I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家，第1次写满8万字，能不能有个人来评价下
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The Everlasting Night Besieges the City 永夜围城
When memories can be read, forged, or even erased, what can we call real? If everything can be forgotten, whose memory must you live on in to survive? This is a trap woven from time, and an atonement for what has been remembered. Chen Shiya survives a blood-soaked beginner’s village and travels through dungeons, carefully navigating every step between trust and betrayal. Some will pay any price to return to the past. Some silently endure as they face a lover who has lost their memory. Some a
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Years of Clear Beauty 岁绎清妍
The Years of Yi and Qingyan is a sweeping romance about Wang Yi, the head of Kyoto's Wang family, and Mei Qingyan, a piano prodigy. Though they are six years apart in age, fate binds them together across two lifetimes. After a family upheaval, Mei Qingyan is rescued by Wang Yi, but memories of a previous life leave her afraid of him. Wang Yi is a powerful business magnate with a stern exterior, yet he loves deeply and keeps his feelings hidden as he protects the woman he loves amid complicated f
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The Ink Immortal Pursues His Wife: A Tortured Love, Reborn to Defy Heaven and Find Her 墨仙追妻：虐恋重生，逆天寻妻
[Ascetic Divine Lord Pursues His Wife + Reborn Heroine + Amnesia and Angsty Romance + Winning Her Back at All Costs] In my previous life, I carved out my heart, gave him my blood, broke my bones, and tore out my soul for him. In return, he personally pushed me onto the Immortal Execution Platform. Reborn, I tore apart the threads of love and swore off romance for good. But he knelt before me, eyes red. “Wanwan, don’t leave me. I’ve searched for you for a thousand years...” I sneered. “Divine Lor
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One Stroke of Ink Stains Heaven and Earth 一墨染乾坤
The young Mo Ran displays his extraordinary talent, roaming the cosmos with his childhood sweetheart and journeying through countless worlds. He reverses the decline of spiritual energy, brings peace to turmoil across the Myriad Worlds, and ultimately restores order to the universe.
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- 505 I Lay Flat in the Cold Palace for Three Years and Became the Empress Dowager of the Harem 冷宫躺平三年，我成了后宫太上皇 After lying flat in the Cold Palace for three years, I became the Empress’s power behind the throne. 5Reads—Score—Shelves
- 506 Forced to Register Our Marriage, the Campus Beauty Senior Keeps Playing Me 被迫领证后，校花学姐反复拿捏我 [Campus Life] + [One Love Interest] + [No System] + [Sweet Romance] + [Contrasting Ice-Cold Campus Beauty] + [Sweet from Start to Finish] When the girl he had secretly loved for three years said she would date him if he got into the same university as her, Fang Haoyu chose to retake his entrance exams. He spent a whole year studying day and night just to be with her. But when he finally got into the same university, the girl he'd loved from afar suddenly changed her mind! It hurt! It hurt so muc 50kReads9.3Score5.8kShelves
- 507 The Ascetic Divine Lord Is Seduced Into Breaking His Vows 禁欲神尊，竟被撩破戒 [Ascetic Chaotic God Venerable + Sweet, Adorable Spirit Herb Fairy + Tragic Love in a Past Life + Reborn and Pursuing His Wife + The Heavenly Emperor Steals His Bride] In her past life, Ruan Zhiwan had been hopelessly in love with the Chaotic God Venerable Ye Qingxuan for ten thousand years. He was cold and ascetic, his heart untouched, and he treated her with utter indifference. When the Heavenly Emperor framed her, he shattered her immortal bones with his own hands and cast her into the Infern 65Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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The Legendary Life of A Shui 阿水的传奇人生
[For everyone willing to pause and read A Shui’s story] If you enjoy A Shui’s story, please help me by clicking “Request an Adaptation.” Your vote could give this story a chance to reach more readers, and it would also give A Shui a chance to be heard. Thank you, everyone 💛 My name is A Shui. I had a difficult childhood and a life full of hardship. I’ve known suffering and been hurt, but I’ve climbed out of the abyss time and again. Others thought I would fall, but with sheer perseverance, I be
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Honkai: Star Rail: Tales of the Stars 崩铁：星辰往事
(The Trailblazer is Caelus, not Stelle. It's hard to find good pictures of Caelus, and this cover image really is quite nice.) (A fanfic told from the perspective of the game's characters, with no System or transmigration plot. It builds original stories on top of the main storyline, exploring each member's story, the founding of the Stellaron Hunters, and the Trailblazer's past with them.) (The plot is based on ideas and deductions drawn from the information currently available in the game. Som
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- 510 I Gave the Emperor an Ice-Cold Coke and Became the Tang Dynasty's Greatest Drinker 我给皇上灌了冰可乐，被封大唐第一酒仙 I gave the emperor an ice-cold Coke and was crowned the Tang Dynasty's greatest wine immortal. 10Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Ten Thousand Ways of the Elements 元素万法
Chaos Creatures Invade, and I Command Three Elements When chaos creatures invade, Keltaro's grandfather dies after leaving him one final message. He decides to set out alone and find his own path.
