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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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126 Swordsman and Prodigal Son Travel in Rivers and Lakes Madness After MidnightEastern Fantasy31k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Uncle 40 is writing a book for the first time. I don't know how to go about it. Should I stick to it?
126 Eight Domain Dragon Lord Crayfish with WineEastern Fantasy244k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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150,000 Words, just a few people reading it [almost crying]
127 Twin Hairpins Yeya PearModern Romance434k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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One is a modern girl who lives in a slum with low self-esteem and is bullied on campus, and the other is a noble and pampered daughter of a prince. What will happen when their souls are swapped in time and space? This is a novel that a newcomer has just published. Comments are welcome!
127 My System Is a Beauty Ah MaoEastern Fantasy252k WordsOngoing 8Reads—Score—Shelves
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If I can't write a hit, I'll let my son continue writing. If my son can't, let my grandson continue writing. You've heard of Yu Gong Yishan, right? I don't believe that none of my descendants can write novels!
127 Miracle: Judgment Listen Carefully to the Sound of RainUrban279k WordsOngoing 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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A new author, the first book was written by myself [Blowing Kiss]
128 Foolish Play of the Gods January Ninety AutumnUrban3.7M WordsCompleted 788.7kReads9.7Score110.7kShelves
129 Supernatural Resurrection, Eternal Night Falls Qingyuan Vocational High School Little GeniusMystery2.4M WordsOngoing 381.8kReads9.3Score35kShelves
130 Two Hundred Years Later, I Will Suppress the Apocalypse Alone Luminous SwayingUrban1.9M WordsOngoing 533.8kReads9.2Score68kShelves
131 Reverse Maze PengpaiUrban1.7M WordsOngoing 89.5kReads9.5Score8.1kShelves
131 Joy Foundation: Don't Be Greedy, I'm Really Not a Disciplinary Inspector Ice LordUrban179k WordsOngoing 765Reads5.8Score114Shelves
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Horror article, I took off after reading it all.
132 The Ancestor Who Turned from a Ruffian to an Immortal Is Invincible The Mind Is BoundlessEastern Fantasy1.4M WordsOngoing 382Reads9.5Score101Shelves
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Let's take a look. We are all good at urging each other and criticizing each other.
132 Collapse of Iron: Past Stories from the Stars Sskxiaomian269k WordsOngoing 320Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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This year's new Beng Tie fanfic, because it is a new book, has not been rated yet, and the number of people is not large yet. It is related to the past of the star core hunters and pioneers (Qiong). In a sense, it can be regarded as a prequel to Beng Tie (based on the deduction and conception of the existing main line information), like Silver Wolf, Firefly, and Blade will all appear later. As one of the main characters, they will occupy a lot of space. Now it is Kafka taking care of the little pioneers. There is also a special chapter about Silver Wolf, Firefly, and Blade that has nothing to do with the plot. You can first check whether the writing is suitable. This is the first time for the author to write a fanfic. There are really few comments. If possible, I beg everyone to express their opinions. The author accepts both good and bad opinions.
133 I, the Big Boss from Another World, Distribute the System in Class A Coder Who Knows How to CodeUrban160k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please review, this is my first time writing a book, every character has something wonderful to offer
133 Biography of Canggu, My History of Cultivation Mayfly's Ambition FYUrban403k WordsCompleted 7Reads—Score—Shelves
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Micro science fiction + true cultivation, first love sweet pet + sacrifice stream "I have an island that can span the sun, moon and stars." At the beginning, I almost sent myself to heaven by attending a funeral. I traveled through the world of cultivation. What's the point of falling in love? Grandpa wants to become the best in the world of cultivation! New book, the treasures lightly spray [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]
134 Apocalyptic Battle Royale: I Have a Black Market System Nan Xinjiang AcridineSci-Fi & Apocalypse100k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomer, new book, please come and support me, thank you all [love] [love] [love]
135 Record of Demolition in Central Plains August StormUrban931k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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On a cold night, beacon smoke locked up the small village, and the militiamen and the people took strict precautions. The secret whistle revealed the plan to steal the camp, and the fire burned red to guard the granary. [Praise]
135 Five-Dimensional Manifold Silicon KnowledgeSci-Fi & Apocalypse1.2M WordsOngoing 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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No one has read it. I wrote it after two years of research [face covering]
136 Hp: but I Can Use the Word Spirit Ask Where Hong Is GoingEastern Fantasy561k WordsOngoing 1.3kReads—Score136Shelves
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Too lazy to make a cover
136 Desire for Enlightenment Nangong MeiyueFantastical Romance200k WordsOngoing 1.7kReads7.3Score152Shelves
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[Dragon Mother + Absolutely Beautiful + Picking Up Pregnancy + Pregnancy + Prenatal Transplantation + No CP + Folding Ears + Tunnel Rats + Upgraded Cool Articles + Weird Spirits], the "sweet girl" from Sichuan and Chongqing traveled through a different world, and after she got hairpins, she actually hatched dragon eggs in the Hehuan Sect? Book title: "Desire for the Tao" [What]
136 The Story of the Arrest of the Bandits in Shahe August StormUrban1.6M WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
137 They've All Entered the Tower to Survive. Do You Want to Increase Your Cooking Skills? LingliSports200k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please help me take a look and make suggestions. I hope the newcomers can make progress! I can't find any problem on my standalone machine! Thank you everyone! ! ! Love you!
