Honkai: Star Rail: Group Transmigration, My Address Is Earth

Very well written Writing style: Jiangnan bias. The depressive writing style in the first few chapters is correct. If you want to promote, suppress first, and look forward to the subsequent development. Plot: It seems that we are going to take a philosophical route and narrate tragic little characters. I hope it will be more original and focus on the journey of the protagonist rather than the participation of the original plot. Writing style: It has a sense of picture but is not detailed enough. It looks like a narrative. You can change the third-person narration and the amount of description. Use more description and less narration to leave appropriate blank space for readers to arouse thinking. At the same time, the description needs to be condensed and use the fewest words to achieve the purpose of a detailed picture of the environment and characters. Character description: Very distinct, you can continue to polish it and further make the characters come alive. Suggestion: Don't be depressed all the time. You can add a little humor or something. If you can't write humor, give some positive feedback on the plot.

Still shameless enough to give myself a five-star 🙂

*The family is happy, so do you want the protagonist to send away the three members of his family?

There are very few Bengtie stories written from a bottom-level perspective. The plot setting is reasonable and there are no obvious poisonous points. However, it has not yet reflected the differences between the destiny travelers. The technological and humanistic characteristics of the interstellar era are also a bit lacking. Let's see how it is written later. Come on, author!

Another Bengtie fanfic from Laojiang. It is somewhat similar to the previous book but not quite the same. But it's all quite interesting. I just hope the author has a good outline this time.

Pretty good so far

Basically, for most chapters, you only need to read the chapter title and the first page. It doesn't matter whether you read the others 🤦 In the late literary and youth period,,, only increases anxiety, a strong sense of depression, and destroys a good mood.