Surreal Online Game

It has a bit of a dnd western fantasy feel, a good book The rest of the story is too showy and a bit pretentious. It would be nice to tell the story clearly. It keeps narrating mentally and makes inexplicable connections to the previous book.

Five-star praise sent First, there is absolutely no heroine (I hope this will continue) Secondly, there are no clues in the book so far, and everyone has a brain. Third, maybe I feel it's a little bit unsatisfactory because the male protagonist's adaptability talent is not yet perfect and strong enough (maybe the author has his own arrangements). Moreover, there seems to be no resistance to being burned or anything, and the looting skill seems to be almost meaningless (I still particularly like the 190 strength skill). I can only install one, but the book is already flourishing [Punch Out]. Fourth, I feel like I can explain the male protagonist's previous life background. Fifth, if you want to change jobs, you may want to hide your profession and get dual cultivation of magic and martial arts or cooperate with talents. It's best to have high attack and defense, long-range magic, and learn Su Xiao from Samsara Paradise (others use sniper rifles, but you use bows and arrows).

Even surgeons in tertiary hospitals only perform stitches, bandages and disinfection. You are not a goblin. You are a normal person in the 21st century! A monster costs 15 copper coins, and you can ask someone to apply it on you without any surgery or stitches. 500 Yuan? You can get a minor surgery for 500 yuan. Quoting a comment from a reader, (author) = logic weird, including logic At the beginning, there was a deceptive introduction, and the protagonist had no background or psychological activities. In the end, he was a ruthless monster spawner killer, focusing on a calm and cold-hearted person, but without a brain. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] This novel is so good

This book is okay. It doesn't have the usual clichés like a sister is introduced in one chapter, the little girl must be saved in three chapters, and the protagonist becomes a god in five chapters. The protagonist is also an ordinary person who works hard with real swords and guns. As an ordinary person, he will have shortcomings. It is normal to have some ideas, right and wrong, which makes him more real. (Non-toxic) After reading Chapter 54, I feel that there are no problems and the logic is on point. However, there are some things that the author does not explain very clearly and requires readers to think for themselves. This is probably the reason why many people give low scores because they are used to having fun all the way without using their brains. One suggestion to the author is that if there are many people who question it, change it if necessary, or add an explanation. In an environment like Tomato, there are originally many people who eat history. Many people eat too much history, so they treat history as food. There is no way.

A book on the same level as "Game World: Fire Will Stand Above the Stars", very good, very appetizing! ! ! ! !

It's barely readable. The author's logical logic at the beginning was flawless but he slapped himself in the face within twenty chapters. Readers pointed out many inconsistencies and irrationalities that shouldn't have been pointed out, but the pace of the plot was reasonable. There is so much time to read this book [laughing]

This is the chapter on the God of Death. The whole article has a lifeless feel to it. My personal feeling is that every author has a different way of writing. It's quite magical. Seeing Chapter 331, none of my women are on my side. Really 666. I finally met and left with another group. Really 6. Then you might as well not write about women and just forget about having no women. Killing someone is also a waste of time. It will take at least a few hundred words of nonsense. The process of obtaining your strength is so difficult, just to make you work hard. , It would be better if you didn't kill, but in the end you still had to kill, then why did you grind for so long? I always like to add drama to myself at the end, no, who asked you? I'm here to read a novel, who cares about what shit you ate!

The logic is okay, not too many poisonous points The beginning was okay, but around chapter 90 it became more and more ridiculous and turned into fantasy.

She likes to hide her strength, but she overdoes it and waits for three hours for a piece of skin (1- the protagonist is the strongest among the players in the town and can easily fight one against a hundred, 2- she has an invitation letter in her hand), but she can't help but fight her, and is treated with a bad face and verbal threats by a weak businessman. The protagonist silently said I will only give you two hours and then left. Then the business person went to the boss she knew and asked about the protagonist's situation and found out that the protagonist is even more powerful than the boss she said. The existence of an awesome person and then the shitty giving away skin and money, it feels so familiar - it turns out to be the Dragon King with a crooked mouth. As soon as the protagonist of the Dragon King crooked his mouth, the people from the Chamber of Commerce greeted the Dragon King. The other men's forces just said a few words to the protagonist and they ransacked the house and wiped out the family (more than a hundred people), and the Chamber of Commerce was run by a woman. That's awesome. The Dragon King protagonist with an invitation in his hand was made to wait for three hours in vain, and then he said bad words, made a bad face, and threatened verbally. Afterwards, he happily continued to do business. Nothing happened. When will a man stand up? [Angry] Don't you have any privileges in novels? [Crying] Guess what, after a few hours of hard work, I got the skin and found that it was full of holes. I was afraid of making mistakes. I didn't really want to use it. Then I turned around and took on a mission to fight the Night Demon. The decision to use the Night Demon skin actually made me laugh. Earlier, I had a crazy confrontation with other readers because of the conflicts caused by this skin. The readers were all pissed off. As a result, I skipped the next chapter because of the skin and decided to make a new skin myself. So in order to get the skin, this chapter is simply screening readers [face covering]