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Defying the Gods, Returning to Mortality 逆神化凡
[Fantasy] [Dual Cultivation] [Blood-Fueled Power] [Defying Heaven] [Wild Imagination] [Higher Dimensions] If the Heavenly Dao forbids it, then I will tear down the heavens! With mortal bones, I defy the sky; with chaos, I open a new dimension! The deepest taboo of the Three Realms is not a war between gods and demons, but a Primal Chaos Embryo forged from the bloodlines of gods, dragons, and humans. She is the fallen daughter of a god, hunted by the Three Realms. He is a worthless mortal, scorne
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The Ghost Chronicles 聻鬼录
100% original, handwritten by the author [Urban cultivation + supernatural powers + beautiful female ghosts + hilarious comedy + all kinds of outrageous antics] As the saying goes: when a person dies, they become a ghost; when a ghost dies, they become a jian! The unlucky Long Gaishi accidentally encounters a ghost, defies fate, and becomes a ghost tamer, stepping into the bizarre and utterly ridiculous world of the supernatural. While others raise ghosts to battle, he cuddles up with stunning
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The Snake's Trail Through the Qinling Mountains 蛇行秦岭
After dying, a migrant worker is forced by a snake immortal to become a spirit medium. He takes in the useless disciples rejected by the Cangwu Sect, teaches them to turn their lives around, and helps them form Five-Colored Golden Cores. When the Cangwu Sect comes to seize the mountain’s heart, hundreds of his useless disciples stand behind him, hundreds of Five-Element swords pointed at the sect master. The sect master says, “Can one man like you take on hundreds of us?” He replies, “I’m not al
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- 515 When the Clouds Are Deep and the Waters Clear 云深清浅时 Xiao Yunxing is the dashing, top-of-the-class heartthrob admired by every girl at school: someone to admire from afar, but never touch. Yet he smiles only for Chen Qinghuan, the “childhood sweetheart” who transfers to his school, and spoils her in every way. Chen Qinghuan is a proud, domineering, yet adorably naive math genius. Math is her talent, and loving him is her dream. She stays by his side, always. One waits, the other pursues, and together they earn places at their dream university. Aft 18.6kReads9.6Score2.1kShelves
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Oops! My Finger Slipped Again! 哎呀！手又滑了！
Question: How much trouble can one accidental slip cause? Answer: Chen Fan's firsthand experience will tell you: it can cause trouble for the whole world. Accidentally dropping his phone → The phone gains sentience (the chatterbox edition). Accidentally throwing his phone → Knocks out a thief (the boomerang edition). Accidentally animating a shared bike → Chases motorcycle thieves all over town (Traffic Authority reminder: There are countless roads, but safety comes first). Accidentally knocki
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- 517 She Didn’t Want to Be Empress, So She Became a God 不想当女帝，于是她成了神 (Traditional coming-of-age heroine + unconventional romance + equally strong male and female leads + heroine with every elemental affinity + destiny of the phoenix + maxed-out talent attributes + reborn + play the pig to eat the tiger + mildly satisfying read) Jiang Haonan’s transmigration is the kind an ordinary loser would have. She was just a 5G internet addict who surfed at full throttle every day, a fan of commenting on Douyin, mildly avoidant of school, and barely alive in spirit. But afte —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 518 Three Kingdoms: I Collect the Heroes’ Bodies in a Time of Chaos 三国：我在乱世给英雄收尸 Three Kingdoms: I Collect the Bodies of Heroes in an Age of Chaos 7Reads—Score—Shelves
- 519 The Fox Immortal of the Qinling Mountains 秦岭狐仙 Qinling Fox Immortal My name is Peng Wei. I’m a repairman at a little shop at the foot of the Qinling Mountains. I fix televisions and rice cookers, and my life is as still as stagnant water. That was until March 15 of that year, when I met a woman in red in the thick fog on Mount Yuhuang. She said her name was Xiao Hong, and she was a fox immortal who had cultivated for three hundred years. She said she had waited for me for three years. She said I had a destined connection to immortality. 46Reads8.1Score—Shelves
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After My Childhood Friend Spoiled Me Rotten, I Restarted My Life Three Times 被竹马宠爆后我重开了三次人生
They chose each other, secretly loved each other, and saved each other. Both are devoted to one another, and there are two male leads. You are the trial fate set for me, and the only one who can set me free. In this cycle, you are my obsession, and my faith.
