Harry Potter: After The Chosen One Hears My Thoughts

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! Nice writing! Like! Who knows, when I saw "Harry is based on the original Harry and does not recognize the film version", it only took 0 seconds to fall in love with it. I really liked the original Harry, so I immediately added it to the bookshelf and started reading it. I have seen the latest parts and found no surprises. It is very interesting! ! The description is very delicate and logical, and the plot is also very reasonable. The characters are very consistent with the original work and will not make people feel OOC. Fans of the original work are very satisfied! ! I'm very satisfied with it. It's sweet and peaceful. I like it very much. Harry should be happy. Mabel's image is very three-dimensional (the character setting is quite novel). She has her own way of doing things and feels very real. The interactions with Daphne and others are very heartwarming. They are also very good people. I guarantee you are angels, so it is not a loss to invest! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

It's tied, it's really super invincible and beautiful. There is no deliberate attempt to create a character from the Black Lion House, nor does it conspire to make Dumbledore into a character, nor does it put the Snake House on a high pedestal. I was quite worried when I saw that the heroine was a Snake House, but I was really surprised when I discovered that there is no noble pure-blood noble. Maybelle and Harry are really sweet and cute. The whole article is actually more of a daily cookie. After all, it is Dumbledore and Harry who save the world. I really like this warm writing style, and I also changed the plot of the original work. Moreover, I am really humorous from time to time when reading the author's articles. Some of the sentences make me laugh after reading them. It is really interesting. Highly recommended! And the most important point is that I actually heard the voice of Man Lei. I found this setting quite interesting when I read it before. After reading the novel to find out what the setting was, I found out that it was very uncomfortable. Those who heard the voice of the protagonist basically listened silently without telling the protagonist, and then benefited themselves. Moreover, the voice of the protagonist can be heard by all. At that time, I felt that it was an invasion of privacy. But I really like the handling of the inner voice and Harry's approach in this book. You can't hear it all the time. What you hear is actually the original plot revealed by Mabel. After Harry knows it, he makes it clear to Mabel without reservation. Harry's subsequent behavior also shows his respect for Mabel. When Mabel doesn't want to reveal it to others, he takes the responsibility and says that he dreamed it. Do you know what a golden boy is? I am a Harry Potter person through and through!

I like it very much. The heroine is an atypical Slytherin. I feel that there are very few HP stories where the tomato hero is Harry. This one is simply delicious. It is such a generous secret love. The heroine Mabel has a relatively low sense of presence due to her physical condition, and everyone always forgets about her, but Harry will always remember hehe, and he will always peek (openly) at Mei. And I feel that Harry understands that his feelings are quite fast, even though the heroine hasn't realized it yet... But it's sweet and sweet, hey, I love watching it, please update it soon. The author is big [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I'm going! I'm so cute! Straight balls are the cutest! ! ! Two straight-ball babies! ! ! So sweet to me! ! ! ! ! ! Current progress: Harry expresses his feelings through the ball ❤️, May agrees with Harry's pursuit❤️❤️❤️Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe one's one's heart' ! ! ! Hee hee hee hee hee hee

