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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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74 Year-Breaker Good at Charming EnemiesSci-Fi & Apocalypse349k WordsCompleted 7Reads—Score—Shelves
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The setting is novel, the imagination is huge, the protagonist is invincible, he rebels against Tiangang, and the battle is explosive. It is the most exciting article among all the cool articles. It is a must-read.
75 This Detective Is Extraordinary, He Can Become Stronger If He Falls in Love Iron DeepMystery1.7M WordsOngoing 10kReads9.0Score1.3kShelves
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This is the first book by a new author. Let's see if you like it. The main male protagonist's reasoning is urban suspense.
75 I Sell Fried Rice at the End of the World Qian JueSci-Fi & Apocalypse461k WordsCompleted 1.9kReads—Score104Shelves
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Newcomer, doomsday survival, not the Holy Mother, salted fish, teaching how to cook
75 My Neighborhood Has Traveled Through the Apocalypse Long Song and FireSci-Fi & Apocalypse31k WordsCompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one is a novel written by me. A ten-year-old bookworm has begun to try to develop into a novel. If you have seen it, can you give me some suggestions? Thank you very much!
76 Three Moves Iron Ball DriverUrban60k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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I really don't know how to write it. Please give me some tips for newbies. I have a lot of ideas in my head, but the response is so bad that I don't know what to do. Can you give me some advice?
76 Arrogant Girl, Please Respect Yourself, I'm Just Your Boss Uh-Huh, No, Huh-HuhUrban180k WordsOngoing 9Reads6.5Score—Shelves
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If you don't dislike the book I wrote, just read it [Sending my heart]
77 Huiyuan Comes to the World: I Use Blood Jade to Subdue the Heavens The Origin of the WindEastern Fantasy1.2M WordsOngoing 443Reads9.3Score—Shelves
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A grand world view and a different cultivation system. If you want to live forever, you need to cultivate the power of seven elements. If you want to know how to practice, you can click to take a look! Fellow Taoists are welcome to leave comments!
78 Xin Zu Unwilling to Work HardEastern Fantasy1.5M WordsOngoing 769Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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This is really good. I heard it was the first novel published by a big boss from another website on Tomato.
78 Urban Counterattack: Terminally Ill College Student Receives Immortal Inheritance Li XiaoqianUrban278k WordsOngoing 11.5kReads5.8Score1.6kShelves
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The first one was written by me, and the following ones were written by others. When will I be able to write a book like theirs? [Inquiry][Inquiry][Inquiry]
79 Fang Yu, Five Thousand Years of Refining Qi Li DaoranUrban14.5M WordsCompleted 107.4kReads9.1Score10.6kShelves
79 Endless Rebirth Twenty-Eight Eve PassMystery206k WordsCompleted 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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It has just reached 80,000 words, and there are still 16 chapters yet to be published.
79 If Everyone Is Obese, They Will Become Stronger. I Am the Only One Who Works Hard to Build Muscles. Fisherman's WordsEastern Fantasy115k WordsOngoing 81Reads—Score—Shelves
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The second book has just 80,000 words, everyone will like it!
80 King of Glory Ye HeiyuSports2.3M WordsCompleted 18.4kReads9.4Score2.1kShelves
80 Shopping for Talismans Online, Heavenly Master Taught Me How to Catch Ghosts Online A Thought of Peace of MindUrban422k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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New book for newcomers. Nice looking bag
80 The Apocalypse Is Coming, and the Whole City Turns into a Murderous Maniac Tangshan Peng YuyanSci-Fi & Apocalypse85k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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A blood-cross-like drama with no superpowers and no system.
81 I Lived a Long Life in the Three Kingdoms A Thought of Peace of MindHistorical308k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
81 Test the Sword and Ask the Spring and Autumn Period Qingshan Mi GeAncient Romance144k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is my own, the others are pretty good too
81 Magic Phone: Original Movie and TV Series Screenwriter for Nine YearsUrban389k WordsCompleted 928Reads—Score100Shelves
81 After Falling into the Water, She Held Two Murders in Her Hands to Kill Through the Darkness Li NianqixuanMystery147k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one was written by me, please don't scold me.
82 Elder, Please Pay Attention to Your Identity and Don't Always Act Like a Fun Person. ShangyiAncient Romance211k WordsOngoing 11Reads8.0Score—Shelves
82 Be Happy, Gong Bajiu! User 60447125Modern Romance216k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I'm jealous of all the Tomato writers, all of them write worse than me! But red flowers need green leaves. Look at the green leaves.
83 Wife, I Will Always Pester You Devil Mushroom Poisoning364k WordsCompleted 30.3kReads9.5Score4kShelves
83 Spring Is Still Good, Let's Go Boating with You User 60447125Ancient Romance299k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
83 The Wife Reaches the Top of the Doomsday Dual-System Superpower List Listen to the NovelFantastical Romance28k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Babies can read it and come and comment on the memorial.
