[Heroes] Immotal

What interests us most about Heroes is Sylar! At first, it was because of the particularity of his ability. I thought that compared to other superpowers, Sylar's ability was closer to the original "rational" ability. Aren't humans always trying to understand nature and analyze various things in order to make progress? Then there is the character of Sylar. He is a madman, ambitious, capable, unscrupulous to achieve his goals, and arrogant; however, he also has a fragile and easily confused side, which becomes more obvious as the plot goes on. And compared to other characters, Sylar has grown the most and changed the most. To put it in a more inclusive way, it feels like he is actually an over-age teenager who has been delayed in the second phase? (Laughing) We feel that this short story has shown the essence of Sylar very well. Whether it is struggle, middle school (laughing), light or even dark parts, it has been presented very well. It does not have the one-sided tendency of most authors to be overly light or overly dark. The writing style is quite poor. We didn't expect to see this kind of writing in JJ (palm). The only flaw is that the words spoken to Luke in the last paragraph are too poetic. It's not like something a normal desperate person would have the energy to come up with, but the atmosphere is super good! I mean, it's such a pity that we only saw it now!

Who is that blond girl at the end? It can't be Claire, right?

[Heroes]The ups and downs of the Immotal era Hello girl, I am Achi. I'm sorry that it took me so long to write your long review. I'm really sorry. Girl, this is a short story by a fan. Forgive me, I have never seen the original movie by a fan of the girl, so I can only imagine based on the girl's words. As the girl said, this article is indeed a bit unpopular, but saying this does not mean that the article is not good. If the author is attentive, then no matter what type of article or what subject matter, it will undoubtedly be a masterpiece. It doesn't have to be proven by high clicks, cheating collections, or complimentary comments. It is true that data is important in some aspects, but data is not the only one and it is not the standard to prove itself. It can be said that data is just a platform for you to enter v and make money. I won't comment specifically on the copywriting and title. I just feel that the copywriting is too simple and there is nothing about the content of the article. Although we must adhere to the standard of simplicity as beauty, it is better to add a few more words to decorate it. The girl's writing style is good, and it is really suitable for writing modern words, especially urban ones. Because the girl's description of the characters is very good, very detailed, and she can also describe some details. The writing is quite sophisticated, the splicing of words is very smooth, there is no abrupt feeling, and the link between the description of the heart and the description of the action is not dry, nor does it feel like a cassette. That's fine. The disadvantage is that the third-person he and she are a bit messy, and it is best to control them. Let's talk about the content of the story. As I said before, Achi has never read the original work, so it was extremely difficult to remember some of the characters who appeared, and he even had to use pen and paper. After reading the first 3,000 words, Achi remained in a state of confusion. Especially when this happened, "He asked himself why he didn't cut off Bennet earlier. The answer is self-evident. Five years in the empty city can make Peter forgive him for killing Nathan, so why can't eight years make him forgive Bennet for everything he did to him? Even if Bennet forced him to become a heinous killer, even if Bennet tried to murder him again and again, even if Bennet was one of the masterminds behind the plan to let Nathan's personality take over his body." Let me go, who and who are these... Ahem, coming back to that. I found that the dialogue in the girl's article was in the style of an American drama, and the narration was in an urban style. In some places, the idiot actually saw the style of ancient Chinese. It is worth mentioning that the girl blends in very well and does not feel abrupt at all. The girl is great. The girl is not only very proficient in the combination of words, but also in the matching of wording. There are very few words that are repeatedly used in a paragraph, which shows that the girl has a good vocabulary and can hold a lot. "Girl, please work harder, I believe she will have a bright future." When I read the back of the article, I felt more and more: there is a lot of English in the girl's article, not just the names of the characters. This is not good. I probably think so because I haven't read the original work. Too much English will make people unable to understand it. Thinking about it from another angle, no one wants to read an article and just search it on Baidu after reading dozens of words. Finally, let's talk about the advantages of the ending, "His angel was always a little girl with shining blond hair." And the beginning of "Then he saw the girl falling in the dark night, the shining blond hair cut through the darkness, his Claire Bear." The beginning and end echo each other, giving people a feeling of feeling lost, which is very good. From Brothel Twelve Squares A Chi

I remembered that you said you were going to post a sweet message on the 5th, so I came here to see if it was finished. Result. . . Crying bitterly. My dear, if I'm not around, you won't update or post, don't you want me... Keep crying! I've been miserable these past few days. I've been caught with a young man going to do some sewing. My new house has been delivered and my whole family has been jumping around like crazy. Yesterday the workers delivered the toilet air-conditioning range hood, and we went to the self-service sink to install it. Today the workers came to install the air conditioner. When the neighbors were unaccommodating, they had no choice but to ask the workers to climb up from downstairs... In short, I got up at 7 a. M. And went home at 8 p. M., And I didn't even have time. What a mess! No, I must complain. The tragedy for CUP Emperor is that he is going to hold a store owner meeting on Saturday, and I am the homeowner! QAQ In order to evade the inheritance tax... Your sister... Well, in short, we can only meet the master who lives a leisurely life next week. Disciple, I am waiting to see the finale! PS don't forget to apply for the list

The layout is a bit sharp, how did you do it o(╯□╰)o The first sentence at the beginning is inexplicably shocking. It's in the style of an American drama, but the narrative style is a little confusing. The author who doesn't understand the background and doesn't have a big brain can't tell who is who. Although there is only one chapter, I forgive the poster for not being able to get through even a third of the first chapter. It's so painful to see him, he, he, he, he doesn't know who it is...

Can I say that my favorite is sylar? ~~