Everything else was fine, except that I chose the migrant workers' war as my career. . Don't tell me what a warrior is when he wakes up. No matter how you get up, the soldiers are like sewers. Don't believe it? Look at the powerful bosses in mythology. Which one is a warrior? They are all Masters

The book is good, I read it in one morning. The protagonist has a clear personality, and the content does not have too many flaws (it is a little confusing that the advanced attribute pills are not replaced with multiple attribute pills. I guess the author did not expect it in the early stage). Overall it's pretty good, recommended

The author said that the BOSS is extremely difficult to kill, but I didn't feel that it was that difficult. The second-level protagonist kills a tenth-level BOSS. The BOSS's strongest ability is disguise. After breaking the disguise, the frontal combat effectiveness is not much stronger than that of the protagonist. Okay, you said that the frontal combat effectiveness of the specialized boss is weak, I can understand it, but what about the two giant pythons at the back? They should be frontal combat type BOSS. If I remember correctly, they seem to be level 10 as well. Just challenge these two level three protagonists. I feel like this hierarchy is a joke;

It's quite satisfactory, not too bright or exciting. It's logical, but what you wrote is a novel, not a thesis. I'm sorry, but I'm still willing to give you a four-star rating. I hope you'll be successful all the way.

It's pretty good, but the author makes a lot of complaints at the end of each chapter, which kind of affects reading. I skip it every time. The author should write less essays, [roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes]

It's pretty good, but the author keeps criticizing people... It affects the perception a little... It's good to have some arguments, and other readers will respond anyway, but the author keeps criticizing people, which is quite rare and difficult to comment on [Thoughts]

Appropriately add a few pets that you can rest assured of. They need to be both talented and smart. Refer to the dog in Samsara Paradise. He always wanders alone. It is easy to get stuck later and the plot design will be very monotonous.

To be honest, this book is not perfect. It is like entering the game world at the beginning. I have also read it and it collapsed after reading it. The value of this book is very low, and the upgrade is slow but it does not affect the protagonist's decisive killing. There is no pretense and slap in the face, and there are no enemies everywhere, and there is no wretched development. So far, I am enjoying reading it. What I like most is that the author does not write a mentally retarded plot. I hope I can keep reading it. Okay, see you after reading chapter 300. Men will be killed if they disagree with her, but women are surprisingly tolerant. They can survive no matter how they offend the protagonist. Once is enough. He also likes to preach about values, but later the plot starts to fall into the same old routine again.

It can be seen that the author is a very principled person, and the work itself is worthy of recommendation. It's about the heroine. I read a book before and the author clearly stated that it was a single heroine. The protagonist did marry his childhood sweetheart. All the performances were that there was another person who always flirted with him and he refused completely. They were a better match. I saw some people saying that some people like it more with a person in between. The wife is just a part of the play. I didn't know what a strange habit this was. I thought it was because there was no heroine. It turned out that there was a "wife" who never showed up, and then there was another one who was more like the heroine.

The first six chapters so far are well written, not mindless. Chapter 78: A high-level elixir that is 10 times the size of a low-level elixir can be eaten directly as a low-level elixir. Not to mention the medicine, if you replace it with a low-level elixir, even if you change it a little less, you can at least change it to seven or eight!

