Comprehensive Manga: the Beautiful Life of Nohara Shinnosuke

Some places are very OOC, especially in the two plots of the sword competition and the rescue of Nishimiya Glass. It would be okay if I wasn't a die-hard Crayon Shin-chan fan, but not only am I, I've read six or seven Crayon Shin-chan fanfics, and I can tell that the author's writing is not as good as other Crayon Shin-chan fanfics. Below are some of my thoughts and ideas, the author can take a look. Swordsmanship test: According to my imagination, when the nine-year-old man with a sword talks about Xiaoxin's parents, Xiaoxin will say that although Meiya has successfully evolved from a three-layer fat old witch to a fifth-layer fat old witch and often uses the Iron Fist on me, she is still a very good person. Okay mom; although dad's feet are smelly... (I can't write it out a bit, just understand what I mean) Then the guy with a knife from Jiu Neng kept clamoring to compete with Xiaoxin. Xiaoxin shook his head helplessly and said, I really can't do anything to you, and then competed with him. Later, he defeated him with a few random moves in the competition. After that, Xiaoxin said that some samurai swords were not used to bully the weak, which made him feel ashamed. Finally, I told Hui that I was so hungry, let's go back to eat, and then pulled Hui and left coolly. Don't ask Xiaoxin to punish him personally when writing the punishment "Nine Can Bring a Knife". Just write a personal punishment for him. Saving Nishimiya Glass: It should be written that Xiaoxin accidentally bumped into these three people bullying Nishimiya Glass. Xiaoxin walked over and asked, what are you doing, is there anything fun? Then they wanted Xiaoxin to leave, and they also wanted to beat Xiaoxin, but in the end they didn't even touch the corner of Xiaoxin's clothes. Then Xiaoxin said with a puzzled look, are you bullying her? Then the three people were startled and frightened, and ran away. Later, when I rescued Nishimiya Glass, I asked her if she could go home, and then she shook her head. Xiaoxin said helplessly that there is really nothing you can do, and then took her home. Then it was impossible for Xiaoxin to take the initiative to ask Xiaoai for help. Xiaoai should have arranged for someone to tell her what Xiaoxin did every day, and then after Xiaoai knew about it, she arranged for them. Comparison: Not with those earlier Crayon Shin-chan fanfics, but with the recently discontinued manga: I, Nohara Shinnosuke, Will Not Get Knife. That book can be said to be definitely qualified to compete for the top spot among the Crayon Shin-chan fanfics I have read, but unfortunately it was discontinued. The writing style of that book is very good. It can be said that in the early stage, there were some shortcomings that were too prominent in certain aspects of Xiaoxin and too little in other aspects. In the later stage, there are basically no shortcomings. It is a pity that it was discontinued. The author can learn from it. The shortcoming of this book is that the writing is not very good, and some parts of Xiaoxin's character expression are too deliberate, and some parts are too OOC. Come on, author. Summary: Shin-chan in this novel gave me a sense of déjà vu as an ordinary person bound to a role-playing system, and the role-playing system allowed him to play Crayon Shin-chan. And has the author read too many novels about being decisive and pretentious? There are many references to this kind of novel. I can only say that the author should work hard. This novel still has many shortcomings. My lowest expectation for this novel is that it will not be discontinued. Sometimes I really feel that the authors who write Crayon Shin-chan fanfiction are all written by the same person, and every time they write it, it ends shortly after the release of Little Love.

Well, it's very well written. I hope you won't cut it off easily in the future. Even if you cut it off, I'd like to say something about it, because Xiaoxin's novels that I follow are very good and I've cut them off many times. I hope you won't cut them off easily. Then keep working hard. If you get stuck later, you should discuss it with readers more, so that you can reduce your stuckness.

Wow, the author's writing is really good. Although it is still a bit green, I really like this. Speaking of which, I am not capable enough, so I can only give a like for one dollar first, but don't think it's too little.

Hahaha, I always feel that Ai is Crayon Shin-chan's version of Precious The cyber female ghost knew it was Xiao Ai, but those who didn't knew thought it was Precious who had fallen in love with Xiao Ai. I laughed so hard, it's not ky, I really feel like it

I hope the arc of the manga won't be too big, otherwise like other authors, the updates will be cut off, and there will be no good-looking Xiaoxin books [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Come on, come on, come on

Overall it's quite interesting, but sometimes the characters' personalities are a bit OOC

It's okay. The new articles I read before have been discontinued. I hope the author will not discontinue them.

Great, come on author [like]

Add supernatural events

Come on, author, come on [blowing kiss]

Very well written, keep up the good work

The writing style needs to be improved, but the plot is pretty good. Good work, author.

It's good, but it's a pity that I discovered it too late. Otherwise, I could have rewarded the author to write more chapters. I really can't find any good Crayon Shin-chan fans [crying]

Where is Nanako Ohara? Our Xiaoxin's favorite woman.

It's very well written and quite heartwarming but very touching. I hope it won't stop updating and keep going. Come on author^ω^ Mr. Shinnosuke is a very considerate but not frank person! O(^▽^)o

Try to write as little as possible about things that are not the main plot. I want to see the female protagonist of the Dreamland theatrical version appear [Chigua]

Come on, I quite like it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

So sleepy, so sleepy, so sleepy

It's very good, but I don't know if it will be aggravated in the live version.

It's still not easy to be a fan of Crayon Shin-chan. Students who don't have money can only support it with five stars.

The writing is quite good, I just want to see how the battle situation will change when Nanazi appears [shy]

You can come and watch Xiaoxin's childhood, starting from the first episode [shy][shy][shy][shy]

Not bad, very nice. I just feel that the author is a little slow in updating, please update more, and hurry up.

Give the author some encouragement: the author's writing is really good, keep up the hard work

Very good, a great book, I just wanted to ask. Will there be any lemons?

It's so beautiful, you must keep updating [crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's good to watch. Come on, the author. The author doesn't write according to the plot. It's good to add the original plot to avoid the blandness of writing according to the plot.