Comprehensive Comic: 10 Charm Points at the Beginning

So far it's okay, I'm still looking forward to the day in Shura Field Kaguya's character design is over. The character design of the protagonist is,,, well,, very warm and masculine, very Asashi [Like]

It's okay, mainly because the author doesn't have a good control over the characters. Sometimes he flirts with girls and sometimes acts like Xiao Chunan, and some of his behaviors are inexplicable. But overall it's pretty good. I'll wait and see again and come back to change the rating later if I can [Blow a kiss]

What an Assasi [laughs awkwardly] The performance is a classic Asasi dog-licking. Why is he so afraid of women? If he is the protagonist, he will say: I have no choice but to open a harem. I am forced to have no choice [laughter]

Currently, she is my most satisfying lover. Related fanfics (the heroine is so cute) In fact, there is no need for mygo to be a substitute. The keyboard is the most suitable (the speed of learning shocked Xiangzi). Adding some guitar can teach Ai Yin. Maybe you can try the plot of giving up the position of the guitar and switching to the keyboard because of the love of Yin?

It is a comprehensive harem story with great potential. The male protagonist is a typical Japanese Asashi succubus, but he is not a coward at all when it comes to sex. He is unexpectedly bold and acts like an open relationship after winning the pink hair. It is not a worldview with more women than men. This kind of character can only depend on how the author handles the harem. Currently, the heroines have appeared in three works, with Band the most, Lovers second, and Kaguya last. At present, the male protagonist seems to be a part of the story. I don't know how to deal with a bunch of female protagonists and super long plot lines. One band line is enough to write for half a day. I hope the author will think carefully about this aspect to avoid the situation where the female protagonist is found out later.

There are not many chapters at the moment, but the advantages and disadvantages are obvious. I'll say whatever I remember. Advantages: 1. The subject matter is good. A good subject matter is ahead of the game. 2. The rhythm is steady and the general direction is pushing the main line. There is no hard-drawn emotional line Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist's personality is somewhat fragmented. He could be shameless in one chapter, but suddenly becomes innocent and shy in the next chapter. 2 The author probably has not saved the manuscript. Although he will listen to the opinions in the comment area, it is easy to get stuck. A bit of advice, don't add new anime. It's enough to finish the current few characters. If there are too many people, the emotional line will definitely collapse into a mess.

Basically, it's similar to other Mygo fans, the male protagonist Asasi, and the kind who was attacked by Li hope when we just met, but the male protagonist still doesn't want to go back.

This is the first fanfic I've seen about Lovers. It's pretty well written, but I don't know if the heroine has Haruna. The plot arrangement is not good, the lovers are not good enough and the characters basically don't appear.

To be honest, it can be compared to the early stage of Xia Qiu, but Kaguya was too frustrated.

I have read Chapter 55 and haven't read the rest yet. For now, the plot behind it can be about chasing my husband in the crematorium. Otherwise, I won't be able to handle everything from Shinomiya Kaguya to Nagasaki Motoyo. Or am I the only one who feels uncomfortable with their plot? [Rolls eyes]

How to say it? There is no doubt that the quality of this book is there, but the author's duality of gods and ghosts is a little bit poisonous, but it generally won't affect the perception, right? I personally like to read slow and long-paced books. The characteristic of this book is that it is too fast and the emotional progress is too fast. The original character design may be a bit OOC. For example, after a few times, Deng becomes a person who can take the initiative [face covering]

Look, still the succubus, still the Asasi

The author wrote about my daily life without my permission😎 (May I ask if the author will accept Xiao Mu's head? I'm a cucumber addict)

Don't say too much, don't nag too little, just two words – beautiful! The front is really nice, but I don't know what's going on behind. Maybe it's too rushed. The character is a bit stretched, and it's not cool enough. I hope it can be adjusted. Come on.

The title and cover are deceptive. In fact, the content of Lovers' Bad Cards is much less than that of Mygo Hen Cards, but I personally have no interest in them. For the sake of my lover's writing being pretty good, I'll give it four stars to encourage it.

I thought the interaction between md, Xiangzi Lantern and Gan Zhi was very interesting. After all, I didn't plan to watch the anime. I relied on short videos to understand it. Even though I didn't get used to it when I met Shinomiya for the first time, I didn't watch it either. It should be improved in the future, full of expectations

Is the author stuck? Is it difficult to write the ending of Shura Field?

It's okay, above average, no problem at the moment

Hmm... I think it would be much better to change the name. When I read the band article Hehe, I just love watching it (♡>𖥦<)/♥ It's over, it's getting better and better

The story is very well written. Most of the problems will be solved by Jigou Tuan directly taking down Ruan Nuo Xiangzi. The idea is good, but there will be less content about lovers who are not good enough. I hope the author can adjust the proportion of content (I just finished watching OVA and I really want to watch Danfenmao [crying])

It's very well-written. At least it can write the plot clearly and clearly. It's much better than other non-fiction articles that just write randomly. The writing style is also pretty good [Chigua]

The author has done what 90% of authors cannot do. He has controlled all aspects to be qualified. Fully qualified, 90% of the works can be eliminated. In addition, the writing is very enjoyable and very good.

It's good to read. Come on, author [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

For me, it suits my taste very well.

It's nice to read, but there are too many written about bands. Wouldn't it be better to write more about lovers?

It's a good comprehensive manga and Japanese fanfic. The character's personality is well grasped. It's worth reading.

I found a good book, I hope the author will continue to read [laughs]

How to say it? Mygo is a bit OOC, but the quantity is large and the control is full. I am not good at being a lover but I also cherish too few people. Overall, it is still watchable.

I hope the novel can be updated at a slower pace, with hundreds more chapters, so that the protagonist can include all the beautiful characters, so that the plot can be richer and more enjoyable! I hope the author can slow down his writing pace, update a few hundred more chapters, and include all the beautiful characters in the article into the protagonist's harem. In this way, I will be super satisfied as a follower of the article!

The band is integrated very well, and the plot is not too abrupt. It is very interesting.