84 Why Not Cross by Boat? Xian YukeAncient Romance483k WordsCompleted 169.8kReads9.7Score31.1kShelves
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I am a new author, but not cute [facepalm][facepalm] The first book is my second signed work, and the second one is a high-scoring novel! Recommended to everyone…
84 No? Host, Who Is the System? Picking up a Boat to Spend the WinterEastern Fantasy104k WordsCompleted 29Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please review, first time writing a book
84 The Tribulation of Zhenyu User 60447125Ancient Romance138k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
85 Prince Consort, Don't Come Here User 60447125Ancient Romance344k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
85 How Could I Not Have a Wife? Duan Xiyu100k WordsOngoing 1.2kReads—Score240Shelves
86 The Tenants Are All Cultivators, so I Help the Big Guys Do a Little Job. Please Drink Coke GingerUrban412k WordsOngoing 7Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Stably updated every day, please give me a book review, please give me a reminder...
86 Peace of Mind User 60447125Modern Romance135k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
86 Biographies of Immortal Cultivators Marisa WhiteEastern Fantasy184k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Not long after I signed the contract, I wrote a story about an ordinary character who got a Yunxia Holy Stone, transformed into the Five Elements Spiritual Root, and embarked on the path of cultivating immortality. It included martial arts, no pretentious scenes, and no things that the storage bag cannot be destroyed. It also took into account the scope of language communication. Has anyone come to take a look? Thank you.
87 Overcome the Calamity [Lingtide Tribulation] Hei XiaoyaoAncient Romance375k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is the first book for a newcomer. [Pauses face] It must be poorly written. I haven't read it yet.
88 The Training of the Dungeon Boss ZimuyuanEastern Fantasy383k WordsCompleted 5Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Behind the scenes, create different identities to enter the world
88 New World of Super Powers Dream DreamModern Romance96k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Add me one, add me one
89 That Teahouse Owner Killed Him All over the World Mu FengxuEastern Fantasy206k WordsOngoing 15Reads—Score—Shelves
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A new author, a new martial arts book is here! Please support!
89 Carrying a Sword to Survey the Sky HaizhoukeEastern Fantasy517k WordsOngoing 7Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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This is my new book, the novel has been signed, support it
90 Weird Story About Rules: Being Treated as a Hidden Boss at the Beginning Qianluo WeiyangMystery247k WordsOngoing 39Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one was written by me, and I highly recommend the next four! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
90 My Husband Is Haunted by a Male Ghost Autumn Pants Are so Tight315k WordsOngoing 54Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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[Cry][cry][cry]
91 Weird Rule Story: I Was Mistaken for the Boss at the Beginning! Overlord CatMystery726k WordsOngoing 3.1kReads9.2Score277Shelves
91 The Dog Licked Too Much and Was Forced to Be Loved by the Protagonists Autumn Pants Are so Tight705k WordsOngoing 769Reads8.8Score103Shelves
91 My Stock Trading System Is Connected to Reality Five Cars FiveEastern Fantasy1.2M WordsCompleted 15Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Request for Review] "My Stock Trading System Connects to Reality" Creativity: Traveling through the world of immortality, using the stock trading system to synchronize the earth's financial market. Please let me know if the rhythm and excitement are in place. The main theme is to listen to advice.
92 I Just Want to Destroy the Sect, Why Did I Defy Heaven and Become a God? Bright Moon NightEastern Fantasy7.2M WordsOngoing 117.7kReads9.3Score10.2kShelves
92 Blood Blade Burning Sky Snail Taking Off SlowlyEastern Fantasy518k WordsCompleted 91Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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Husband and wife are united, and the martial arts are in harmony! Swords and shadows, bloody storms! It's not night, it's a funeral. It is ink that is so thick that it can drown the soul, and it is the cold that has sealed away the eternity of time. Even a trace of wind and a ray of light are swallowed up by it. Long Dingtian's consciousness was sinking towards the deepest part of the cold abyss. The ice was biting and the pressure was as heavy as a mountain. It was like the internal organs were frozen into pieces of ice and then crushed into powder by huge force.
93 Wolf Gentleman Lift OffModern Romance111k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Sweet pet redemption story, it's really sweet. My first novel, but the cover hasn't been finished yet. It was generated by temporary AI. Save the child. I'm afraid that the 80,000-word push will collapse immediately.
94 I Said I Have No Cultivation, but They Always Say I Am Invincible Silver OathEastern Fantasy1.3M WordsCompleted 38.4kReads9.3Score4.4kShelves
94 Rebirth: Cat Author Lin Luobai Is Enjoying the Salted FishUrban124k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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New authors help each other, add friends, add bookshelf, update, 30 minutes of reading plus 5-star reviews, comment on each other, you help me, I will help you, and I will send you a long review of more than 50 words. (You can hang up and listen to the book while reading, so it's faster)
95 Tribulation Demon Half a Century OldMystery104k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I just wrote 60,000 words, let's see if I want to continue.
95 Traveling in Search of Immortals? The First Embrace of SpringEastern Fantasy125k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first book is written by myself, and the following ones are books that I think are good
96 The Eighteenth Level of Hell: Lying Is Forbidden Here Two Taels Are FreeMystery2.2M WordsOngoing 67.3kReads9.1Score10.2kShelves