Such delicate writing style, so in line with the style of the original work, I really like it... Based on my own experience of reading fan fiction for nearly six years, I can tell you without any mincing words that this book is really good! (Although I was almost dissuaded by the title at first, I am very grateful that I chose to click on the introduction to learn about this treasure article.) Although it may be because it is new, I still don't understand why the score is so low. It is completely worthy of a high score of 9 or above... It is not easy to write a poorly written heart story that is extremely enjoyable and lovable. The protagonist finally has the right to know that his voice can be heard... Below I want to talk about some plots that I personally like very much, plus some associations and analysis of the original work and some points that I particularly dislike (in fact, I like all the plots of the work and they are all very enjoyable). Chapter 34: The Meaning of Scars warmed my heart after reading it, and I was still moved by such sincere emotions. What a happy text... (1V1 pure love is awesome!) I thought Harry would hate his scars, but after reading the author's Harry, I realized that I still underestimated Harry's inner tenacity and ability to discover love. It's really in line with the original Harry, not OOC at all. Harry is such a sympathetic and easily considerate person - there is no need to deny the existence of scars, they are one of the driving forces for us to move forward. They not only represent injury, but also represent our inner tenacity. It is amazing to be able to heal ourselves to this extent, isn't it? The author's writing is really amazing. It's exactly what Harry would say in the original book. Because of the early death of his parents and the persecution of Voldemort, his mood is much more mature than others, especially when facing pain. I think in the original book, Harry comforted himself in this way when all his relatives died. The more reasonable it is People who understand how tenacious he is will feel more sorry for him, because his tenacity comes from his pain... It's a bit far-fetched. It is also in these chapters that I think the most annoying thing is the sentence "To be honest, it is completely natural that he would like Mabel, right?" The experiences of the two people seem to be completely different, but in fact, in some way To some extent, they have achieved some complementarity. Mabel seems to be living heartlessly, but in fact, the scar in her heart is always aching. Harry also has such a scar. Although the experience is different, he remembers the feeling of dull pain, so he can sympathize with Mabel. And it is precisely because of the same scar that Mabel You were healed by Harry's words because Harry first comforted Mabel on the basis of empathy as a listener, and even used his own affairs as an example to comfort Mabel in a high-EQ manner, preventing Mabel from feeling that she was being pitied and in a state of inferiority. This man is really super attentive! And Mabel's kind of person who is not bound by scars and is willing to step out of her comfort zone, even if the scars hurt, she will mind the existence of scars, but always maintains her love for life, and her always free and lively attitude is what attracts Harry. Harry envies and even wants to be like this, so he is unconsciously attracted... And then like The little beasts who find each other's wounds generally lick each other's wounds, heal each other, and make each other better... This chapter is really my favorite. I have read it several times, which makes me feel that my understanding of the characters seems to be a little deeper (in fact, I have read other chapters several times, but this one especially) Also, this article is not only limited to the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but also explores the limitations of women in that era and provides several development possibilities. It can be seen that the author has thought carefully about this aspect, which in my opinion is particularly rare in fan fiction. ... Especially HP fanfics nowadays. The ones that are popular now are basically heartthrobs and rarely even have 1v1, let alone fanfics that can analyze the development of women. They mostly complain about this aspect and then write it off in a cursory way and then there is no action. Next, I'm going to talk about my love and hate relationship with Tomato fanfiction. If you don't want to read it, please be careful. A few years ago, because I saw more than one very OOC article on Tomato, and a certain Slytherin Muggle, I had a bad impression of Tomato fanfics, but this article completely broke my stereotype of Tomato fanfics. The author has a good impression of the characters. In particular, the male protagonist Harry in this work has a profound understanding of the characters. There is no plot to whitewash Snape or Draco. The arrogant young master, I still don't understand the meaning of whitewashing the villain) In an era when even humanities are pursuing cool writing and being at peace with OOC, it really makes me see a different scenery. I always think that everyone's understanding of the character is different, but since you don't understand this character and even think that you will inevitably have a more serious OOC, you shouldn't write fan fiction to hurt the eyes of readers. (Speaking of this, I can't help but think of some painful memories...) Thank you very much for reading this. I have talked a lot of useless nonsense for no reason (although I am still talking nonsense), but because it is difficult to find articles that suit my taste and I really really like Harry (but now I like a little plum blossom more), I can't help but talk a lot. This is my first time writing a book review on Tomato and I really didn't expect to write so much (actually, I I have deleted a lot...) Although the author is very diligent, it is really not enough for me to read, so I will give you a small reminder in the end. Of course, the author's healthy schedule should be the first criterion. It would be great if the author posted 1 million updates after I got up from sleep... (Nonsense) But I still hope that the author will not be under too much pressure and just keep updating ˶>ᗜ<˶ Finally, I wish the author will get better and better, Hamei99, I will always follow your goddess! ! Already following, I will taste the author's other works! 😋

