A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?
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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.
The first book is by a new author. I think it is well written, with detailed descriptions, a single female protagonist and a group portrait. It is worth reading and has a great world view. The world view of the second book is smaller, but it is absolutely a masterpiece.
Soul penetration + business warfare + intrigue + western fantasy. This is a novel about a former working elite traveling to another world and using their brains to counterattack and turn the tables. For you who like to savor slowly and ponder the details.
The three views are correct, the film is specially shot, it is not a dark novel, the protagonist is a normal person. There are so few people watching, please watch and comment [crying]
It's also my first time to reach 80,000. Don't worry about my writing skills. I won an award for my composition in elementary school [laughs crookedly] Just kidding hahahaha
Newcomers, recommend your own book and ask the bosses passing by to read it. Easy daily life of cultivating immortals + main plot advancement. Sliding kneeling heroine (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
This is the first time for the author to write a book in Tomato. The writing is still a sweet article. The writing style is not bad. You can take a look.
Micro science fiction + true cultivation, first love sweet pet + sacrifice stream "I have an island that can span the sun, moon and stars." At the beginning, I almost sent myself to heaven by attending a funeral. I traveled through the world of cultivation. What's the point of falling in love? Grandpa wants to become the best in the world of cultivation! New book, the treasures lightly spray [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]
Come on, come on [shy][shy] You are today where your thoughts have brought you; You will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you Your today comes from your past thoughts, and your tomorrow comes from your present thoughts
This book is also called [The Peerless Sword Emperor, who started his counterattack from the abandoned son of the Immortal Sect]. It is a very orthodox novel about young people who are passionate about cultivating immortals. The male protagonist proves his way to immortality with a sword and becomes the emperor. The female protagonist is beautiful and cute, and the villain is also very handsome. Unfortunately, he is a pervert~ [Adoration] Welcome to taste it~
It was written by me, an unknown author, about suspense and urban immortality. It was inspired by the anime "Under One Person". If you are interested, you can take a look
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No need for lengthy text (except for the current second chapter). It's all plot, no sloppiness, and no AI (except for typos). This is the author's debut novel. I hope everyone will support it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
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