The Forgotten Immortal

I have read Chapter 26 so far. From the perspective of a young old bookworm, there is nothing wrong with the writing. It is obvious that the author is also considering some rationality of the incident before writing. Whether it is slow or fast, readers who like writing will definitely be able to read it. However, the author chose this subject matter. , Generally readers like to read the plot and don't consider the writing 🤦 However, since it has already opened up more than a hundred chapters, I hope the author can continue to work hard. The writing is okay, good writing, but it just depends on whether the writing will inexplicably lead to a big hole that cannot be filled in later and lead to ED 🤦

I really like this kind of writing that is full of details and polish. Compared with some mainstream online writings that convey a scene in a few sentences, I am more willing to savor the reality brought by the author's words, as if the world he writes about really exists. The pace is slow, but it never makes unnecessary repetitions or redundancies, but unfolds the plot according to a very logical narrative rhythm. It's been a long time since I've seen an article that made me slow down and read like this. I support the author.

Support the first hand and hope the author will update soon. 🍉 🍉 🍉

Full marks, slow heat is good, slow heat is good, the combat power should not collapse, the plot should not be bad, it has written a real different world

The back is actually pretty good. The previous part mainly describes survival and brings out the world view.

Slow heating is too slow 🤦

The details are polished, the characters are three-dimensional, and the emotions are just right to make people even smile. I haven't read this kind of novel in a long time. It's really good. Come on, author.

The rhythm is tight, the details are exquisite, the writing is elegant, and the look and feel is good.

A very realistic early stage survival in the wilderness of another world

The plot structure is reasonable