Give it a thumbs up. Actually I don't really want 5 stars. The main reason is that the author said at the beginning that he is a logic freak, but the internal writing is not perfect. If he had not said this at the beginning, most people would not be too picky. I haven't watched much of it now, but the protagonist is not introduced very well at the beginning, making me wonder where the protagonist's ruthlessness comes from later on. If you have other considerations, that's fine. But I also mentioned it a little bit. After all, ordinary people can't do this. At least I won't [cover face]. If I can't write, there's nothing to say. Also, I think there is no problem with the round shields, but iron will be corroded by acid. I am a chemistry student. Can I not know? [Covering face] Even impurities can corrode impurities but cannot corrode iron. If it is copper, it will be easier to say. But I don't know whether this is a fantasy world or a world like the ordinary world but with alien life forms. It's a very smooth way of writing (I'm not very good at describing it, I study engineering). Some people may not like it, but I think it's okay. I like to read books and read everything (I spend most of my time reading, not listening), but I think the low score is mainly due to what I said in the third paragraph. In short, cheers for the author, it's a very good idea, but the logic needs to be strengthened or explained in parentheses. After all, there are many people who find fault. [Learned]

So far, no female protagonist has appeared. The protagonist of this book has a very good character. The best part is that there is no such thing as a mission or a favor to save people. This is really awesome. This perspective is very unique. It can be said that the psychology of the protagonist and perspective are very real and not that special. He is a fool, and the charm of the protagonist lies in his unswerving strength and planning. He is not the kind of boss hunter in the rebirth novel, but he knows what he lacks and makes up for it (for example, if he wants to improve his body value, he goes to a specific place to get upgrade points). He is very comprehensively developed and has nothing special. That kind of fixed transaction object (there is no transaction in that group, they are purely paid to kill people, and there are only two, three or four people in the group who are strong but not many, more like an internal bounty list for top players). The cool thing is that there are not so many inexplicable communication lines. The most important thing is that the protagonist is very strong, unlike other novels. The kind of strength with star effect, but the kind of strength that makes me feel safe and secure even if I mess with it. It's not about records, communication, power, connections, the kind that makes others think of the trouble behind them, so they are afraid of it. It's the pure feeling of personal strength that can perfectly deal with all troubles or confrontations.

It is still not recommended that the author criticizes people at the end of the article. This really affects the reading experience. If you have anything to say together when the plot is calm, you must consider those of us readers who don't like comments but read the book silently.

This book is a slow-burner. I have read 66 chapters so far. Overall, it is good. First of all, let me explain that when I read novels, I don't care about the details and values. To put it bluntly, I am brainless. But it's important for me to keep watching. Maybe the rating is not high, maybe the rating is high. For many people, this is a reason to read this book. I am similar. I am used to reading reviews before reading a book. Maybe it is not very good for a certain book, but in most cases, I can see the one I like better. For me, I can't stand it, and I won't review a book unless the book is very bad. Of course, I have avoided some before reading the book, so I won't review it even if I don't read a certain book in the middle. So, so far, this book is to my liking and looks good, so I'm attaching a good review.

Generally speaking, the writing is quite good, and it is a relatively interesting type. The numerical settings are of a type that can be written for a long time. Although there is a slight problem with the connection between chapters, the writing style is still good, and the basic design is very good. It is worth reading [Thinking] [Learned]

It's just so so. Before the fight, we chat for a while [awkward laugh]

This is the second book that I rated on Tomato. It is actually very well written, and some of the settings are also very interesting. It is not the kind of content that is written under the banner of online game writing, with brainless and cool writing. Instead, it has a sense of traditional old online games in it, just like the old legends in the past? That's probably what it means. Also, the author's updates are a bit slow and infrequent, and I always have more to read.

It's pretty good. If you think about it logically, it's right. The protagonist doesn't talk much and the writing is fluent. He occasionally forgets something or has some minor problems, but it's innocuous. It's much better than many online game novels. Those novels can be read without thinking at all.

Overall, this work has a lot to offer and is worth recommending. However, I couldn't continue reading until I saw Chapter 276. The narrative in this part is a bit lengthy. I understand that the author hopes to give the novel a deeper connotation and create a more three-dimensional character image, but perhaps it is this pursuit that leads to the failure to fully display the depth of the characters, and the breadth of the character creation is sufficient but not deep enough. This made me feel more tired the further I read. Even so, this work still has great potential and is worth looking forward to.

It's still very interesting. Although some of the data written are a bit unrealistic, the protagonists of such novels rarely agree with me. I like it, so please give it a try. In the later stage, I hope to have a single female protagonist, a gentler girl who can feel sorry for the male protagonist.

You may want to continue reading it, but there is a big problem. If there are few updates, this book may lose some readers for a period of time. The author can listen to other people's ideas but don't be influenced by others. A brand new online game world with rigorous data is already a good work.