At my fingertips, the jade mat is cool as water,
I drift through a night of fleeting joy until the moon shines bright.
[Dual Storylines]
[Half: The Past]
The imperial capital was shaken by upheaval. You promised me a splendid future, but I chose a life of wandering, with death ever near.
In a single night, everything was turned upside down. You looked down on the world from on high, while I disappeared into the mortal realm under an assumed name. Ten years passed like that.
I had planned to honor your wish and never see you again in this lifetime. So why, after ten years, have you stirred up the world once more and searched for me everywhere?
Could it really be, just as you said, that you only want to see me once?
[Half: The Story]
Twelve years ago, I saw you at your Floating Joy Lodge. You infuriated me so much that, when I got home, I swore that one day my name would be known far and wide, even to you.
Unfortunately, before I could finish my studies or make anything of myself, news of your death spread everywhere. It nearly scared me half to death.
Since then, I've wandered through the world with no sense of purpose. I never imagined that one turn would bring me right back into your hands.
Boss, you're practically my martial uncle. So please, just give in to me!
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Is it just to make Bai Chenhuan look so awesome just to make him a joke?
I cried to death and tortured myself to death. I thought your article was so cruel that the ending would be HE, but it turned out to be BE! ! I cried so much that I couldn't stop crying! ! !
Although I saw Pei Yu's tragic ending, he was killed by his own son. I sympathize with his experience. But I still like Lin Jinyue in "Half Things". The opening chapter uses his character as the entry point, which made me think that he would eventually succeed in holding hands and live a happy life. Who knows that in the blink of an eye, he will become the supporting actor in the tragedy.
Bai Chenhuan fell in love with someone he shouldn't love and tortured him all his life.
It hurt two lives, but Bai Chenhuan fell in love with someone he shouldn't love, stirred up Pei Yu's heart and left, hurting Pei Yu's life; fell in love with someone he shouldn't love, but accidentally let himself fall into Mu Shuang's heart, and was missed by people for ten years. In the end, because of the person in his heart, he couldn't respond, hurting Mu Shuang's life.
In fact, when Api first watched it, he didn't think it was very sad. He seemed to know that the ending would be like this from the beginning. But when I wanted to write this review, I thought about it carefully. I don't know why, I suddenly felt very sad and almost shed tears. I was thinking about Bai Chenhuan, Pei Yu, and the strange but loyal supporting characters.
Why is it sad? A lot of it is because of the characters in the play, but more of it seems to be because of the author's writing style.
Reading the author's writings is like a glass of sake. I don't feel much at first glance, but when I think about it, it has an infinite taste.
The most unforgettable thing for Api is the "King's Order" and the acrostic poem "Shen Huan leaves Bai Jia'an".
When "The King's Order" came out, Api thought at first that this play had really existed since ancient times. When he later learned that this play was really just written by the author, Api was shocked.
And the acrostic poem made Api completely impressed by the author's astonishing talent.
Maybe it's because Api hasn't read enough books and is ignorant, or maybe it's because the author is indeed very skilled. There is no doubt that Api has never seen an Internet writer who can play with words like this.
Once again, I would like to express my worship to the author.
Then, there is the feeling that the characters in the article give Api.
Api loves Pei Yu very much, but many people say he is a scumbag. Perhaps it is because Api has incorrect views and does not realize what a scumbag he is.
He was not a crook from the beginning, he liked Qin Ziruo, even if Bai Chenhuan later fell in love with him with all his heart, but love was always about two people. But in this love, Bai Chenhuan didn't put in much effort from the beginning. It seemed that the only thing he sacrificed was that he could have become famous all over the world, but he was willing to devote himself to the fame and fortune beside the Ninth Prince who had nothing and was looked down upon... In the end, he betrayed Pei Yu for the sake of Qin Ziruo's deathbed orphan.
At that time, Api felt very sorry for Pei Yu. He had his own goals and was a king who wanted to dominate at all costs. He should not have a gentleman like Bai Chenhuan who was indifferent to fame and wealth standing next to him. These two people, one was like a butcher knife soaked in blood, and the other was a landscape painting with profound artistic conception. When the two were put together, they created a tragedy that was neither fish nor fowl.
