Naruto, Sharingan, and an Insanely Overpowered, Badass Protagonist

1 宇 It Makes Sense for Uchiha to Rule the World Hand Of The Burnt End2.5M WordsCompleted 11.9kReads8.1Score861Shelves

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First of all, is this book worth reading? I think you have read some of the excellent Naruto fandoms and are looking for a new book to read. This one is worth reading. Among them, the author himself is also a classic dream master. His writing style and plot arrangement are good, and he also has golden fingers. There are some places where it should be fun. There are also some unreasonable plots and character outcomes or characterizations in the original work. The author has changed them and made them more reasonable, or in other words, more enjoyable. But judging from the current situation (after confirming the relationship, resurrecting Gaara's mother), this book is worse than the author's previous book. What's the main difference? The difference is that many places are flooded. There are a lot of things that are insignificant and have nothing to do with the development of the main line. If they are just for foreshadowing, there won't be so many chapters. Sometimes it's not a matter of skipping a chapter or not, it's a matter of only a part of the chapter being valid. I don't know what the author's final profit standard is, but in terms of reading experience, this book is much worse than the previous one. His improvement in the protagonist's strength seems straightforward, but his performance is not. The golden finger itself is actually quite good, not exceeding the standard, but exceeding the standard, and the refreshment is enough. However, the author intentionally limited the development of the character's intensity and deliberately lengthened the timeline. The focus is spent on some insignificant places. There are many ways for some characters to realize their dreams or appear on the stage. The author changed the entire long plot of Minato and the "original" plot in Dragon Vein. It can be seen that the author has the ability to shorten a large part of the plot in this book to the essence or appropriately reduce some unnecessary parts. I think this is a pity. If this book was well written, I think 9.4 Would be very casual. The plot arrangement, character growth, and the whole (ninja world) would be perfect. Now in the new chapter, there is a link with the previous protagonist, which can be said to be very good. It's a pity that the following contains spoilers: There is also something that I personally think is quite obvious, which is the change in the position of the heroine. There is a sister who needs help from Orochimaru or Tsunade to repair her disability. She is cute and can also promote the plot. There is a strong childhood sweetheart who is always by your side. This configuration is undoubtedly very attractive, and I was looking forward to how it would develop at first. But later it was replaced by Xiangling. I can understand it. It was clearly intended to let Sasuke and Xiangling realize their dreams. (I think there is a high probability that the author is not trying to promote the plot. If it is really necessary, there are many ways. For example, the yang chakra obtained by Goldfinger can be used to directly trigger the universe. There is no need to ask Xiangling to obtain the cells as mentioned in it.) The whole process has changed directly. The younger sister and Zhuma have a lesbian relationship. It is useless. The protagonist and Xiangling end up together. I can see that the author has constantly patched it, but this plot is really too fragmented. Does it mean that the child born from the union with Xiangling will be very high? Then why did the protagonist in the previous film choose Bai, and there was no mention of being a child. Is it just to make a distinction? What about my sister and Zhu Ma? There is no drama left? Also, for the first three generations, there was absolutely no need for this guy to write so many scenes. I wasn't the only one to bring this up. Someone else mentioned that part of the plot when you were writing it. The whole feeling of pleasure was diluted after being stretched for too long. It was obviously very comfortable when I controlled the Uchiha clan before, but why did I just talk about it when the Hokage came to power? This part can be used as a small explosive point. If you want to expand, you can also write about stabilizing the morale of the army after taking over as Hokage, and just killing everywhere. The protagonist can be completely distinguished from the weak and conservative third generation directly. It doesn't matter how many miscellaneous fish die, it does not affect the plot. So much so that when I killed the Sarutobi clan later, I didn't feel particularly happy, and the same was true for Danzo who was offline. The only part that felt slightly better was when he was recruited to fight with dogs and exposed the scandal. Finally, a message to the author: As a free prostitute, I probably shouldn't say so much, but this book is really a pity. I also finished reading the author's last book. The previous book had a similar problem, but it wasn't as severe as this one. The golden finger in this book is originally very direct and refreshing. It is actually very popular in Tomato. It can reasonably create a bond with the plot characters and improve the strength simply and directly. It's a pity that the author has given up too much for the sake of length, or added too many restrictions. Maybe this is what you want, or maybe your writing skills are insufficient. But the book is still a good book, thank you

2 火 Naruto: Sukuna's Jinchūriki, Uchiha at Your Service The Black Scarecrow448k WordsCompleted 46kReads9.2Score3.7kShelves

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Ah! It's really great, and it's the best among all the Naruto movies I've seen on Tomato. My rating is overwhelming!

13 忍 I Can't Help but Want to Be Hokage, Bah! Little Brother Gao Ming437k WordsCompleted 1.2kReads6.0Score102Shelves

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Awesome Sharingan

14 魔 In the World of Demon Spirits, My Spirit Companion Is the Ninja Jiraiya Mountains and Seas, Countless WatersEastern Fantasy779k WordsOngoing 22Reads—Score—Shelves

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The most powerful Jiraiya