Variety Comics: What Should I Do If All the Beautiful Girls Are Girl-Oriented?

The author's writing is okay. The male protagonist's life experience determines that he should be a character who longs for family companionship and will be very cautious about relationships. Most of the current variety comics are just stallion stories without thinking, and the emotional scenes are slightly unsatisfactory. If the author wants to improve his writing skills in light novels If you are not interested, you can go and watch "The Lost Dog Heroine" which was very popular last year. The emotions in it are just right, and the heroine's previous character is also very distinctive. If you watch it a few times, you will have many different feelings. You can also read more of the old series. Just some small suggestions. I hope I can keep writing.

OK, Shennong is here. So far, there are no big problems, but the plot is too rushed. Every time the male protagonist goes out, he will encounter one thing, which is too frequent. Other than that, it is fine. You can eat it with confidence.

It's quite satisfactory, a very classic system text, and also a very classic sister, Xia Laofei, the big matryoshka doll of the girl team, a meal replacement when you are bored, it is terrible, definitely not good, if I want to say bad, it is not that bad.

The title of the book could be called: The painful love story of youth between me, a lonely and indifferent but succubus, and troubled girls. The setting of a classic light novel, the male protagonist is indifferent but full of charm, and the female protagonists each have their own mental illness. Awkward, but the writing is good. Mei Yige, the poet, can't watch it without being mentally ill. Twisted into maggots for me.

The writing is above the passing mark, not amazing but not bad, and the plot so far is chapter 197 and not too toxic. It is systematic and has strong system guidance. Many times the male protagonist's actions are just to complete the task, which will add a little utilitarianism to the male protagonist's behavior, but the male protagonist does not know that the original plot slightly makes up for this. It has general versatility, strong countermeasures, and the overall quality is very large. It is suitable for viewers who have watched two of the dramas or more. Another problem is to correct Dad Xiang and the flute and solve the event dependency system. Sometimes the male protagonist only plays the role of taking out the system props and using them.

It's very interesting, but it's a bit abrupt in many places. The protagonist seems to be led by the system, but I feel that it's because of the nature of the protagonist that he does the system's tasks, or maybe he just doesn't want to be punished [laughter]

The updates are quite diligent, but the narrative unfolds in multiple lines, and there are basically few stories that are actually told, although the word count itself is not at that stage yet. Putting aside the excessive personal settings of OOC, the emotional entanglement is very consistent with the protagonist's setting. Generally speaking, it is watchable. I hope it will not be taken down. Unfortunately, he died.

To be honest, I first read that novel because of an accident. At that time, I saw that it was a variety comic type, and I also saw Rebirth (what I thought I saw). I had never seen this type of novel before, so I clicked in and took a look. I read more than 20 chapters at that time, but I didn't notice anything. It means rebirth, I thought this author is too good at hiding, and the foreshadowing is a bit deep. Then I accidentally read the title again and realized that I had read it wrong. But it is a blessing in disguise. The writing style is very similar to that of a light novel, and the emotional interaction between him and the girl It's okay to move, it's not a brainless stallion story. To be honest, I like the gender of the protagonist very much. It's just that there are a few interactions with my sister that are not reviewed and it's a bit uncomfortable. The others are actually pretty good. To be honest, I really like the character Waka Ye Mu. I haven't watched his series, but his looks are very good and he has that kind of personality. In fact, I also like Su Shi's appearance. But his personality may be a bit bad at first, so I don't like it as much as Xiao Mu. In the end, I hope the author will do more. It's very interesting. Come on, author! The author is also very good at putting pictures at the end of each chapter. I love reading them!

It's very interesting. I'd like to give you some suggestions. In fact, the cold-faced and expressionless character of the male protagonist is very unpleasant. I don't really like this kind of character. I hope that the female protagonist can redeem the male protagonist in the future and make his personality change a little brighter. I have a question, you wrote the plot between the male protagonist and Qiong which was really good, but what about the other girls? According to the character of the male protagonist, it should be impossible to accept it, so why do you write more female protagonists? Aren't you just lying? Unless other girls can also have an experience with the male protagonist, they can be together, otherwise it will be a bit ruined. Anyway, the relationship between Qiong and the male protagonist, you are really invincible.

This is the kind of mouth I want [crazy] [laughing] The author's writing style is very good, and the description of the emotional line is also more delicate. The plot mainly revolves around the protagonist, surrounded by beautiful girls with gravity, very similar to Lu Qing's book, which is also a band, of course this one It's even more awesome. I always feel that the life experience of the protagonist is a misfortune [face covering], and the plot is all driven by the system, as well as the favorability level. There are quite a lot of beautiful girls, and there should be more in the future. Generally speaking, it is a very good category among comprehensive comics. Logically speaking, there should not be so few people.

