
Pear Blossoms, But No Farewell
梨花非离
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I really can't stand it. This male protagonist is simply a scumbag. He has always brought harm to the female protagonist. Even if it is for the female protagonist's good or there are other reasons, I don't care what you say, do you have to hurt her heart in public like this? If the female protagonist is a very fragile person, she wants to die at a thought, or she is harmed by other petty people when she is heartbroken. After all, nothing in the world is absolute and there are variables. Do you really think this is good for the female protagonist? If the heroine is dead, what use do you have for those things? If it were me, I wouldn't be able to forgive him, even to survive. Can't we have heart-to-heart conversations? Can't we discuss it? How many pieces does a woman have in her heart? I still can't bear that the heroine actually forgives her? Is this a cleansing of scumbag men? Why don't you choose a loyal dog instead of a scumbag?!!!! If you don't have sex, that woman will give you the antidote!! Scum, infinite scum!
I want a sequel to the wedding night. I've been waiting for a long time. Please write it quickly!
I spent a whole day reading it yesterday, and sure enough, I am still destined to be the second male lead. . . Little Lulu Besides, I still want to see meat. . .
While waiting for Teacher Gu, I also finished reading the story of Su Liu and Mu Xuan... Happy New Year, and I wish Teacher Gu can come back soon in the new year...
Comments on "Pear Blossoms Are Not Leaving" This may not be the first time for the author to write a novel, maybe it is the first time he has tried to write about 200,000 words, but he must have written quite a few short and medium stories. Without long-term writing practice, the writing would not be so smooth and just right. Well, what I want to say is here, the writing is smooth and flowing, the camera switching is just right, the whole atmosphere is also created very well, it is lively when it should be lively, and it can be controlled immediately when it should be sad, and the psychological process of the heroine is also very carefully portrayed. There's no obvious redundancy, and it doesn't feel rushed. This is already a rare benefit. If you don't practice writing for a long time or write consciously or unconsciously, you will definitely not be able to reach this level, otherwise you will be a genius. The progress of writing is actually obvious. When we compare what we wrote a few years ago with what we have now, we can see that whether it is words, layout, writing, or state of mind, there is a difference in perception. So persistence is very good. Take this article as an example. It was a little slow at the beginning, but it became much more sophisticated at the end. Let's talk about the characters. When I was reading the article, I accidentally noticed that the person below said that the heroine is a noob. The heroine is by no means a noob. Even when she first came out of the world, she was not a noob, but she just hadn't seen her before. On the contrary, she was smart and strong. As for the two male protagonists, I won't comment on the male protagonist. However, Mr. Lu tortured me a little at the end when the female protagonist lost her memory for a period of time. It was not for anything else, but because he really loved the female protagonist. It's not that the hero wants to sacrifice for her, but Lu Feiming glanced at her. Just by looking at her, she knew he loved her. As for the supporting roles, the two gay ones are more outstanding... And the red maple in green is also more outstanding. The reason why I say this is because their emotional story is rich enough, and this alone can make readers remember it. However, this brilliance does not belong to the author. It belongs to such a sad atmosphere, desperate and regrettable. In other words, if this character's tragic love story is excluded, then this character will have no other memories. This is also the reason why I don't rate the male protagonist. The following words may not sound very nice. It's also because the author's writing skills are so good that I have so many requirements. Compared to other writers of other calibers, this novel is already good enough. Overall, the novel is good, but not particularly good. Yes, just because it's not special. The male protagonist, the female protagonist, the male protagonist and the female protagonist, do you think it looks familiar? You can see a lot of them in many, many novels. Women are strong and intelligent, men are affectionate and handsome. There are already too many faces like this. After reading it for a few days, I almost couldn't figure out which was the male protagonist of this novel or the male protagonist of that novel. We once again ignored the love story of the male protagonist, and sure enough, he no longer had any sense of existence. We started to rethink it. He came on the scene to serve this love story. He had to be prepared to fall in love, create misunderstandings, explain, and finally torture people severely. It seems that this is his mission. Of course, this is a romance story. It is true that I want to write a love story. Why should I omit the love story? Because of the characters and personalities. The above is not of any substantial help to the author. I want to say these words just to tell the author, and there are some people who do not want to read some fast-food novels, but want to see the author abuse people, and hope to see some living and three-dimensional characters. Even without stories, they are vivid enough. And you have exactly this level. You already have the level of an ordinary Jinjiang writer. Next, why not do better? Okay, that's it. There's still a little problem. Since I'm writing an ancient Chinese novel, try not to use words that are too time-traveled, as this can easily make people laugh. Although I have said before that the atmosphere is created very well, but why bother to ruin it with this? On a side note, I watched the "Refining Love" part by the way. It was late at night, so I put it away first. When I came back today, I suddenly felt that I would lose nothing if I didn't watch it. What is different from others? Even if I don't finish this article, I will always come across so many similar novels. ——This is the terrible thing about writing ordinary novels.
I cried when I read this article yesterday... I want a sequel I was so abused... Meat, meat, meat
The author is so honest. He reached out and asked for copy two. As expected, it came very quickly. But where is the rou as promised? Don't let us be dismissed by saying, "You've been turned upside down and you've got a beautiful room". This is definitely disobedient. We are so low-key. How dare you use extra stories to feed those of us who are strangers to CJ?
It's finally almost over, I can't bear to leave it, I still want to see the married life of Mu Xuan and Su Liu!
I want to see the sneaky success, (*^__^*) hehe...
It's the 7th, please update the extra chapter