Exiled from the Start: Our Love Is Pure!

It's a good product, not too censorious and quite sweet, but the combat power is a bit sloppy and the fighting is a bit uninteresting. There are also shortcomings. The devil's teaching bug is super contagious and grants extraordinary power. It is invincible, which is a bit beyond the standard. In addition, I thought Ziyun would be one of the harem. After all, her partner, the hunter, basically didn't help her. Except for giving Ziyun a meal when they met, Ziyun basically helped him (after all, he was weaker than Ziyun at the beginning). This kid is really lucky. It's a pity that she is still with the hunter. I feel that the author is a woman, and the emotional delicacy is the great advantage of this article. However, it can be seen that the author is deliberately controlling the number of harems. This is not satisfying enough. If there are more, it can be solved by a group. The protagonist should also strengthen this aspect. Men cannot say no. Also, too little is not enough to read. Please add more authors. When a certain chapter is reached, the scores and profits will increase as the number of readers increases. Keep up the good work and avoid teasing, I believe this book will get better and better.

I am actually very sure that the author's writing is very good, and it is indeed interesting and creative, but it is best for the system to explode real gold coins, otherwise this poor place will have no output except wood, and it will not even have anything to do with the transportation thoroughfare. When merchants come to trade, most of the money they lose is local gold, and Vietnam's trade economy It may get worse, and the serfs' treatment is very good, but the expenses are too high. In the past, relying on war and plunder was the same as Desan. Now, taking the initiative to attack the orcs is definitely not possible according to normal logic. We can only make major changes to the local economy. Of course, I don't know much about the economy. I just found that this economy is very similar to Desan. It should be possible to revitalize the economy through reform and transformation.

Why did you confess your love to me directly? ! 😨That's not the case in Gala game! 😡You should chat with me more☝ and improve my favorability. Occasionally send me gifts and have special interactions with me on special holidays☺️. Finally, in a mysterious incident in my heart, I confessed to me😮, I agree to be with you☺️, and then I will show you my special CG😃. Why did you just come up and confess to me! 😡? This is not the case at all in the Gala game! 😡I don't accept it! ! 😡😡😡

Luxurious publication! At present, the plot rhythm is stable and moderate, and the male protagonist is neither a eunuch nor a stallion, nor a virgin nor a cruel one. The combat power is not inflated at all. I personally think it is a well-deserved good book in Tomato!

Sofa, I think it's pretty good at least for now [Chigua][Chigua]

It feels like I'm reading a script rather than a movie In short, the author still has ideas, but some settings are not very clear, such as family calculations, system bonuses, etc. Maybe the author wanted to write it as foreshadowing, but these descriptions are a bit too simple, like a skeleton without flesh and blood. It would be much better to have richer descriptions and not be so fragmented. The emotional description is pretty good, quite heartwarming. Come on, author😚 Well, it turns out that the background is set in more than ten chapters of the second volume before the narrative is expanded. However, by the 30th chapter of the first volume, the writing style has improved significantly. It is very good. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you🥰

The writing is really good, and the daily life of love is very sweet.

It's a very good book. I highly recommend reading it. It's very rational and not brainless. I really feel sorry for this book. Why is the rating so low? I hope the author can continue to write more

It is already the best among books of the same type, at least the writing is good.

The quality is very good, come on, big brother who writes books [crying]