Personally, I think it is a very good novel among Tomato novels. I have read this book many times in the recommendation list but never read it because I read Tomato just to relax and I don't like to read complicated or depressing plots. The title of the book made me think it was a girl-oriented one. I almost decided to return it after reading it with a low score. The author has a good grasp of the pacing. The protagonist's character is also very stable, cold and sensible, but like a human being (I don't know if I can get it). It is quite comfortable to read. I hope the author will keep updating. I saw 140. I would like to give you a suggestion not to have supernatural things. Although the system is here, I personally hope that the system can be used as a propulsion prop like before.

The writing is better in Tomato, and the indigenous protagonist is a plus, but the system is too guiding. Although the subjectivity of the protagonist is sometimes emphasized, it still gives people the feeling of being led by the nose.

The writing style is okay, but there is always a way of showing off the writing style very deliberately, which makes the overall look a bit artificial. The emotional drama is quite good, much better than those inexplicable fan fiction, but the inner description of some characters is too numb. Just for the character Qiong, is this a bit of gravity? I feel like I'm about to be crushed to death. I think I can reduce some unnecessary descriptions and make the writing more concise.

There is no obvious OOC, and the emotional line is handled well. Some people think that the latest chapters are too literary, but in fact they are not (maybe a little bit, but I don't have much problem reading it). I have read a book before, almost every chapter is full of various figures of speech and metaphors. After reading a few chapters, I didn't understand it. This kind of book is too literary for young people. There are also some people whose book reviews are baffling to me, giving me the feeling that we are not reading the same book.

It's good-looking, it has the flavor of a fan novel, and it's very to my liking. I really like this kind of calm male protagonist, and the characters are relatively close to each other. In my personal opinion, it should be as good as those 89-rated fanfics. Come on, author✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

A very classic early Asasi male protagonist. The male protagonist is systematic but does not know the plot. This may dissuade some readers. But the author was able to write this book using the already rotten comic structure system in the early days, and the writing and plot are above the pass line, which is pretty good. Those who like to read fast-paced comics may not like it, but if you like to read daily dramas, this book is acceptable.

The writing style is very good, the emotions are very delicate, and the character descriptions are very three-dimensional. It makes me feel that the characters are all flesh-and-blood characters, and the characters' personalities are also very consistent with the original work. Judging from the performance after reading 100 chapters, it can be regarded as a score of more than 9.6 In the comprehensive Manchu novel. Although I don't know why the score is average, I will still support the author (>‿◠)✌️

Although the protagonist can be sweet sometimes, I just like to watch something sweet. The author's writing is very good, don't be disturbed [Send heart] The second chapter is not the fault of the protagonist, but I am not jealous [face covering]

It's so gravity-defying that I felt a little depressed watching it, but I shouldn't say that the character of the protagonist is really good. ... I feel like the protagonist is also a god.

It's pretty good, and the emotional descriptions are pretty good. I don't see any problems so far. Overall, it's watchable. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

The emotional description is delicate, and the overall plot design is interesting. I am curious about the development of the story next. Although it has not escaped the shackles of traditional fan fiction, it is already a rare and excellent fan fiction for Tomato. Five star support.

It's pretty good, but I don't know how to praise it [facepalm] Anyway, it's an interesting daily love novel even if you haven't read these episodes (although I have read them all). The author has illustrated all the important female characters with pictures, and they are very positive. This is a big boast [laughs]

It's good to watch and I love watching it. The first part mainly tells the story of He Qiong, and then intersperses with other anime heroines. The plot is natural and smooth and not chaotic. The plot of Mygo is also a bit morbid love. Personally, I prefer it if I don't have love. The protagonist has self-awareness, will refuse when the task is not good🙅🏻‍♀️, has succubus attributes, and has an indifferent personality. It's acceptable to eat meat later, but don't deliberately slow down your progress.

According to the variety comics, it can be given nine stars. The poor one star is because the background of the male protagonist is a bit too sensational, but it can also be said to be a daily comic book. The emotional details are well described, but it is a little laggy.

The writing is okay. Although it is a bit artificial, it is not too harmful. I can barely read it.

The writing is very delicate and the descriptions are vivid. The atmosphere is relaxed and everyday. It can be seen that the author is a very gentle person at heart. The plot design is also top-notch. Although it incorporates a lot of anime into it, it doesn't look cluttered, and none of the characters are OOC. I personally hope that the author can control the scope of the anime a little bit. If there are more female protagonists, it will inevitably marginalize some characters and make them look callous🙄. Full marks overall. Highly recommended! ! ! Treasure article! ! !

It's a very good book, you can read it.

Strong push, strong push, strong push, must be forced! Come on, the author [blowing kiss]

This book is considered to be the best comprehensive comic fanfic I have found on the Tomato platform in recent days. The writing style and narrative are better than most authors. The score is a bit low. I think the normal should be above 8.5, At least better than the fat house I read before. So far, there are no big flaws. I am still fixing the pitfalls. I will continue to update. Cheers, author [Like]

It took me a while to read it slowly🥰🥰. I personally think it's okay. Maybe it felt a little weird or depressing when I first started watching it, and I had the urge to stop watching it several times, but later on, some of the protagonist's characters and the storyline attracted me again. I really like the plot of the band in it, I think it's well written. Big cheers for the author, five stars [love][love][love][love][love]