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- 521 A Trillion-Dollar Sweetheart: Mr. CEO, You're Amazing 千亿甜妻：总裁老公你好棒 Luo Xi never imagined that, when betrayal had left her with nothing, this would be the person to reach out a hand to her. He forcefully entered her life and told her, “From now on, your heart can belong to no one but me. Love me, trust me, and rely on me completely.” The mysterious and aloof Song Younian was said to give off an unmistakable stay-away-from-me aura. Yet he couldn’t resist kissing her, hugging her, and holding her hand, without the slightest restraint. He helped her get revenge and 823Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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Sword Lord of a Troubled Age 乱世剑主
He was once a supreme sword cultivator whose name shook the world. To fight the Dark Emperor and protect all living beings, he spared no effort, exhausting every last bit of his cultivation. Yet through the long years of war, his loved ones and close friends died one after another. Despair gradually consumed Xiao Yue, until he finally chose to destroy his Dao heart and descend into reincarnation. A thousand years later, he was reborn in the body of an ordinary young man, his memories shattered a
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- 523 How Could I Possibly Not Have a Wife? 我怎么可能没有老婆 [A cool, beautiful bottom who’s secretly a lovesick romantic VS a lovesick ghost top who adores his wife and wants to cling to her] [Two male leads, both virgins, one-on-one, romance in an infinite loop, light horror, age gap...] [Ximing Tower] After a car accident, Xin Yi, who had been single for twenty years, became someone else’s wife. And her husband had forced her into the marriage? Xin Yi didn’t care. “He’s just an NPC. I’ll think of it as getting bitten by a dog.” Her NPC husband chuckled 4Reads—Score129Shelves
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Everyone’s Surviving the Supernatural: I’m the Hidden Prophet 全民诡异求生：我是隐藏预言家
[Strong Female Lead + Powerhouse Heroine + Mind Games + Awakening] “Are you a seer?” “No.” “Then how did you know Tang Yue was an impostor?” Wen Yixiu smiled but didn’t answer. She couldn’t. Her talent was called “Copycat,” the only one of its kind, hidden at the System level. When the real seer investigated someone, she automatically copied their ability. From that moment on, there were two seers in the game. One in the open, one in the shadows. The one in the open drew the fire. The o
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- 525 My Mother-in-Law Brought Her Son’s Mistress into Our Home? I Made the Whole Family Leave with Nothing 婆婆带小三登堂入室？我让他们全家净身出户 My mother-in-law brought her mistress into our home? I made the whole family leave with nothing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Warring States Campaign 战国征途
"During a protection mission, agent Gao Yuan transmigrates from an airplane to the State of Zhao at the end of the Warring States period. Zhao’s famous general Li Mu takes him for a star of destiny, someone capable of changing the chaotic world. By then, Qin’s war of unification has already begun. Gao Yuan is swept helplessly into the conflict and embarks on a path that defies fate. As he struggles against the tide of history, he unexpectedly discovers that a greater conspiracy lies hidden behin
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- 527 Don't Order Takeout at Night 晚上别点外卖 Don’t Order Takeout at Night 2Reads—Score—Shelves
- 528 The Heavenly Book of Nine Words 九字天书 Heaven, earth, birth, old age, illness, death, injury, disability, emptiness. Legend has it that when the Nine-Character Heavenly Tome appears, all living beings in the world will enter the next cycle of reincarnation. Yet no one can unravel the secrets of its nine characters. Even so, countless cultivators pursue it relentlessly, fighting over it without end. War rages, and countless innocent lives are lost. Later, many come to believe the Nine-Character Heavenly Tome is a demonic book and seek 33Reads7.4Score—Shelves
- 529 All My Magical Treasures Are Maniacs 我的法宝全是疯批 The reporter grabs the white-bearded old man. "I heard you have a young disciple here who squats on the ground every day, talking to chunks of iron?" The old man strokes his beard. "Don't spread nonsense. He's doing ideological work. Our sect has three hundred swords. Last night, two hundred and ninety of them went missing. They all ran off to find him on their own." "What about that rusty sword? The one that's been sulking and rusting for eight hundred years?" The rusty sword slides an inch fro 9Reads—Score—Shelves
- 530 EN The Immortal Treasure Basin 聚宝仙盆 [Mortal cultivation] [No System]. By a twist of fate, He Pingsheng, an outer disciple of the Taixu Sect, obtains a [Cornucopia] and embarks on the path of cultivation. Place a low-grade [Qi-Gathering Pill] into the basin, and one day later, it becomes two pills, both of them top-grade. Put in an ordinary cultivation technique, and it becomes a Heaven-tier technique. Treasures, medicinal herbs, spirit stones, and more can all be placed inside and enhanced. From then on, He Pingsheng walks toward 400.6kReads8.7Score30.8kShelves