This article is really, really delicious, shocking and delicious. Because it is based on the original work and not the original version, it makes it more interesting. The writing is very consistent with the psychology and logic of the characters. It feels like a lot of the plots are smooth and logical, and the connection is very natural, so it doesn't read strange or disconnected. The heroine is very cute, she is like a little angel. Although she has been hurt, she is healing on her own. She has her own ideas when talking and doing things. The values ​​​​are very upright, it looks very comfortable, and it is also very healing to the readers [sending hearts]. It is this kind of daily article that makes people feel warm after reading it. Come on, author, update, added to bookshelf [Blowing Kiss]

Go ahead, it's shocking and delicious, such a delicious fanfic. I'm not Harry's dream girl or anything like that. The romance between May and Harry in this book is completely natural, without any discomfort, and the writing style and characters are really the most consistent with the original fanfic I've ever read. There are no inexplicable whitewashing or conspiracy theories. Moreover, the author has a good grasp of the rhythm, there is no nonsense, and each chapter is large and full of content without being perfunctory, with plots and cookies. Moreover, many of the regrets of the original work have been resolved. I am thinking that Harry in this story is really lucky and happy. This is the life that the savior should live! ! I enjoyed reading it, and the author will update it soon. Wuwuwuwu, Mei and Harry feel better than (), their emotional lines gradually come to a logical end, and it is a rare thing for two people to not lose their brains and personalities even if they fall in love, and they still have their own ideals and lives. It's much better than falling in love suddenly and quickly, right? Uh-huh, my personal opinion is that I don't like being blacklisted.

The writing style of the author is really great, and the expressions are very clear. The twists and turns of the character's character are handled very well, as well as Harry's various little actions of subconsciously watching the little heroine, and the little habits he changed. They are all very, very good, but the writing is a bit too little. Can you update it faster? Goddess, please update it soon... Do you dare to update 100 chapters at once? I'll be shocked [crying]

The writing is very good. Ever since she was seen by Harry, the heroine has been using what she knows to help Harry fight against the Dark Lord. In fact, I don't think there are many romances, most of them are the main plot. The plot of the heroine is a bit sparse, but I don't want the heroine to be involved too much, just giving some clues is enough. The friendship between the heroine and Daphne is written very naturally, which is good. I think it's understandable that Harry likes the heroine, it's quite natural. It's well known that Harry is a beauty control, not to mention that the heroine is really nice. What deserves praise is that 1v1 pure love, no messy feelings. When I write book reviews, there aren't that many romance plots. But since the heroine came to Daphne to have a heart-to-heart talk about her feelings, the two of them fell in love very sweetly. So natural. The heroine is also very generous and generous, and the two of them are very sweet.

Finally, there is a novel that no one criticizes and is basically faithful to the original work! The potter is really a saint. The potter is awesome! It's not about silently listening to your heart and getting benefits, but telling the truth straight away! Be virtuous! Nor is Dumbledore inexplicably black! Good review! There is also coenzyme Slytherin not inexplicably. Snape was dark where he should be dark, and he was not forced to be white. And Draco

This is the author's first book that I read. After catching up on the latest chapter, I read the author's other two HP novels. This one is my favorite among the three books, and it is also one of the best-looking books among the HP fanfics I have read. This Hear Your Heart setting is the first time I have seen it in an HP article, but it has limitations so it doesn't seem too abrupt. The plot is very reasonable and the characters are not OOC. It is my favorite type. After reading the other two novels, I also feel that the author and I have the same views on many characters in the original novels. It's great to have such delicious fanfics. Harry is so cute, and the heroine can enjoy her new life. Harry's emotional line in the original book really didn't have any sense of existence. This time, Harry's emotional line in this book is very well written.