137 [Hero of the Republic of China Yun Zhongyan: Bloody Shanghai] August StormUrban1.6M WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
138 My Readers Cover Three Thousand Worlds Bastard with Mung BeansModern Romance1.2M WordsCompleted 20.5kReads9.3Score2.5kShelves
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Hey guys, a super exciting rebirth novel is here😎! Li Wenshu, the great god in the Internet literature circle, died suddenly and was reborn at the age of sixteen. Facing the three thousand worlds of books in the system space, he started a different creative path😱. The suspenseful and infinite flow of novels makes people want to put it down. The rebirth of the legitimate daughter and the revenge of the house fight have become a must-read for all ladies. The story of the time-traveling loser's counterattack and slap in the face even triggered the war between the three realms😜. Various types of novels, different exciting ones, come and feast your eyes😏! This is the first 80,000-word work by a new writer, and it may bring you unexpected surprises😎!
138 It Turns Out It's Not a Dream: Motherland, Let's Cultivate Immortality Together No Time, No TimeAncient Romance632k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Alas, it's almost 200,000 words, and no one is reading it.
138 Huangqiao Beacon Fire August StormUrban2.5M WordsOngoing 12Reads5.8Score—Shelves
139 Demon Slayer: Butterfly Wings Ruochen from Lanxi TownMartial Arts202k WordsOngoing 15Reads—Score—Shelves
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Butterfly endures my wife, YYDS
140 Black Cliff What a Big RobinMystery131k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Put down a small article of your own, welcome to take a look
140 The Exorcist's Love Brain Turned Black After Being Rejected by the Demon King Old Wolf, Old Wolf, What Time Is It?255k WordsOngoing 45Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomers and new books, please support! Act cuteớ ₃ờ
140 Rutted Fish Jiangtanqing32k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Almost crying] In fact, no one is watching at all
141 The Whole Network Was Shocked. This Guy Went Crazy by Stealing Attributes. Specialized in Remote CallingSports356k WordsCompleted 15Reads—Score—Shelves
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Cool. It's fun to use your brain. The first one is my new book
141 Doomsday Route: Reshaping the Blue Planet Li ZichengSci-Fi & Apocalypse105k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Xiaomengxin, please pay attention to me
141 Guide to the Tsundere Bamboo Horse Old Wolf, Old Wolf, What Time Is It?11k WordsCompleted 2Reads8.6Score—Shelves
141 After Rebirth, If You Have Milk, You Will Be a Mother Xu Fan Who Loves to Eat Pig Trotters and Stuffed SoybeansEastern Fantasy447k WordsCompleted 154Reads—Score—Shelves
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Just exceeded 300,000, Tomato won't give traffic [punch out] [punch out]
142 Surreal Online Game Selling Live and Violently BrushingSports1.3M WordsCompleted 8.7kReads7.3Score650Shelves
142 Triple Personality: My Split Murderous Roommate Old Wolf, Old Wolf, What Time Is It?14k WordsCompleted 2Reads8.5Score—Shelves
142 Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Rebirth of the Ancestor Who Transformed into a God. Houttuynia CordataEastern Fantasy108k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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Fantasy cultivating immortality, humorous with jokes, meticulous writing, welcome to review (mutual reviews by authors + reminder for updates + bookshelf [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend]
143 Online Game: Space-Time Sword God Just Writing NonsenseSports1.4M WordsCompleted 12.6kReads8.5Score1kShelves
143 The Old Man Was Arrested, and I Was Forced to Feed the Devil with My Body. Old Wolf, Old Wolf, What Time Is It?8k WordsCompleted 2Reads8.5Score—Shelves
143 Wake Up, Don't Sleep East Is Not Gone YetModern Romance83k WordsOngoing 7Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first time writing, and I wanted to ask everyone how bad it is.
144 The Wife Reaches the Top of the Doomsday Dual-System Superpower List Listen to the NovelFantastical Romance28k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Babies can read it and come and comment on the memorial.
144 The Divine Path Through Which the Soul Travels Through Eternity Boundless Mist and RainEastern Fantasy583k WordsOngoing 7Reads8.8Score—Shelves
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This book has just reached 200,000 words, so it's time to start reading!
144 I Take the Sword as My Way Wooden BoatEastern Fantasy204k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Then I'll give it a thumbs up. I'm a complete newcomer. I wrote it myself. The writing style may be average. If you are bored, you can come and read it [face covering] [face covering]
144 Nirvana Evolves and Finally Becomes a God The King of Complaints Is HereEastern Fantasy292k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first time writing a novel, let's call it a hegemony novel! Can anyone help me with reference [face covering]
145 Han Qi: the Founding of the Country Began with Huo Qubing Little FishHistorical42k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Welcome to visit us for guidance!
145 Super God: Nava at the Beginning, I Am the Oxer Killing Machine Those Who Are Close to Ink Are Black124k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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A newcomer, writing a 100,000-word work for the first time, but no one will read it [almost crying]
146 Ming Inheritance Thief of TimeHistorical6.5M WordsCompleted 316.8kReads9.4Score39.1kShelves
146 Master Talisman's Undercover Practice Notes FeixuedanglouEastern Fantasy919k WordsOngoing 355Reads6.8Score115Shelves
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For my own book, I wanted to write something light and interesting that everyone would like to read. I don't know why the results are so poor. If fellow Taoists passing by are interested in Mortal Immortal Heroes, you can click in and have a look. I still used a lot of clever ideas throughout the book.
146 Tiangong Ballad Mayfly a DayAncient Romance155k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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The main heroine, the heroine practices Taoism and benefits the world. She has a brave and independent personality. Why is no one watching it?
147 The Prodigal Son of the Great Zhou Dynasty FameHistorical2.0M WordsCompleted 30.8kReads9.1Score3.3kShelves
148 Epilepsy? What's Wrong with Me? I Can't Kill You! I'm Deep in LoveModern Romance215k WordsOngoing 13Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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When other authors had the opportunity to sign a contract because they had written 20,000 words, I was still unable to sign for some reasons. The book is called "Explosion Novel" and has already been written for love to more than 90,000 words. The content is about curiosity and explosion.