- 531 After Sorting Through the Deceased's Belongings, I Received a Text from the Dead 整理遗物后，我收到了死者短信 After Sorting Through the Deceased’s Belongings, I Received a Text from the Dead 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Dungeon Boss's Code 副本boss的修养
Farming, masterminding from behind the scenes, clones, management, and a game-world setting. In the early Warring States period, mysterious pocket realms appeared all over the world. People could enter them and obtain all kinds of resources. Thus began the path of martial arts and immortal cultivation. Three hundred years later, the Seven Kingdoms were locked in constant warfare. At this time, Song Yuanming transmigrated into a pocket realm and became the BOSS of a realm that had yet to fully ta
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Stars Untainted, Summer Already Gone 星辰未染夏已凉
[Mutual salvation + revenge after falling to the dark side + strong yet tragic leads + two equally powerful leads + sweet romance and heartbreaking love. A complicated, darkening puppy-like boy vs. a resilient, delicate girl with a special constitution] As the flames of the Su Yuan Sect fell, Lin Xiaran thought she would never see Nangong Chen again. Back then, she had thought that if she could not save him, at least they could die together without regret. When she awoke again, the pure-hearted,
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I Just Became the Ancestor of the Hehuan Sect, and You’re Telling Me This Is the Modern World? 刚成合欢宗老祖，你说这是都市？
[Villain] + [Hehuan Sect] + [Invincible] Lin Yu transmigrates into the modern-day setting of a Dragon King son-in-law novel and becomes the story’s Villain. Beautiful, wealthy women abound in this world, and powerful protagonists are everywhere. However, Lin Yu awakens the Destiny Villain System, gains an early Foundation Establishment cultivation level from the start, founds the Hehuan Sect, sweeps aside every protagonist, and claims the beautiful, wealthy women for himself.
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- 535 At the Parcel Station, I Uncovered My Husband's Affair with a Rich Woman 快递驿站，我扒出老公和富婆的奸情 At the Courier Pickup Station, I Uncovered My Husband’s Affair with a Rich Woman 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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High Martial: Beginning with a Spiritfire Body 高武：从灵火体开始
Beneath the neon lights of a bustling city lies a world of high-level martial arts, hidden from ordinary people. College student Lin Yu had been living an ordinary life until an accident awakened his rare “Spiritfire Physique.” Now he can see spiritual energy coursing between steel and concrete, and even draw on the heat within him to unleash flames that can consume the heavens. When the flames burn away the darkness, what will remain: ashes, or new life?
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Falling Star Trajectory 陨星轨迹
(I'm a new writer, so please feel free to point out anything I haven't done well.) On his eighteenth birthday, Wei Ni awakened a spatial ability. He thought his future was bright, but one problem after another soon arose. What do you mean my mother, who disappeared five years ago, is coming back to kill my dad? What do you mean I'm the product of a biological experiment, and there's a second consciousness inside me? People with ulterior motives approached Wei Ni, setting off one vortex after ano
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The Poisonous Phoenix of the Marquis’s Estate: The Princess Has Returned to Kill 侯门毒凰，公主她杀回来了
Luo Ning, the legitimate daughter of the Duke of Dingguo, spent three years serving in the army in her father’s place. She made a name for herself on the Northern Di battlefield and was personally granted the title of Marquis Lanling by the emperor. When she returned in triumph, her own father sent her to her death with a cup of poisoned wine, then gave all her military honors to her good-for-nothing younger brother. When she opened her eyes again, she had become Xiao Luoning, the emperor’s most
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- 539 Reborn as a Farmer's Daughter, I Became the Village's Richest with One Bag of Fertilizer 穿成农家女后，我用一包化肥成了全村首富 After Reincarnating as a Farm Girl, I Became the Richest Person in the Village with a Bag of Fertilizer —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Forced to Cultivate: My Fishing Rod Is a Divine Artifact 被迫修仙：我的鱼竿是仙器
[Casual cultivation + a touch of comedy + brainless System + female lead + don't think too hard] Ling Xian met an orphan in a small village who, after losing both parents, changed their name to Ling Xianyu. Their greatest dream every day was to go fishing and steal sweet potatoes from children. Born with an innate lie-flat immortal root, they were discovered by an elder of an immortal sect. Mistaking it for a peerless immortal root that had developed its own path, the elder took them back to the
