[Dragonlance Crosses Into Harry Potter] The Title Is Just a Cloud

Hello, author, I am Xingxing from the unreliable Changping Shop. XD. Please give me your advice when we first meet.~ First of all, I want to explain that Xingxing has not read the Dragonlance series of novels, so the direction of the review may only be HP. I hope the author will forgive me for being unable to comment on the image of Ferthas in Dragonlance! Looking at the copy, it's a very simple two-row text without any introduction to the content_(:з)∠)_ I suggest you explain what the POV perspective is. I think many readers in Jinjiang can't understand it. I only figured it out after Baidu. Although you should be able to understand it after reading the chapter title, right? In the first chapter, the author has posted a lot of textual research about Ferthus. After reading the article, I think the author probably likes watching British and American dramas. The writing style has a strong British and American drama tone, and does not have strong Chinese language characteristics like ordinary HP fans. This can be said to be good or bad, as the audience is relatively small. Chapter 1, the first perspective is Cedric Diggory, the second perspective is Feal-Thas. Chapters are written from different perspectives. This kind of writing has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that you can look at the same thing from the different perspectives of the two protagonists, which is very interesting. The bad thing is that this really tests the author's skills. Once the author fails to grasp the characteristics of the characters, it is easy to write the characters in a nondescript or confusing perspective. In my opinion, the author's skill is still very profound, and he can express the different characteristics of two people in the development of the same event. The only drawback is that the words and deeds of Feal-Thas are described too much in Cedric Diggory's perspective. I personally think it is better to put it in Feal-Thas's perspective, while in Cedric Diggory's perspective it should be described more from his perspective. As for the second chapter, I don't know if the author is aware of this problem and arranges their respective perspectives more reasonably than in the previous chapter. Chapter 3 only has the perspective of Feal-Thas. Before reading the content, I was actually a little confused as to why it was no longer the perspective of two people in one chapter. After reading it, I felt that the author's arrangement seemed more appropriate. The memories on the Hogwarts train and the encounter with the Dementors seem to be all intended to show Fairthus' past and better shape Fairthus' image. What kind of person is Cedric? In HP, Cedric is a graceful man and the prince of Hufflepuff. In the book Goblet of Fire, after Harry became the school's second warrior, the students began to criticize Harry, but Cedric still treated Harry very friendly. His reason, his talent, and his elegant demeanor won Harry's respect and Qiu Zhang's love. Likewise, what is the spirit of Hufflepuff House? Integrity, loyalty, honesty, and no fear of hardship. Doesn't Cedric embody this in this article? Cedric disagreed with Ferthas' love of dark magic, but he did not dislike Ferthas because of it. Instead, he felt confused and confused when Professor Flitwick told him that dark magic could also protect people. This is actually an impact on his outlook on life, laugh. After all, Cedric is also a child who is still in school, and the child's eyes are still very black and white. He would save Fersas and worry about him, but he would also be angry that he was learning black magic and prying into other people's thoughts. This is a very flesh and blood character. And Ferthas, an exiled elf, is indifferent, hates humans, and advocates strength. He is not from the same world as Cedric at all. But judging from the text, it seems that Ferthus' CP is probably Cedric? How cute is the contrast? Fenrir Greyback appeared in Chapters 5 and 6. I wondered who this was for a long time. Later, after Baidu, I found out that this was a very important supporting role in HP - he bit Lupine and bit Bill.

Hello, author, I am Xingxing from the unreliable Changping Shop. XD. Please give me your advice when we first meet.~ First of all, I want to explain that Xingxing has not read the Dragonlance series of novels, so the direction of the review may only be HP. I hope the author will forgive me for being unable to comment on the image of Ferthas in Dragonlance! Looking at the copy, it's a very simple two-row text without any introduction to the content_(:з)∠)_ I suggest you explain what the POV perspective is. I think many readers in Jinjiang can't understand it. I only figured it out after Baidu. Although you should be able to understand it after reading the chapter title, right? In the first chapter, the author has posted a lot of textual research about Ferthus. After reading the article, I think the author probably likes watching British and American dramas. The writing style has a strong British and American drama tone, and does not have strong Chinese language characteristics like ordinary HP fans. This can be said to be good or bad, as the audience is relatively small. Chapter 1, the first perspective is Cedric Diggory, the second perspective is Feal-Thas. Chapters are written from different perspectives. This kind of writing has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that you can look at the same thing from the different perspectives of the two protagonists, which is very interesting. The bad thing is that this really tests the author's skills. Once the author fails to grasp the characteristics of the characters, it is easy to write the characters in a nondescript or confusing perspective. In my opinion, the author's skill is still very profound, and he can express the different characteristics of two people in the development of the same event. The only drawback is that the words and deeds of Feal-Thas are described too much in Cedric Diggory's perspective. I personally think it is better to put it in Feal-Thas's perspective, while in Cedric Diggory's perspective it should be described more from his perspective. As for the second chapter, I don't know if the author is aware of this problem and arranges their respective perspectives more reasonably than in the previous chapter. Chapter 3 only has the perspective of Feal-Thas. Before reading the content, I was actually a little confused as to why it was no longer the perspective of two people in one chapter. After reading it, I felt that the author's arrangement seemed more appropriate. The memories on the Hogwarts train and the encounter with the Dementors seem to be all intended to show Fairthus' past and better shape Fairthus' image. What kind of person is Cedric? In HP, Cedric is a graceful man and the prince of Hufflepuff. In the book Goblet of Fire, after Harry became the school's second warrior, the students began to criticize Harry, but Cedric still treated Harry very friendly. His reason, his talent, and his elegant demeanor won Harry's respect and Qiu Zhang's love. Likewise, what is the spirit of Hufflepuff House? Integrity, loyalty, honesty, and no fear of hardship. Doesn't Cedric embody this in this article? Cedric disagreed with Ferthas' love of dark magic, but he did not dislike Ferthas because of it. Instead, he felt confused and confused when Professor Flitwick told him that dark magic could also protect people. This is actually an impact on his outlook on life, laugh. After all, Cedric is also a child who is still in school, and the child's eyes are still very black and white. He would save Fersas and worry about him, but he would also be angry that he was learning black magic and prying into other people's thoughts. This is a very flesh and blood character. And Ferthas, an exiled elf, is indifferent, hates humans, and advocates strength. He is not from the same world as Cedric at all. But judging from the text, it seems that Ferthus' CP is probably Cedric? How cute is the contrast? Fenrir Greyback appeared in Chapters 5 and 6. I wondered who this was for a long time. Later, after Baidu, I found out that this was a very important supporting role in HP - he bit Lupine and bit Bill.

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I dare to finish it like this! !

So pretty! ! ! Keep going! ! !