
Naruto: Starting with Three Tomoe, Raising Kushina
火影:开局三勾玉,养成玖辛奈
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- From the Start, a Three-Tomoe Succubus Raising Kushina开局三勾玉魅魔,养成玖辛奈Alternate title on Fanqie
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It's really good-looking. For me personally, it can be said to be the best-looking Naruto fanfic on Tomato. The logic is not confusing, the description of the battle scenes is also good, and the characters are more in line with the original work, but the update is a bit slow.
The relationship with Kushina is well written and beautiful (。・ω・。)ノ♡
Please give me a five-star review with more than five words from the readers who read this book! Come and save these humble children!! A free novel, I don't dare to ask for gifts, but asking for a five-star review is not too much, right? Family members, please help!!!
Not bad. I just found out that it is the same author as that book Sheng Lan. I feel that my writing skills have improved a lot. I was persuaded to quit the previous book five or six times at the beginning. I originally wanted to persist because I really liked the heroine, but unfortunately I couldn't persist. This book feels much better 👍
So far, I have read the T0 level in the fandom. The logic is clear, the timing is relatively smooth, and it is not boring. Overall, it is still very good. I am looking forward to the ability of Kaleidoscope in the future. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I haven't read much, I just started reading. Well, I have an idea about the main character's kaleidoscope. The author can adopt it. If I haven't figured out what kaleidoscope to use yet, can I write a kamui? There are also methods. During the third ninja war, wasn't Rin kidnapped? You can transplant your own eyes to Obito during this period of time, which is equivalent to raising a gu, and let Obito open a kaleidoscope for you. As for the eternal kaleidoscope, I also have the idea to find the eyes of the protagonist's father, the same way, find an Uchiha to use a great illusion to make him experience despair, and then start the kaleidoscope transplantation, so that he can get the eternal one. You know, Kamui's completed body Susanoo's target is the Six Paths, and even in the later stage, the ability can be regarded as quite incomprehensible. Here is the official introduction of Kamui. The hollow in the heart constitutes the ability to blur, the invulnerable defense, the ability to escape from the world, and the ability to gain space. "Book of Formation" evaluation (right eye): "Beyond cause and effect and the horizon, the eyes in the divine realm!"[1] The nothingness in the left eye forms an undefendable attack power. Comments from "The Book of Masters" (Left Eye): "The other dimension in the vision, the extremely confusing space pupil technique! This is Kamui! The strongest bug in Naruto!
This novel is really one of the most interesting Naruto fanfics I have ever read. Both the plot and the ideas are very good. The first seven days are a bit rough in the middle, to put it bluntly, but the ending should be the kind of thing where you are finally resurrected and then continue to return to the state similar to the early stage. This is the best ending in my opinion.
Such a good-looking novel, why is no one reading it? With such a low rating, I read it in one sitting. The author should update it soon. I can't wait any longer. The characters are portrayed very well. But the power enhancement is too abrupt. It would be perfect if it could be slowed down a bit.
In fact, it's quite good. Except for the plot of Awakening Mangekyo, which is a bit ridiculous, everything else is pretty good. I think we can add or fill in some Otsutsuki character plots from Boruto in the future. This will make it more complete and the reading interest will be higher 👍 👍