony, why did she fall into the sea of fire after winning the crown of Flower God? Peony accompanies "him" back from all the calamities. If "he" is Yun Wei, then Yun Wei has fought hard for the peony for thousands of years and finally the sun hangs in the wild fields. Then where does the peony make the peony come true? As the flower god, peony has disappeared in the heaven for two years. Is it true that no one will find it? Can I continue to be the Goddess of Flowers if I cancel my vacation when I go back? In Chapter 8, Shaoyao said that Mudan jumped into the sea of ​​fire, and she was very sad. She was sad for Mao... Was she so sad that she ran away to the human world? This is the same chapter, which reincarnation was Chen Mu in? He is the Yun Wei of the past, so what is the Yun Wei of now? I have read this story many times, mainly because I didn't understand it the first time. Then sorting out the plot content is a bit cumbersome. In fact, for short stories, simple context (not to say that there is no need to advance layer by layer), clear character relationships (not to say that there is no need for grievances and resentments), smooth plot advancement (not to say that there are no exciting ups and downs) - these are its advantages. However, in this story, the jumping time and space scene is a feature, but it also becomes an inexplicable burden. Before we can figure out the previous puzzle, another difficult mystery appears. For the setting of a short story, it seems a bit difficult. To sum up, the clear and clear character relationship should be said to be a major feature of "Snow". The whole article is described with refreshing yet delicate and simple emotions. Although hate and love are blended, they still stubbornly refuse to merge into one. It's just that the character's character is a bit unstable. Every corner says what he should say, but something is missing. The character seems to be perfected, but it's never clear enough. On the contrary, Peony leaves the most profound impression after reading the entire text. In my opinion, the most perfect thing about a short story is to end a story just before it begins but before it unfolds, leaving a feeling of unfinished content. What does the author think? Also, in the dance between peonies and peonies among the three, are you sure you are not trying to "seek death and seek life"? Thousands of Ink-Stained Cities Crispy Fish Presented 2012/7/21

Very warm feeling. . . .