[Heroes] Exposed Future

① Hello, Miss Aji, this is Hazelnut, which has been delayed for a week. The comments that have been delayed for a week can finally be thickened. 0W0 All the comments that follow are completely made by a pure reader. Please forgive me if I offend you. ②A fan of the American TV series Heroes. Other than that, I didn't get any information from the copywriting. This article is 80,000+, so it should be called a middle article. Copywriting is the first impression. I really don't recommend it to be so simple. You should put something more or less in place, such as a sentence of copywriting or other words that can attract readers. Next, the placement of links to similar articles and image links in columns is a very wise approach, so the copywriting does not appear too thin. What I saw next was the number of chapters. According to my long-term experience in reading articles, the optimal number of words for a chapter is 3000-4000, but the sudden jump to 1.5W in Chapter 6 really shocked me, and there are 20K words in Chapters 7 and 9. Although the author has the freedom to set the number of words in a chapter, for readers, a chapter of tens of thousands of words is really uncomfortable, giving people a preconceived notion of "it's too long and impatient". Moreover, the introduction of chapters also affects the frequency of the update list, so I suggest Aki try to adjust the word number of chapters or pay attention to future articles. ③"Heroes", I haven't watched too many American dramas, and I have never heard of this one before, but the copy said that it can be watched as an original novel, so I accepted it. In JJ, the number of fans of this drama can be easily managed with a slap in the face, but the lack of fandom does not mean that fewer people will watch it. As you can see from the over a thousand clicks on your first chapter, there are still many people who clicked on this article with the mentality of giving it a try. But based on Aji's past few articles on similar themes and the collection of this article, it shows that there are still some flaws in some places, but there are also places worthy of recognition. Next, I will talk about each angle. ④When I clicked on this article at first, I didn't rush to accept it, but after scanning it for a few times, your writing and writing style attracted me. The decoration was delicate but not draggy, which gave me a strong sense of involvement. Although it is in the third person, the psychological description and character are well drawn. At least I can determine what kind of character this person is with just a few glances. Aji, your writing style and writing style are relatively good among the articles I have read, and it is also the aspect of this article that I like very much. ⑤After reading a few chapters, I was a little confused as to why. Perhaps it was because I had not watched the original drama, and coupled with the multiple changes in the narrator's perspective, the general main line only had an unclear outline in my mind. I finally stopped at the second half of Chapter 7. Please forgive me for not finishing it, but I will stop because I know that I have lost my way. I admit, I have lost my patience. This can also explain why the click gap between chapters is so large. The idea of ​​changing the perspective multiple times to piece together a good story is good, but if it is not mastered proficiently, it will confuse the reader. The perspective of characters in different locations jumps too frequently, which is likely to mess up a good story. If the idea is not tight, I would advise Aji not to write it like this. In fact, you can use one person's perspective from beginning to end, switching appropriately during the process, and then back again. Perhaps this effect will be better. ⑥I read the last chapter, and I also read it if readers have anything to say. It can be seen that Aji is thoughtful in creating his own works. But I don't understand what it means, 'Everyone comes here to read articles to see their favorite characters being prostituted, and to see their favorite works destroyed to the point where they can't see their true colors.' Indeed, some people's mentality is that 'when reading fandom, they just want to see their favorite characters being prostituted', but as an author? If it was really pure prostitution, pure destruction, and pure tearing of the character that many people loved deeply in their hearts, would any readers really read it? Let me ask, can you accept someone who just follows the same routine? Readers need stories as well as characters. I have watched several American drama fanfictions. Many readers went to watch the American drama after reading the author's article. They had never been exposed to that character before. Since they had not watched the original drama, they did not have any mentality of "liking him and wanting to see him prostituted". Do you think these people are also the type who are prostituted just to watch their favorite characters? ⑦Fanjin is a category that is relatively easy to grasp in the novel world. It has its own background. Therefore, it is much easier to set up the background than its original version. If a fanfic can't be written well, can an original novel suddenly be written well? I can tell, Aji, that you completely blame the coldness of your writing on the fact that this is a cold fan. But why don't you think about which type of writing doesn't turn from cold to hot? Hot articles don't burst out randomly, they need the first person to write them. As I said at the beginning, cold subject matter does not mean that your article will be cold! ⑧Try to find the reason for your own writing. Your copywriting says: 'The narrative is basically independent, and there will be no reading difficulties if you have not read the original work. ' There was no barrier to reading and the writing was smooth, but I really couldn't be attracted or roughly understand the main line. ⑨Finally, I want to say that many geniuses with a glass heart have died on the road of being "jumped after just a few words". Change your mentality, so that your writing can make real progress. [Wochao Changping Shop] Produced by [Hazelnut]

So this article is about imagining what the world will look like five years ago five years from now? When I read the last chapter, I realized it was a trap... I still hope to see Sylar's follow-up...

I didn't even leave a message after reading it last time. I regret it. Also, your last paragraph, ╮(╯▽╰)╭

The beginning is powerful! I like heroes very much, but it's a pity that I haven't finished it

... Sent it, is this the memory of the big brother that he just poured into him? Then I saw the English name and had no idea what it meant.

Although heroes are not my thing, it's nice to see you ^_^