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The Wallbreaker: From Sandbox to Creation 破壁者：从沙盒到创世
Cang Ye opened his eyes and discovered that he had become a string of numbers in Heaven's “Divine Ruins System”: scrap unit Chen-079. He had once been the ancient supreme being Chenlong, but had been refined into a power source for the System. “Ding! Virus detected. Initiating purge!” Cold System commands arrived alongside cleaning puppets, intent on formatting him completely. “Purge me?” Cang Ye laughed. A chaotic vortex swirled in his left eye, while a star of Chenlong that could shatter spell
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- 542 Healing in Light and Shadow 光影相随之疗愈 Gu Yu, a stern architect with a scar on his wrist, believes in absolute structure and eternal truth. He hopes to mend a past torn apart by plagiarism by renovating an abandoned textile mill as part of the Light and Shadow Renewal Project. Su Man, a vibrant beauty brand director, is devoted to the discontinued perfume Chasing the Light, which symbolizes both her pain and her original aspirations. She sees the factory as crucial to her career and believes in the power of dreams and emotions. When —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 543 After Seven Days on a Business Trip to Guangzhou, My Cousin Showed Up at My Door with a Baby Bump 广州出差七天，表妹揣着孕肚登了我家门 While I Was Away on a Seven-Day Business Trip to Guangzhou, My Cousin Showed Up at My Door with a Baby Bump 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Southern Hua Chronicles 南华录
Now, if someone could ride upon the regularity of Heaven and Earth and harness the six breaths of nature to roam without end, what would they have to rely on? Thus it is said: The Perfect Man has no self, the Divine Man has no achievements, and the Sage has no name. The story begins with an assassination on a rainy night.
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The Centennial Ceremony: A Broken Road Home 百年仪式：残缺的归途
I Transmigrated to Another World and Drew a God-Tier Summoned Beast! After a car accident, my deskmate Liu Yuheng and I transmigrated together to a magical continent in another world. He awakened as a sturdy, dependable warrior, while I awakened as a summoner, supposedly the weakest class of all. To stay by his side, I hid the sleeping Dragon God of the Negative World inside the ring on my finger and pretended to be a useless weakling who needed his protection. That was until a divine oracle rev
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- 546 The Day I Was Divorced, I Found a Middle Eastern Prince in Yiwu 被离婚那天，我在义乌捡了个中东王子 The day I got divorced, I picked up a Middle Eastern prince in Yiwu. —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The God-Eroding Corpse 蚀神之骸
My new work is out! Feel free to check it out on Tomato Novel. I hope you enjoy it. Your support motivates me to write, and I’ll do my best to tell every story well!
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Kingdom of Locke: The Forbidden Eye 洛克王国：禁忌之瞳
Born with red eyes, he was seen as an ill-omened monster. Dean Griffin found him in the rain one night and told him it wasn't a curse, but a gift. He became the most brilliant top student at the Academy of Magic, sealed the Nether Ancient Dragon, and made a name for himself across Kalosia. He thought he had finally found a place to belong. Until his best friend died because of him, his mentor turned against him, and the one he loved gave their life to protect him. Everyone said he was born
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- 549 The Celestial Guide 天人引 [Traditional Xianxia] [Mortal Cultivation] [No System] [Genius] [No Characters Acting Stupidly] Legend says that spiritual energy serves as the link between Heaven and humanity... To bury his late mother, the mortal boy Zhang Shiyun climbs a sheer cliff and knocks on the gates of immortality. But what awaits him is no paradise, only a cultivation world even crueler than ordinary society. After unexpectedly obtaining the Heavenly Book, The Guide Between Heaven and Humanity, he discovers that inna —Reads7.1Score—Shelves
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You Raise Beasts, I Raise My Dad: His Swordsmanship Is the Best in the World 你们御兽我御爸，我爸剑法甲天下
[Beast Taming]+ [Comedy]; entirely handwritten “He is a nationally renowned Beast Taming genius who once personally took part in a top-secret government operation! A man of unmatched glory!” “You mean he took the college entrance exam?” “He has contracted countless strange creatures and is a Beast Taming Grandmaster!” “Is his dad a strange creature too?” “Sir, you can’t keep undermining me like this! I make my living telling stories. If you keep refuting me, I’ll go hungry today!” The man waved
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