[Harry Potter] An Outsider Looking In

Well, let me review it after reading it. Let me start with a shield: I liked this book, it is very good-looking - but only in the early part. I am one of those people who pursue a book for half a year but then abandon it as soon as the writing is not good. The early part of this book was really good, which made me frown a little but I still finished reading it. First because of Order, Vincent saved Sirius and then in exchange caused the death of Bellini's parents? Ah? Vincent's because of what Bellini bears his consequences? Or is the author trying to highlight the importance of Bellini's parents to Vincent? I didn't notice it at all. There wasn't much description of Bellini's parents in the whole text. When they died, it just felt careless. Even when the real cause of their death was analyzed later, it only felt more outrageous. It felt like a random cycle of karma... The second one is Bellini. The three people went back to 99 years ago. Then Vincent only brought Draco back and left Bellini there... Author, do you want Bellini to grow up? It's really not necessary. They all say that it's either three things or one solution. This is Bellini's second accident. You can't get better. Moreover, the cause of both accidents was Vincent. Both times, Bellini has to bear the consequences... I said enough, I feel bad for him. The third one is Jessica's daughter Debbie. Debbie appears as a baby, but will she appear as a villain the next time? Why is it that the only excuse for joining the villain camp is not taking the right path? The fourth is that Jessica, as Vincent's friend, gave Debbie to Vincent at the last moment. Vincent also took Debbie from Jessica, but then he found a member of the Order of the Phoenix and gave it to them to raise? I didn't even describe it too much in this regard.

I can't help but want to read their doi. I really can't believe that someone like me, who wants to eat meat every day, actually read a book that didn't even mention hugging my waist until the end. I thought it was quite interesting, but I really look forward to standing by the bed and reading their doi.

After reading the full text, I felt a touch of sadness. The reason why some of the plots in it made me uncomfortable may be that Vincent was always indifferent when he should be concerned, such as when his nominal brother was causing trouble, or he did not have the heart to refuse Bellini to follow him back to the past, or he was soft-hearted when he should be ruthless, such as being soft-hearted when it was time to deal with Debbie in the end, which hurt his companions. But maybe human nature and life are really so complicated, that's why there are so many surprises and regrets. When reading in the middle, sometimes I felt that the plot was a little scattered. It felt like it was still in this copy, but a new line was opened, which made me wonder if I missed some plot. However, the ending has always been the motivation for me to persevere until the end. Fortunately, this article is finished, and I finally feel relieved. Everyone has a good ending.

Sometimes Vincent sees people who are anxious, indifferent when they should be concerned, and indecisive when they should be cruel, which makes him very angry~

Bellini feels a bit sad growing up like this

Although Vincent is not entirely responsible, Bellini was really harmed by him. His parents died and he wandered in time for 99 years.

I like it so much - I really want the extra episode.

Thank you for writing such a good novel. Finally, the plot of Vincent and the others in the Department of Mysteries is very engaging. Thank you

Madam, don't you plan to make a spin-off or something? QAQ wants to see other people's reactions when they find out about the relationship between Vincent and Draco. Especially Sirius 23333 will definitely be fun! My son was abducted by a Malfoy boy!

Bellini: Please call me elder Draco: I have become the worst one (so I have to hold on to Lao Gong's thigh)