The first one is very nice and the author writes it very well. The second one is too little. I am also waiting for the update. If you like Xiaoxin, you can read the third one. What can I say about the fourth one? It is still readable, but everyone has different tastes.
Some brothers have some [mygo] + [GBC] [Lonely Rock] A daily genre, the gravity of a lifetime has begun. The male protagonist will join three bands, pressure each other, and compete for the male protagonist's right to belong! At the same time, there is also a love story! If you like music, please don't miss these three works!!! 1
As a comprehensive comic theme, with a girl band as its core, the description of this book can be regarded as unique to Tomato. - First of all, in terms of the basic story rhythm, it does not focus on the background setting and protagonist setting at the beginning (there is no need to rush in at the beginning), but unfolds through the narrative, which is far beyond the level of Tomato. When a large number of characters appear, authors generally fail to grasp the rhythm. As a result, key characters do not appear in more than ten or even dozens of chapters in order to introduce a certain plot and character. Here the author often uses montage techniques to create parallel narratives, which can be said to be an organic integration of different plots. - Furthermore, the comprehensive elements of the comic can be said to be full. With mygo and lonely rock as the core, it integrates light sounds and five equal parts, making the latter appear as a foil without overpowering the main theme. An example of plot advancement is the element of body exchange. At least in terms of perception, it is a tool for advancing the main line rather than the center of the narrative. - So, this kind of stitching of multiple elements, yet pure and natural, has full comedic novelty effect without causing drama and reducing the reading experience. For example, the connection between a magical girl and the band, using music to become a magical girl, is a stroke of genius. It's not like some variety comics that forcefully combine horror and romantic comedy, resulting in a nondescript situation. - As for the character creation of Xiangzi, Mu, and Sushi, there is no OCC, and they can even be said to be the most soulful among recent fandoms. - The writing style is also concise, bright and flowing. Hibiscus comes out of clear water, and the carvings are naturally removed. Generally speaking, Internet writers tend to go to extremes, whether they are childish or even vulgar, or they just pile up rhetoric and fill their eyes with caricatures. Some of the texts don't mention a single sentence about the background, and some of them just add a few attributives to a character's appearance, which is too long to make a sentence. The writing style here is very comfortable, and some of the descriptions of the sun hitting people are even amazing. It may not be enough to illustrate the background of the entire Tokyo city that "gathers youth, dreams and sweat", but it is enough in the online article. - Let's talk about the shortcomings. The biggest problem is the plot rhythm. Because there are so many characters, some core characters do not appear in several or even more than a dozen chapters (so far, only once or twice). Still, it's far better than a studio set. In the recent plot, more than a dozen characters appeared at the same time, but they used a very classic montage to narrate the plots of different groups in parallel, and finally returned to the main line. In the author's words, it can be grasped. -Furthermore, the protagonist's image is a bit flat. Because the protagonist is used to connect characters from different dramas, there is a suspicion that the protagonist will run back and forth and act as a "yellow camera" (this is an exaggeration). The look and feel is more like the protagonist being pushed along by the plot, with no subjective initiative reflected. - There are also some plot logic (for example, the protagonist in the first chapter should contact the body-swapped Xiangzi from the beginning), etc. I won't go into details. - Of course, these shortcomings do not hide the good points. The most important thing about comprehensive comics is that the characters are well portrayed, which is the selling point of the fandom. Moreover, these requirements in terms of character plot and writing style are very demanding among online novel writers. - The current performance of this book does not seem to be very good, perhaps because of its poor quality. Spring and snow (exaggeration), it is better to directly enjoy the sensory stimulation. I hope the author will not become a eunuch because of this. So it's not yet a five-star rating in my mind, but for encouragement, I give it a five-star rating. - The summary is that the comic is comprehensive enough, the writing is good enough, the plot is new enough, there are enough jokes, and the laughs are enough. -
Both of these books are daily comics, but they both have some supernatural elements. Other than that, the updates are relatively stable, and the first book has a lot of words. The second book is relatively slow-paced, but contains the content of Fulian's death.
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