Honkai: Star Rail: Case File No. 001

Finally caught up with the latest chapter, I think it's time to evaluate it. Let me talk about the conclusion first, it is very well written. There are many different kinds of humanities in Tomato Railroad, and the quality is also uneven. From all aspects, this article is the best among them, and it is a masterpiece among the masterpieces. The author's choice of material is relatively simple, which is the classic story of boy meeting girl. Maybe it's because it hasn't been connected to the main story yet. The article has a very "everyday" feel. Daily life is actually the most difficult to write about, but the author's delicate writing style can support his choice of materials. The pace of the story is also very comfortable and suitable for careful reading. Let's talk about characterization, first of all the heroine Huang Quan. As a Huangquan chef, I am very moved. The author has added a richer description of Huang Quan while fitting the character design of the original work. The character Huang Quan appeared in a "mature" attitude for the first time in the original work. Her growth path has been omitted, and she is more of a senior who leads the pioneers and provides the protagonist with the whole story. There is nothing wrong with this kind of "strong persona", but if it is just like this, it cannot support the complex core of a character. The screenwriters of Xingtie also knew this, so they added some on- and off-field shaping to Huang Quan. For example, the memories of hometown in the PV, the conversation with Ernan in the main plot, etc. Pixing's Huangquan can be said to be the undercover protagonist. What about the author? She has become the protagonist, and the author has more space to slowly unfold it in daily life, and slowly complete the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. In fact, the author did a good job. He is not obsessed with Huang Quan's single "strong" label but focuses on Huang Quan's character revealed in the original work. The author is portraying not only the powerful Nihilian, but also a beautiful, clumsy, kind-hearted sister Mei with a bit of naivety but the most gentle. What about the original character of the male protagonist Bai Yan? The author actually brought him to life. He is a chaos doctor, but also a healer. Reason and emotion are well balanced in him. I'm just falling in love with this old thing. The most important thing is his tenderness towards Sister Quan. Sure enough, I can't get enough of the story of two-way redemption. There are also some supporting characters who don't have much writing but have distinctive characteristics. As for Ms. Heita, I won't feel sorry for her😃 Finally, I would like to make some suggestions. What I am more concerned about is how Huang Quan will be connected to the main line later. There are still subtle differences between Huang Quan in this article and Huang Quan in the main plot of Pixing. I don't think this is OOC because meeting Bai Yan changed a lot of things about Huang Quan. Will she become the same person in the main story? Even if her name is not remembered, she will still do "meaningless" things. I would like to ask the author to think carefully about the small differences between the current underworld and the underworld on the main railway line. Will she become more selfish for herself and Bai Yan? Will she still say "I won't disturb your date" when she meets Liu Ying and Pioneer alone? These are not actually suggestions, just some small personal thoughts. If the author has taken this into consideration (I believe he will), just think of me as gibbering. Anyway, thank you for bringing such a wonderful work [sending heartfelt thanks]

It is a story about ordinary people. The simple words show that the author has good writing skills. The story unfolds bit by bit. Looking at Bai Yan's daily life as a doctor, one has a sense of déjà vu like watching the long and thin spring water. It is plain but attractive. The only problem: too little!

Calm, daily, and wooden, naturally dull. This book integrates these aspects quite well. It makes people feel calm and comfortable when reading it. In terms of portraying the world of Star Iron, it is not too underestimated because of calm and daily life, whether it is from Bai Yan to becoming a chaos doctor. Later, the understanding of self-destruction and the profile of small and backward planets can show the cruel side of Xingtie Universe. At the same time, it also successfully portrays Bai Yan's sense of responsibility as a doctor to heal others. In other words, it successfully portrays Bai Yan's personality. In terms of emotional description, the emotional portrayal between Huang Quan and Bai Yan is of a steady flow rather than passionate, which matches the narrative rhythm of the book very well. I think the description of Heita and Bai Yan in the middle is also quite interesting, and I am very curious about the subsequent development. All in all, this is a daily novel with delicate emotional descriptions and acceptable characterization. It is worth reading. [OK]

Unlike other Bengtie fanfics, there is not so much fighting and killing, and the protagonist is just a doctor, without any system or cheating power. But the writing is gentle and emotional, making it comfortable to read.

Shockingly delicious! I have been looking for a daily routine that has no system for so long, so I went to Shu Huang Square. As soon as I opened the books on the list, all of them had a system, and I cried. The author is a bit overly modest, and his daily writing is really nice (›´ω`‹). Anyone who is tired of reading the kind of system literature and fan fiction with the collapse of combat power can give it a try. It will make people feel relaxed and relaxed, and there should be no main plot. There is no main plot, which means that it will not follow the main line of the game.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a relatively calm one. It seems that I don't plan to follow the main plot at the moment. To be honest, I'm most afraid of not finishing this kind of article [face covering] Come on

It's very interesting. I just want to give you a suggestion. People who fall into nothingness seem to unconsciously pull everything around them into nothingness, so they don't stay in the same position for too long. It seems to be a setting.

It can be seen that the prison tower has some interest in the protagonist, but the protagonist does not have that interest in her. He is completely focused on studying how to cure Huang Quan's disease. The current protagonist is studying how to cure the disease and has no idea about love and love [Thinking] Well, Lao Ta has feelings for the protagonist, but Lao Ta himself doesn't know it, or he doesn't think it's love, so he blames it on curiosity about the protagonist. The protagonist is just ordinary friends with Hei Ta, and has no love experience, so he doesn't see that Lao Ta's feelings for him are abnormal. He and Huang Quan have feelings for each other, but they don't know it's love [laughter] Huang Quan unintentionally (?) Started to take the initiative to attack. The protagonist also understands this feeling, but brainwashing himself is only necessary for treatment. Maybe it is because Huang Quan has not been cured yet? [Think]

The author's writing style is good, and it has a light sense of daily life. There are no battle scenes, and it is a bit like i Tower TV. However, I feel that Huang Quan's character is a bit OOC. Although I have not known the protagonist for a long time, the protagonist has quite violent mood swings, and because the protagonist can leave the knife with just one sentence. If you can accept it, it is worth watching. It is a well-written single heroine of Huang Quan.

I read Lu Sheng's book before, and I thought it was quite good. I'm going to read the author's new book. The writing is good, there aren't too many fighting parts, but the daily life is very good. Although it is marked as having a single female protagonist, it's really not possible and the roadside tower is not allowed. After reading Chapter 16, I feel that the black tower is heartbroken [face covering]