In fact, if Bai Chenhuan could not fulfill his duties as a Mingwei in the first place, why would he willingly stand by Pei Yu's side? In fact, he was not able to escape this tragedy that harmed others and himself.
Then, there is a sentence in the article about Pei Yu, which seems to be roughly like this: Even if the whole world can insult him, Pei Yu, Bai Chenhuan cannot!
Api felt very strange about this sentence. He thought that he, Pei Yu, was the king of the generation. Even if his methods were cruel, he ruled the prosperous country in the end, so the world was the least qualified to insult him and scold him. His cruel methods also failed Bai Chenhuan's affection, so he was eliminated.
Therefore, Api felt that this was the opposite of what he said...
About Mu Shuang... I don't have much feeling... I won't say much, just one sentence: This is the most gorgeous and ultimate cannon fodder in Api's reading history from beginning to end. Because I have never received it, I am not even qualified to talk about losing it in the end.
Finally, thank you to the author for bringing such a good article. I was very moved after reading it. I was struggling to write a review after reading it. Api's level is low and he is just a member of the family. If he is against the morality of the three views, he will ignore it...
Well, how should I put it, the story is very good, but why do I always feel that it is over before it has fully unfolded?~~ The ending is tragic, but I can't feel how sad it is. It seems that everyone in the whole story has a deep and profound love, but the beauty of two lovers is missing. Or as the author himself said, this is not a tragedy. Okay, I'm rambling...
Damn, you made me cry. I will never read your book again!
I almost cried. The last sentence "Senior Brother" really made me cry. I thought that since there is an ending, there should be a good ending. Unexpectedly, when I poked in and took a look, I immediately dropped the mouse!
Hey hey! What a wonderful secluded life! ! ! ! ! If you don't bring such a deceitful person, I'll go! ! ! ! !
I clearly understand that Qi Shao's life after living in seclusion was supposed to be leisurely, leisurely, and slightly sad, but why did you write it so cruelly and tragically? ! ! ! ! ! No, you give me back the happy life of Lao Wu & Bai Qishao! ! ! ! ! ! TAT
[Jinjiang, can you stop smoking one day?
He is indeed a man who will die if he doesn't cheat on his father! ! Well, for the sake of your good deception, I won't argue with you.
My face is distorted! …
That's fine!
Although living is the best, it seems too miserable to have to live like this! It's okay, let the shopkeeper's broken heart go...
In fact, according to my opinion, the dead ones are the best, at least they are over. But what about the living ones? Bai Mi, Xiao Linzi, Lao Wu, and that Xiaoyan, oh! Life is a long road, and we can spend beautiful and happy time hand in hand with people who love and know each other. If we belong to someone but cannot stay together, and have to walk alone, life must be long and terrible!
Is it just to make Bai Chenhuan look so awesome just to make him a joke?
I cried to death and tortured myself to death. I thought your article was so cruel that the ending would be HE, but it turned out to be BE! ! I cried so much that I couldn't stop crying! ! !
Although I saw Pei Yu's tragic ending, he was killed by his own son. I sympathize with his experience. But I still like Lin Jinyue in "Half Things". The opening chapter uses his character as the entry point, which made me think that he would eventually succeed in holding hands and live a happy life. Who knows that in the blink of an eye, he will become the supporting actor in the tragedy.
