[Original female lead Chloe Dursley] [True Gryffindor] [A touch of a universal crush] Life after you become Harry’s cousin
The Dursleys have twins, and Harry has a cousin.
Follow Chloe Dursley, Xia, through all the little moments of life at Hogwarts: the long tables in the Great Hall, the fireside in the common room, the restricted section of the library, and the wind rushing across the Quidditch pitch. Join the main characters on their adventures. The heroine is clever and brave, makes mistakes, and grows over time.
The war will come, but before then, they’ll eat, play, and get through each day together.
Take your time. This is a proper Hogwarts journey, told from the beginning on Privet Drive.
Hop aboard. Life is sweet, after all. There is a central pairing, and there may be some short alternate-universe pairings later on. The original reason I started writing this was that Hermione needed a close female friend in her little group, and I wanted someone to be there for Harry through his difficult childhood. So the early chapters on Privet Drive may move a little slowly. I won’t whitewash Aunt Petunia, but she is still the person who loves Xia most. If you’re not interested in the Privet Drive chapters, you can skip straight to the second volume, where they start school.
Ahhhhhh! I am completely moved by Penny's love for the heroine. I obviously hate the magical world so much, but just because my daughter wants to go, I endured all the discomfort and reluctance, thought of all aspects, and carefully prepared everything my daughter might need. The mother-daughter relationship between Penny and the heroine is really great. Penny may not have been a great aunt, but she was the best mother.
The writing is good but not popular, the writing style is very delicate, the relationship between the heroine and her family is very real and natural, and the characters are vivid and not OOC. Let's briefly analyze why good articles are not popular. Maybe it's because foreign readers prefer plots with ups and downs? If I have to talk about the shortcomings, firstly, the plot is slow to advance, and I only wrote 20 chapters about my daily life before entering school; secondly, the writing style is dull, undeniably delicate, but it gave me the feeling that the tone of the whole book is dull. Among the other HP fanfics I have read, one is "War, War, War, Kill, Kill, Kill, I'm the Third Generation Black/White Demon King", the other is "The Whole Wizarding World/Hogwarts Has Fallen in Love with Me", and "Su Shuang Mary Sue Golden Finger" is exaggerated, but the tone of the whole book is high-spirited and uplifting. All in all, I read it with gusto and a little bit scared, for fear that the author would kill me in the next chapter🤦
A 350,000-word serial, with five stars for encouragement. I really like Petunia and Quirrell in this story, so it's a bit of a shame that their scenes quickly diminished after the plot point. The story of the second grade is a bit confusing - I mean, I can't figure out the author's intention in writing. Maybe he wants Xia to change his habit of not relying on his peers? But the writing is a little unclear. The story of the third grade is in progress. Perhaps because Xia feels that this year's story is perfect enough, he has no idea of participating in making changes to the plot. People started dying in the fourth grade. I don't know what will happen next, but I'm looking forward to it. Ps: Xia is excellent, Harry is excellent. Long live!
What the teacher writes is really interesting. It is not the same kind of HP fanfic, but truly written with its own characteristics and incorporating its own feelings. The teacher's arrangement is so good, allowing Harry to grow up with his blood relatives, warm, sweet and reassuring [Bird Food Masterpiece] 👍
This book reads slowly and gently. Slowly tells the psychological activities of the protagonist and key characters in detail, and acts from the character's heart. Penny prided herself on being decent and normal. Therefore, Harry, an alien in the normal world, the only child left by her strange sister, made her suffer. But her sister died in a weird space where she could never go, leaving only one child behind, a "Multi" with weird genes. The reason is that the language is gentle. I only read the beginning and could not feel the plot design. The language gave me a different feeling. Like an essay, it is okay to talk about your random thoughts, and read it quietly in a leisurely manner, but it is not a good idea for fast-moving consumer goods such as online novels. However, everyone has their own imagination about Harry Potter. Writing is a kind of sharing, and there is no distinction between good and bad.
Support Harry and Xia's cp. I was very impressed when I watched Alaska's Demon Age before. The reason why Lei Gu and Cassie derived their love from cousins is because their relationship has never been that of brother and sister. Cassie was given to her aunt's family for adoption by her father. Grimmauld 12 has never been her home. She always has to please her obedient master, and Lei Gu is very good to her. The companionship and love she felt in loneliness turned into the love of childhood sweethearts. The same is true for Harry and Xia in this article. As adopted orphans, Harry and Xia were never brothers and sisters with an equal competitive relationship. Harry always paid attention to Xia and longed for Xia's attention. He maintained an appreciative attitude towards Xia's love from his parents, classmates and teachers, and was not jealous. The only thing he minded was that Xia spent less time with him. He wanted to give Xia the best materially and hoped to be with Xia forever. This was completely the way lovers get along. Xia is Harry's home.
It's okay, a smart protagonist, the writing is very good, plain and warm, and it can be seen that the author is very serious about the concept. The only drawback is that I feel that the heroine feels a little alienated, especially from the family. I thought that the heroine will improve the family atmosphere, but Harry is indeed less hurt. Considering that the heroine has traveled through time, it is normal, and the whole article is quite warm.
Nice. Tasty. It can be seen that every character is carefully portrayed, and the daily life of Privet Drive is especially delicious. I stayed up late and finished reading the Privet Drive part. Petunia is really good. Repelling magic is an unsolvable problem left by the mother's generation, and having an extra child is even more of a burden. However, the feelings brought by blood cannot be let go, and Petunia still acquiesces to Harry's existence, and even acquiesces to the children getting along with Harry in their own way, whether it is Dali's bullying or Xia's overtures. Penny's sense of conflict is the core of her character. She rejects magic but longs for it, wants to be separated from magic but remembers the "dementors" she only talked about many years ago, loves Lily but wants to cut off contact with her, hates Harry but acquiesces to her children's friendship with him. Her reason told her that she should choose the "normal" path, but her emotions kept pulling her on another path. Ah, I really like this kind of contradictory person. It's so interesting to explore their inner world.
I feel that the writing is very delicate and the writing is not abrupt. It just feels like it should happen this way.
The emotions are very delicate, and there are real psychological and emotional descriptions of each character, making everything happen naturally. It is these details that make people know that the characters are not empty. They have their own troubles and they are living