Harry and Tracy

I have read this article before but not finished it, so I came back to read it after many years. Hmm... I don't want to criticize the plot set by the author, but... I really would rather not have read the rest of it. The first part is written in a majestic and majestic way with complicated settings, but the second part is as if the whole lower limbs were cut off in the abdomen. From an emotional and structural point of view, it is the same. The previous article repeatedly emphasized Terry's "Ravenclaw Question", "A big man came out of Ravenclaw", "Four names are written in the history books", such a passionate setting, and various clear indications that famous names will be passed down through the ages, ending at the age of sixteen. Squib, huh? It was like I was eating a cake, but I didn't expect that the back was empty. I bit my hand when I took one mouthful, and I was dumbfounded. I read it patiently, and at the end I found out - Good guy, I missed the sentence "Go to China". I thought about the whole story again. The author's writing is fluent, and I can see that he is good at settings and details (except for the half-and-half sentences that really make people's heads tingle), but he seems to lack the ability to construct the skeleton of his entire magnificent setting, and it seems relatively empty. In the second half of the article, the whole plot became a bit wilted, and gradually lost the smoothness of the early stage of the article, which made people less interested in reading. This is probably the reason why I didn't read it anymore. It should be because it completely broke away from the original plot, so its weaknesses were highlighted. This is no longer an anticlimax, it just cuts off the legs and tail. It's quite a pity. I can vaguely see the author's urgency and boredom. Originally... But that's it, the first part is really well written.

It is really amazing to me that this ancient HP fanfic (published in 2013) has no ancient flavor at all, and the logic and setting details are also appropriately expanded on the basis of the original work! I regret not discovering this book earlier~ In the early stage, Harry met his best friends in life at Privet Drive, and at the same time met a group of friends who played rugby together and supported him; in the middle stage, he went to Hogwarts to discover the South Tower with Ron, Hermione, and Tracey, and the magic research made people excited; in the later stage, the war involved the Norse mythological Titans, the Deathly Hallows, the secret of the Horcrux in the diary, etc. It was jaw-dropping and amazing. Especially the description of the war can be compared with that before the founding of the People's Republic of China; the description of Privet Drive being invaded by Death Eaters and Dementors is also really heart-wrenching. The end of the war is of course victory, but no victory does not require sacrifice. In this book, even if the protagonist group is really strong, they still sacrifice a lot: Luohe's magic suddenly dropped to the owls level but could not be restored, and Tracy became a complete squib due to the last magic riot. When I first saw this, I was actually a little aggrieved. What a brilliant Tracy. She could have brought magic theory to a higher level, but she finally said goodbye to the wizarding world because of her fight against Voldemort and the diary. But then I felt that Tracy would not be so sad. He is the kind of person who will be the center of attention wherever he goes! Before he knew the magic world, he had already aspired to become the Prime Minister~ The end of this article is a little rushed, but it still has a lingering and memorable feeling! This setting created by the author's wife ten years ago has not been surpassed by anyone yet! Oh, by the way, I have recommended the Sri Lankan fan "Days Side by Side with Sifu" written by this wife before, and it is also good~

Like it very much. It's a pity, because the protagonist has survived so many seemingly fatal crises, but the final battle ended with Tracy bidding farewell to the wizarding world, Hermione and Ron, and losing most of her power. The hero left the scene in a gloomy way, and the person who followed behind to take the credit gained both fame and fortune. It was really uncomfortable. Although the story stops at their sixteen years old, I can slightly imagine the future in which they regain their magic and return to the wizarding world (after all, unification can theoretically turn Muggles into wizards, Tracy will definitely be able to regain their magic, and Hermione and Ron will also regain their magic)

Who can still miss these two little boys after watching it for so long? Tacit understanding, trust, courage and wisdom. Harry in this article can be said to be extremely handsome. TUT feels like the plus version in the fanfic, I like it very much. Except for the rushed ending, almost every plot is quite exciting. Can I wait for the next big book in my lifetime?

I rely on the God of Gods, and I would like to be called an epic HP fan. The prophecy and diary in the middle made Voldemort shiver down my spine. I was really shocked when I saw the prophecy about asking for directions and choosing. It was really scary. That kind of fate that cannot be escaped has already been clearly marked with a price. In the end, I guessed a little bit that it was the Sea of ​​Time, but it was still very nice. Hermione and Tracy were so intelligent that they cried. This is the strongest four-person team I have ever seen. They did not stick to the traditional story line of relying on Deng Xiaoping and the traditional Horcrux. Although it was a bit reckless at the beginning, it really grew up later, and every step was the best arrangement for the future. I was really touched and excited!

Again, from a subjective point of view, I cannot accept that Tracy has no connection with magic since then. His image in my mind is that he likes to delve into magic. Even if he has an alchemy arm now, is this any different from the positioning of guns? Secondly, the author said that Tracy is a supporting character, but she is really just a supporting character. There is no introduction at all about Tracy's life experience and appearance. Only in the part about Lucius, we know that it is called "not bad looking" and! Completely! No! Psychological description! Even Harry's psychological description is limited. Isn't Tracy at all bothered by losing her magic? Isn't he in pain at all? Could he be so open-minded as a teenager? Tracy's image is not very full, but looks like a person who is piled up with labels. We don't know what he likes, what his personality is, and where his confidence and inner strength come from. He was like cannon fodder, burning himself for Voldemort's war. And in fact, this point was pointed out by the author himself. Harry and Tracy entered Hogwarts and the wizarding world to prepare for a future war. He was not preparing to pursue his dreams or anything else, including the unified theory of magic. He also studied it while dealing with Voldemort and learning magic. I feel that he is a character who exists entirely to achieve Harry. This makes me feel ridiculous. I still remember Tracy's inspiring speech in the Hogwarts restaurant. Such a person. Author Do you create a character because you love Harry? So what's Tracy? It seems that they all have a bright future, but I feel that this future is not worthy of his previous efforts. Maybe I'm being too harsh on fan fiction from more than a decade ago? All in all it didn't meet my expectations. You know I can even accept be.

Hey, I want to say something, but I also feel that this article has been written for so many years. I can only say that I wish I had stopped reading The Elephant Stopped at Virgin Road since I started reading it. I thought I thought, I thought they would become stronger and better, but I didn't expect them.

This hp world view is really great. The first article really made me passionate. I don't know if I want to deepen it later. In order to describe the war situation, I suddenly felt that it was a bit inconsistent, but it is still a good article.

Spreading flowers, compared to most fans, this article is really not a fairy tale. Maybe one day I will come back and write a long review, but I think I need some fairy tales to heal me for the time being (vomiting soul)

The character writing is really good. The plot does not use all the settings of the first half of the book. However, there are very few HP novels with this layout and momentum. The story is still yyds.