Naruto: The Double Agent Starting with Kushina Uzumaki

I imagined an ending where the Kyuubi was plundered, and then Kushina was killed by people from Konoha. The protagonist jumped directly from the second magatama to the Mangekyo Sharingan, opened his own Sharingan Eye Technique, and then made the world feel the pain, creating a world with only Kushina [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is very nice, but can we have a few more harems? I personally prefer the harem [laughs evilly]

Gaga is good to watch, the plot moves quickly, the development is high-quality, and there are emotional lines. The only shortcoming is the timeline, but whether it is fan fiction or not, everyone has this problem, so don't use the normal timeline when watching it.

If you keep writing at this quality, it will be a good-looking fanfic. I hope you won't have any wood escape or reincarnation eyes in the future. You can get a Thousand Hands Physique to increase chakra, but don't turn on the plug-in too much, otherwise it will be meaningless. You can open a kaleidoscope and exchange it for the Eternal Eye through the system. It's good. After awakening the Mangekyo and having so many skills, you are already a Kage-level expert. After all, you have killed jounin randomly. How can you be an elite jounin? This wave will deduct big points.

I hope it's a good one with a single female protagonist, good luck to the author!

Let's put it this way, the author should not abandon the book midway again. Such good content is worth reading. Anyway, it suits my taste [learned] [like] [like] [like] [like] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's okay, but the protagonist insists on finding other Jinchuuriki and I don't understand why. Originally, the heroine was not well-received by the villagers, and she didn't seem to have any other friends. The fact that she became a Jinchuriki and was not well-received by the villagers got rid of it. As for being careful about the Nine-Tails uprising, that's not the case later. With the Myriad Eyes opened, I am qualified to negotiate with the Kyuubi, and it is not just about fooling the Kyuubi through understanding the future. As for the system behind it, I'm afraid it can also increase the heroine's combat effectiveness. Having a Kyuubi basically only has advantages and no disadvantages.

The protagonist seems to be an anti-hero, and there is nothing toxic so far, except for the inaccurate timeline of some events, but the comic itself is not that rigorous, so fans don't have to force it.

It's good so far. I suggest that the descriptions of expressions during fights and dialogues be richer. I think the character portrayal can be improved. After reading more ⑦ points, I feel that the characterization of this book is a little better. I think it is the ⑦ point [face covering] and there are too many random intrusions, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, I haven't seen this stuff, but I have seen related pictures. You can also create your own ninjutsu in the later period. Don't limit yourself to anime skills. So far, in general, it is safer to give four stars. But in Tomato, it is a rare good book. I don't have to read it now. After reading it, go and read something else. Some of the poisonous points can't be detected without reading carefully, but you can also taste them. Anyone who doesn't mind too much can give it a try. Demon Slayer and Pirates have entered it randomly, so I want to give it up. I feel that there are more intrusions later, too little.

I think it's very interesting. The protagonist has some tricks but not too much, and he actively shows his value for the sake of his wife. He doesn't hide it like other stories and makes me feel frustrated. There are no bugs in the logic, and the plot is quite interesting. At least it is different from other high-scoring Naruto stories so that I won't get tired of reading it. I don't understand why the score is so low. I hope the author can keep writing [please update]