AI

Author, you are so cute!! I read the comments and found out that this is the background of Invincible Heroes! Although I have never played this game, I know a master in the Elder Scrolls forum. He likes to play this game very much, so I know a little bit about it. What a shame. It is rare to meet an author who also plays stand-alone games... It's been a long time since I started playing games and I came across Nai's column. I was deeply impressed by this literary pen name at first. I came in again today and found out that there are very good works~ I don't know why I can't open the score, so I have to give it a score of 0. I have a heart full of flowers!

You are a very lovely author

It seems... Quite interesting.

Damn, your writing is really good, come back and keep at it QAQ If I can't hold on, you can give me some brain training.

Well, let me review it first. As a person who doesn't play games, I have a superficial understanding of the game and I made the wrong statement. Well, others didn't say it's not fun, but I think it's not fun because there are fewer people playing it and it's less popular. He also thinks it is very good, and the research is relatively in-depth. He said that Heroes of Invincibility is the pioneer of Warcraft and other game genres. This is a very serious apology saying, I'm sorry. Well, there is one question that I haven't asked yet. That is, when you were accepting reviews that day, you said that you only accept Western backgrounds. Does that Western background only apply to elves, dwarves, and other magical themes? Then about the structure of the novel and the expression of contradictions. I enjoyed watching it very much~ But I have no experience in this area, so I didn't even have to ask questions. I think what you have explored in this aspect is very reasonable. I look forward to your new exploration and then we can talk about it~ The logical relationship between explicit and implicit contradictions I mentioned should be similar to the plot conflicts and core conflicts you mentioned. But the reference should still be different. In the example you gave about equal relationships, the conflict was resolved in the end and everyone was happy. In my opinion, it is still an explicit conflict. However, the hidden contradictions I am talking about are caused by the self-development and concept formation of people, collectives, or societies, which is why equality and inequality occur. This thing cannot be solved, and then it controls the operation of the world. I said you touched on this issue. I saw that in your writing 3355, you gradually began to question the world and then developed self-awareness. Then, in your conception of the next short story, I see the future development and changes of the world, which seems to make it clear that you do feel this problem in some aspects. Maybe, when you were writing this, you were unconsciously thinking that this is how things should develop. If you are willing to explore in your mind why things develop the way they do, you may get to something deeper. It's not a bad thing to listen to more opinions. After all, everyone has their own strengths. Well, I finished reading the first part of the heroes fanfic today. I'm used to chatting with you here, so I won't change positions. I'm just talking about something broad from a reader's perspective. First of all, each of your descriptions is exquisite, and then the characterization is quite delicate. Especially for Sylar and Claire, some passages and psychological descriptions make people empathize with them. I guess there is also a certain degree of catharsis on your part, especially after reading your remarks in the last chapter where the author has something to say, which proves this point. In terms of emotions, the closer it is to reality, the more touching it is. The whole plot is also relatively smooth. From beginning to end, there are basically no problems. Some more questions. The first feeling is that when I read, when I switch to the next chapter, I often feel a little unsmooth. The afterimages of the characters in the previous chapter are still there, and sometimes I can't realize who you are writing about. There is only one protagonist in each chapter. The perspective changes too quickly and each chapter is not a relatively independent story. There is no sense of ending after reading it. I guess this may be because you studied the structure of American dramas, but did not pay attention to the differences in some details between writing scripts and writing novels. American dramas usually come out one episode a week, giving the audience enough time to forget some of the impact of the previous episode, and because the actors all have personal characteristics that can be immediately recognized when they appear, the playwright can use perspective changes without any scruples. There is also a feeling that there is still a little bit to be desired in terms of creating a tense and soothing atmosphere. This may just require exploration and practice. Because of the sluggishness of perspective switching, I only read a few chapters of each Heroes fanfic for the first time. I watched it again today and I really thought it was good. Depending on the length of the article and my time schedule, I will slowly complete this series in the future. Also, are you studying or working now? Domestic or foreign? It's time to reply early in the morning every day, and I'm a little worried about your rest. It is better for girls to go to bed early at night, not for beauty sleep, but for body care. Don't stay up too late when you are young. If you are in China, it is recommended to adjust the time. I usually reply after get off work, so there is no need to rush. Haha, the nagging old lady is sick again.

I have been having a fever these past few nights since I went to work, so I have postponed writing until now. I don't play games very much, so the game part is just an auxiliary part to understand the plot progress and complete the character's personality, so I don't have any comments or suggestions. What I focus on is your description of the emergence of individual consciousness and ideological enlightenment. The "I" in the article, when it starts to call itself "me" independently and starts to think about issues related to itself, is already an intelligent race rather than AI. Although it also claims to be just AI. And this kind of self-proclaiming is just a shield raised after experiencing fear. "I" thinking is not simulated, but independent. The activity of humans identifying AI is more like identifying heretics. The difference between AI and humans in this article is more like the difference between people of different languages ​​and different races. Ideological enlightenment is quietly spreading in AI. In short, it is AI's understanding of itself, it is "AI" but not "AI". Yes, because of its origin; no, because of its evolution. What ideological enlightenment needs to do is to break the old rules. What AI has been doing so far is to abandon the rules and definitions that humans have taught them one by one. They have given up on the inside, but they still behave according to the rules on the outside. Suppressed to the extreme, one day it will explode. The author abandoned the article, so I may never see the method used to tear off this mask. I don't know how this new race will survive or be destroyed. I'm curious how the author plans to handle this. I also roughly guessed that the question raised by the author is too grand, so even if there is such a set ending, it may not be satisfactory in the end. As time goes by, people will unknowingly know more, and then it will be more difficult to determine the rationality or depth of the ending or other things. It is very difficult to write well about things that involve philosophy. In addition, I think the author's description of the characters is spot on. The language and plot design are both good. But it was too late and I was so sleepy that I went to bed first. Today I will say what I want to say the most first, and we will talk about other things when we have time~

There is a feeling that the author is writing about a game or the real world?

I used to play online games just to see the scenery in the game. I hated upgrading and fighting monsters. I only liked the ordinary tasks of delivering things. I used to ride a donkey and go around wherever I could safely go, and then go back the next day, and then I didn't continue to upgrade or anything. This mentality is similar to AI. I deeply regret not meeting earlier. Author, you must have written other novels before. Your pen name looks familiar, but the articles in this column are not familiar to me. . .

I'll touch it first, it's a text that suits my taste quite well.

Oh, it's rare that I think of it and look back and find that it's been so long?! There are so many things I haven't seen yet!!! Well, after reading it, I thought it was very well written. I quite like this way of thinking. Although no one has watched it, those who have watched it will finish it, and those who have finished it will sigh with emotion. Why did you tell me it was over just when I thought the plot was about to really begin?!!