Bai Chenhuan fell in love with someone he shouldn't love and tortured him all his life. It hurt two lives, but Bai Chenhuan fell in love with someone he shouldn't love, stirred up Pei Yu's heart and left, hurting Pei Yu's life; fell in love with someone he shouldn't love, but accidentally let himself fall into Mu Shuang's heart, and was missed by people for ten years. In the end, because of the person in his heart, he couldn't respond, hurting Mu Shuang's life. In fact, when Api first watched it, he didn't think it was very sad. He seemed to know that the ending would be like this from the beginning. But when I wanted to write this review, I thought about it carefully. I don't know why, I suddenly felt very sad and almost shed tears. I was thinking about Bai Chenhuan, Pei Yu, and the strange but loyal supporting characters. Why is it sad? A lot of it is because of the characters in the play, but more of it seems to be because of the author's writing style. Reading the author's writings is like a glass of sake. I don't feel much at first glance, but when I think about it, it has an infinite taste. The most unforgettable thing for Api is the "King's Order" and the acrostic poem "Shen Huan leaves Bai Jia'an". When "The King's Order" came out, Api thought at first that this play had really existed since ancient times. When he later learned that this play was really just written by the author, Api was shocked. And the acrostic poem made Api completely impressed by the author's astonishing talent. Maybe it's because Api hasn't read enough books and is ignorant, or maybe it's because the author is indeed very skilled. There is no doubt that Api has never seen an Internet writer who can play with words like this. Once again, I would like to express my worship to the author. Then, there is the feeling that the characters in the article give Api. Api loves Pei Yu very much, but many people say he is a scumbag. Perhaps it is because Api has incorrect views and does not realize what a scumbag he is. He was not a crook from the beginning, he liked Qin Ziruo, even if Bai Chenhuan later fell in love with him with all his heart, but love was always about two people. But in this love, Bai Chenhuan didn't put in much effort from the beginning. It seemed that the only thing he sacrificed was that he could have become famous all over the world, but he was willing to devote himself to the fame and fortune beside the Ninth Prince who had nothing and was looked down upon... In the end, he betrayed Pei Yu for the sake of Qin Ziruo's deathbed orphan. At that time, Api felt very sorry for Pei Yu. He had his own goals and was a king who wanted to dominate at all costs. He should not have a gentleman like Bai Chenhuan who was indifferent to fame and wealth standing next to him. These two people, one was like a butcher knife soaked in blood, and the other was a landscape painting with profound artistic conception. When the two were put together, they created a tragedy that was neither fish nor fowl. In fact, if Bai Chenhuan could not fulfill his duties as a Mingwei in the first place, why would he willingly stand by Pei Yu's side? In fact, he was not able to escape this tragedy that harmed others and himself. Then, there is a sentence in the article about Pei Yu, which seems to be roughly like this: Even if the whole world can insult him, Pei Yu, Bai Chenhuan cannot! Api felt very strange about this sentence. He thought that he, Pei Yu, was the king of the generation. Even if his methods were cruel, he ruled the prosperous country in the end, so the world was the least qualified to insult him and scold him. His cruel methods also failed Bai Chenhuan's affection, so he was eliminated. Therefore, Api felt that this was the opposite of what he said... About Mu Shuang... I don't have much feeling... I won't say much, just one sentence: This is the most gorgeous and ultimate cannon fodder in Api's reading history from beginning to end. Because I have never received it, I am not even qualified to talk about losing it in the end. Finally, thank you to the author for bringing such a good article. I was very moved after reading it. I was struggling to write a review after reading it. Api's level is low and he is just a member of the family. If he is against the morality of the three views, he will ignore it...
Well, how should I put it, the story is very good, but why do I always feel that it is over before it has fully unfolded?~~ The ending is tragic, but I can't feel how sad it is. It seems that everyone in the whole story has a deep and profound love, but the beauty of two lovers is missing. Or as the author himself said, this is not a tragedy. Okay, I'm rambling...
Damn, you made me cry. I will never read your book again! I almost cried. The last sentence "Senior Brother" really made me cry. I thought that since there is an ending, there should be a good ending. Unexpectedly, when I poked in and took a look, I immediately dropped the mouse!
Hey hey! What a wonderful secluded life! ! ! ! ! If you don't bring such a deceitful person, I'll go! ! ! ! ! I clearly understand that Qi Shao's life after living in seclusion was supposed to be leisurely, leisurely, and slightly sad, but why did you write it so cruelly and tragically? ! ! ! ! ! No, you give me back the happy life of Lao Wu & Bai Qishao! ! ! ! ! ! TAT [Jinjiang, can you stop smoking one day?
He is indeed a man who will die if he doesn't cheat on his father! ! Well, for the sake of your good deception, I won't argue with you.
My face is distorted! …
That's fine! Although living is the best, it seems too miserable to have to live like this! It's okay, let the shopkeeper's broken heart go... In fact, according to my opinion, the dead ones are the best, at least they are over. But what about the living ones? Bai Mi, Xiao Linzi, Lao Wu, and that Xiaoyan, oh! Life is a long road, and we can spend beautiful and happy time hand in hand with people who love and know each other. If we belong to someone but cannot stay together, and have to walk alone, life must be long and terrible!