Keeping a Silly Girl by My Side

I finished it in one go. It is a very good novel, especially the introduction of the concept of the death ring. It is very interesting. However, because the process of the death cage is too simple, and the male protagonist recognizes the eldest brother for the first time, it is a bit superficial, but it is understandable. Jing Tomato's book won't be interesting if it's not fast-paced. The several confrontations and life-and-death situations are pretty good, and the emotional scenes are above the passing mark. Overall, it's a good novel. I still hope the author can finish it [Please update][Please update][Please update]

The writing is quite good, especially the idea of ​​[Death Circle], which is eye-catching. The writing style is something I haven't seen for a long time. It's a bit like a dark fairy tale, and there's nothing wrong with it. A good Western fantasy article, you can see that this thing is my own idea, not a reskin.

The writing is very good, the emotional line is not a literary one, and the world view is not bad, but I can write more about the introduction of the world view in the early stage, so please update it [laughs]

Not bad. The basic setting of "Death Cage" is relatively unique in Tomato, which will give people a bit of freshness, without the feeling of changing the soup without changing the medicine. When I first read the title, I thought it was a simple romance novel. After reading it, I realized that there are many battle scenes. I felt that the title did not show all the highlights, and it would easily miss the audience. The settings of several female protagonists are all okay, and 4 of them have appeared so far, including a mentally retarded and clingy girl who can't really take care of herself due to childhood trauma, a long-awaited gentle, dignified and bold candidate for love, a gloomy sister who was bullied and bullied in an orphanage due to facial burns, and a cold senior who is strong and introverted. However, judging from the introduction, it is estimated that there are other female protagonists who have not appeared. However, if Ms. Ying Rong is the heroine, I feel that the emotional line is not very clear. She is originally in a high-spirited style, but the description of her psychological activities and details are a bit too little, which makes people feel a bit abrupt. Specifically, the reason for having feelings for the male protagonist is not sufficient. I suggest adding more later. By the way, although I don't know why some people are angry about this, I still mention that there is more than one time traveler in this book. The current time traveler is clearly not only the protagonist, but also an old-time god of death who is more of a "Yao Lao". In view of the fact that there is no "system" for the time traveler in this book, Plug-ins do not rely on advanced knowledge to show off their knowledge and be superior to others, so there is not much difference between time-travelers and locals. If you really meet a time-traveler, you will be like a fellow countryman meeting a fellow countryman. Everyone has their own special abilities, and they all rely on their abilities in terms of love and combat, so it doesn't feel like anything.

There are five female protagonists. After reading the latest chapter, we can probably confirm that they are Yueyue, Selina, Ying Rong, Gray Ann, and Alice. Each has its own merits and the world view is very novel. I hope it can be completed normally. There are a few people watching it now, because the protagonist does not have much time to grow up. I fought with a high position from the beginning. The suppression was a bit harsh. I thought it was a normal upgrade, but I didn't expect it to be a leapfrog. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit abusive and no one can beat it.

The relationship and the portrayal of the female protagonists are really good. There are no outstanding points in the female protagonist. I just can't stop abusing the protagonist😅 He is always beaten to pieces. The male protagonist should be strengthened. He needs some positive feedback.

Rarely beautiful and interesting. I don't understand why it's not tepid. I hope I can continue writing it. I really like it.

It's pretty good, but I only died 4 times and used it 3 times at once. Isn't it going to be very long? I feel like the world view is quite big.

Very good, it seems that the author is also a lolita control [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][adoration][adoration]